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Seeking a trip down..; errm
Topic Started: Aug 27 2005, 05:40 PM (74 Views)
Genie
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Knock Knock
My knocks repeat for hours,
Hours and hours

I abuse the door with my anger
Punching the door, pulling the door handle
Until my knuckles feel swollen-

“Once you don’t succeed, get up and try again”
Is the motto repeating in my head continuously,
Like many say, insanity concurs all
Or in my case, obsession invades the mind.

A solution I must find,
An open window, a hidden key,
I run my fingers through the top of the 8 foot door,
My legs hang like dry clothes
Grasping a rusty key-

Yesssssssss
My tongue seems to be put on hold,
Realising behind this door lie’s

Lie’s lies…

…what lies behind every past…

A memory lane,

Dropping the key,
I decide to stay the victim of the present,
Letting curiosity take over me,
Facing the past, needs courage to arise once again,

My pace gets faster whilst I walk down concrete steps
Running towards the gate,
I exit Ghostly Grounds
I walk off, hearing an ancient gate creak in the wind.


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Lustre
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Love that one ;goodjob; Run away from your past and into your future.

Ghostly Grounds :o
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I love it. :)
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Genie
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aww thank you so much^ made my day! :)
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mike Toreno
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wow its great
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Genie
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mike Toreno,Aug 28 2005
08:43 AM
wow its great

:rolleyes: Thank you!!
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Kaos
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The Cancer for the Cure
I like the line "My legs hang like dry clothes" - To me it sums up the whole poem in a very simple phrase.
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Kaos,Aug 28 2005
01:43 PM
I like the line "My legs hang like dry clothes" - To me it sums up the whole poem in a very simple phrase.

:) Thanks,
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