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VOTOMS OVA: Phantom Arc
Topic Started: Oct 27 2010, 05:26 AM (3,033 Views)
BROhgamiIchirou
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Well, the people have called on us to do this thing once again, so I suppose it's time to start an official thread here. Below you'll find links to Gen-ei Hen's fourth episodes, as well as two files for the translation. With this, I hope we can get Ep. 4 out by the end of the month. You're up, Gunny.

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OP/ED Translation

Ep 4 Translation
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All right! I'll try to have it done by Monday :D
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Frack Year!!!! BRO-Lord strikes again!!!!
BTW, Should ep 6 be already availablelike, now or soon???
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You mean the Raw, Hal? Episode 6's release date was today, but I don't know just how long it will take to become available.

Anyway, here's my list of fixes, Gun. Sorry; I should have done simple stuff like checking spelling before sending you the first draft.

00:15 - Here the s in VOTOMS needs to be capitalized.

00:35 - In the Romaji lyrics here "ha" should be "wa"

02:35 - Reading through this again, the second "sufficient" seems redundant, so let's change the line to, "If we will suffice, please grant us whatever order you may desire."

Because I had missed a couple parts of the translation here, the conversation between Montewells and the cardinals needs to be changed a bit.

03:15 - I had missed translating a phrase in this line, it should be: "What?! Is that what he said?" (03:17) "If Rochina actually... actually spoke in such a way that-"

03:30 - This line should read, "Indeed, and he was given permission to take off thanks to how he told those on duty."

03:36 - "His craft was on a course to the tip of the N60 gaseous nebula, called "The Horse's Mouth.""

03:56 - A little edit to make this less redundant to what was just said back by the cardinal. "An Alegium vessel is inbound, and looks to be heading toward the Horse Mouth Gas Nebula.

04:43 - Here "plantet" should be "planet."

05:05 - The line here is missing its ending period.

06:54 - Got my verb form mixed up here, resulting in a change in subject. "What a pitiable little thing, having its life threatened from the moment it was born."

07:01 - Another missing period here.

09:51 - The line beginning with "It should be quite..." is timed a little late.

10:42 - "judgement" > "judgment"

12:15 - "millenia" > "millennia"

15:15 - "millenium" > "millennium"

15:27 - In this line "tradition" is misspelled.

15:33 - "Decievers" > "Deceivers"

18:39 - "moreso" > "more so"

19:50 - "millenia" > "millennia"

19:52 - This sentence is missing its exclamation mark.

21:05 - This line needs a little rewrite for clarity. "Because if you do save it, you yourself will have created a new God."

24:15 - After looking some things up and watching parts of Ep. 5, I found that what I thought was "douyou / disturbance" is actually "Doyo," the name of those caterpillar-like creatures. So, the last line of the preview should be, "The Doyo, that cannot allow that child to cry, are coming."

... I think that should be everything.
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All right! Here it is, second attempt:

http://www.mediafire.com/?vv29p581828k2pz

Also on MU, just in case:

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=I7TBUZKL

About ep. 5, though, does anyone have a good raw? I have an .mp4, but it's not very good :( Anybody got it in .avi or anything?

Anyways, if this is good feel free to make a thread on /m/ :D
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I Have the ISO for the 5th OVA, i'm going to upload it.
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*hugz* Thanks Pata :)
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If you need the raw for the 6th episode and it hasn't shown up on share/perfect dark/torrent until then, I can hit the local Tsutaya for rent&rip.
Now I'm going to sing for you that old Bundesbahn Blues.
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That would be nice, Chokutsuu! :D
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