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| Tweet Topic Started: Aug 27 2005, 05:40 PM (74 Views) | |
| Genie | Aug 27 2005, 05:40 PM Post #1 |
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Knock Knock My knocks repeat for hours, Hours and hours I abuse the door with my anger Punching the door, pulling the door handle Until my knuckles feel swollen- “Once you don’t succeed, get up and try again” Is the motto repeating in my head continuously, Like many say, insanity concurs all Or in my case, obsession invades the mind. A solution I must find, An open window, a hidden key, I run my fingers through the top of the 8 foot door, My legs hang like dry clothes Grasping a rusty key- Yesssssssss My tongue seems to be put on hold, Realising behind this door lie’s Lie’s lies… …what lies behind every past… A memory lane, Dropping the key, I decide to stay the victim of the present, Letting curiosity take over me, Facing the past, needs courage to arise once again, My pace gets faster whilst I walk down concrete steps Running towards the gate, I exit Ghostly Grounds I walk off, hearing an ancient gate creak in the wind. |
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| Lustre | Aug 27 2005, 10:37 PM Post #2 |
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I'm On Top Of The World
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Love that one ;goodjob; Run away from your past and into your future. Ghostly Grounds :o |
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| Canucks fan | Aug 28 2005, 01:53 AM Post #3 |
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Numero uno
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I love it. :) |
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| Genie | Aug 28 2005, 11:03 AM Post #4 |
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aww thank you so much^ made my day! :) |
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| mike Toreno | Aug 28 2005, 11:43 AM Post #5 |
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wow its great |
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| Genie | Aug 28 2005, 02:18 PM Post #6 |
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:rolleyes: Thank you!! |
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| Kaos | Aug 28 2005, 04:43 PM Post #7 |
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I like the line "My legs hang like dry clothes" - To me it sums up the whole poem in a very simple phrase. |
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| Genie | Aug 28 2005, 04:49 PM Post #8 |
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:) Thanks, |
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