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Ellipses
Topic Started: Aug 20 2005, 12:39 PM (46 Views)
Kaos
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The Cancer for the Cure
The poem I mentioned, Henna. It's not one of my preferred creations, but heh.

Ellipses

Every now and then we like to join the dots.
Dot
Dot
Dot
And wait for a reply.
Wait for someone to carry on.
Like a child, playing the same game in an activity book
From the ‘FUN PAK!’ that waited on a mahogany table
In the five-star high-society upper-class hotel
Just off the motorway junction, 11 miles from hell,

Where a pair of disillusioned mothers sit
And their children cry in their arms in the bed-sit.
They don’t know where their fathers are, seated
In one of the grandiose wooden-panelled conference rooms
Of the same hotel.

Dot
Dot
Dot
Waiting for someone to pick up the story, and run with it
And tell us of how they tracked them down, proved paternity
And claimed their cut of each man’s over-inflated salary.
Dot
Dot
Dot
Maybe not.
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Matt
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I killed Paulus
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Genie
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;cheers; Yes I get why you mentioned it,

I really like the style its written in, best part

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From the ‘FUN PAK!’ that waited on a mahogany table
In the five-star high-society upper-class hotel
Just off the motorway junction, 11 miles from hell,


Ah You have just inspired me to write another amigo,
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Kaos
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Matt,Aug 20 2005
09:57 AM
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:P

And thanks genie :D
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