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Daitarn 3 sub project; Please read this
Topic Started: Feb 16 2010, 01:40 PM (6,990 Views)
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Episode 33

1:43: Area X -> Point X ?
1:48: previous expeditions -> previous two expeditions
1:51: new Meganoid prototype -> biological Meganoid
1:55: Your Meganoid is a failure -> Your Meganoid is heretical
4:16: Multifacted prism -> 36 sided/faceted prism
8:00: "Awesome"
12:37: grave -> graves or "don't need a grave"
14:02: What did we decide the computer was called again? Tempted to say Martha, but I can't remember.
14:24 Did you quote this on purpose?
15:42: Lines don't overlap
15:58: "That wasn't much of a fight"
16:01: Lines don't overlap

Next episode title: A succession of robots(mecha)

A couple of lines I haven't mentioned had capitalisation issues.

Dear God this ep was a walking Indiana Jones reference, if it wasn't made several years before the films (I had to look it up). Nice to see some equal oppotunity fanservice. Lol at the Tarzan reference. Garrison in the Daitarn <3
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From your pointers:

-Despite "Area X" sounding way cooler than "Point X" I went with Point anyway. If only so that we can say that Xabungle's "Point X" references Daitarn Episode 33 :D

-Indeed, we decided to call her "Mother" because of how Toppo takes advantage of her "maternal instincts" in episode 28 (Daitarnjack by Commander Bertley!). Episode 28 hadn't gone through your check when I filed in this episode, so that's why I was in doubt.

-"Those four wouldn't die even if you killed them" has been cooked up by SCIENCE!, and probably isn't a coincidence. I thought it was cool and rolled with it after taking a screenshot for use on /m/.

Also, we can't do anything with Garisson's slightly different COME AT ME and BORROWING THE POWER OF THE SUN?

Found one capitalization issue so far. Going for another watch before upload.
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We could give Garrison an old-style formal font? I put the Point X because that's a literal translation but your call. (Hopefully it will not ever be referenced in a later episode)
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Sure, the font's a good idea. I initially thought it would be cool to have him talk old like "Advance upon me!, Lending the brilliance of the Sun!", but then I realized we never bothered to make him use older words previously and he will sound more like some knight than a butler, so unless I re-release all episodes with Garissons speech patterns altered, the oldtype font is a good solution. Any suggestions?

Point X won't ever be referenced again in Daitarn 3. However, in Xabungle...!

Also, I just found out a hideous mistake in our previous release: in the next episode title, we spelled Banjo as Banjou.
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Whew, here we go:
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=ITF06RQB

Garrison font:
http://img840.imageshack.us/i/redcoat.jpg/

Feel free to call off the whole thing if you don't agree with the font. For now, I'm rolling into bed.
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That looks fine, I'll sort release.
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Daitarn 3 Episode 34

2:07: turn of -> turn off, auxiliary reactors -> boosters
2:18: missiles -> rockets
7:32: come out -> head out
10:18: We've spotted some giant meteors
10:23: Beauty, be careful, there's a meteor, a meteor
11:30: Commander -> Commander Anton
11:36: No matter which way they come at us
11:37: on the first try -> in one shot
13:22: They're after us
13:26: Need to comment out the comment
17:39: Attack -> Strategy
18:55: Such overkill of you to project that solid hologram all the way to the moon
19:37: Maybe we should give up -> If we pull away
19:39: (Is fine as is)
20:28: So you'll really an expert, however...
21:49: Capitalisation failure

Next episode title: To the ends of love

Also dear God is the Commander camp. Those chainsaws look awfully familiar. Is it just me or did the mecharobot look like a Mexican wrestler?
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You may not have noticed, but nearly every fight scene from this ep was made up of footage from previous episodes. The Soldiers are piloting Megaborgs that Daitarn already defeated. Guess they couldn't make the schedule for this one!

Sadly, it'll be a day or two before I can wrap this one up. AXSUS double episode with some nightmarish timing and text issues + my RL job.
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S'okay. I'm in no rush.
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Done
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=HIMY76LE

Hah, nearly all action in this episode is made up from the Wong Lee, Wenner and Buncher episodes, but with some nice editing they managed to slap together a cool new story!

Changed all Masa's to Mother (seems to pop up every other episode), in the final episodes they use the same rockets called "Mother Ships". Changed Wanner to Wenner, which corresponds with how the Commander was called in the original episode. Checking this the other way around learns us that kung fu Meganoid Wong Lee's Meganoid form, or Meganoid type name, was "Pars". Cool huh!

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