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...Tears Drip- Causing Lifes Tsunami to...; owch.
Topic Started: Aug 18 2005, 03:36 PM (68 Views)
Genie
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Drip
Drip
Drip
Three sudden drips soon become
A splash of sadness-
Splash
Splash
Splash
3 splashes soon become
The sea of misery-
With such little splashes of happiness-
Slowly,
Sadly,
Hopelessly….




….Tragically

One more wave floods your world-

Bringing you into the 7 poisoned seas,

An entrance, but no exit, your voice echoes…



Your thoughts drift-



Drowned by Life’s Tsunami.
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Kaos
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Urgh, that's freaky, I wrote a similar poem about a month ago, different topic entirely, but using the tripartite very similarly...Though it was Dot and Tap, not Drip and Splash...and the poem was about elipises, which you use a lot of there. :uns: Sorry, that freaked me out :P I'll have to dig that one up and post it at some stage.

Nice poem, strange to come long after the Tsunami was making headlines, is it an old one? Your style is somehow curiously off-centre, in a way that reminds me of a poet I was reading about a month ago. I think it was Sujata Bhatt.
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Kaos,Aug 18 2005
02:54 PM
Urgh, that's freaky, I wrote a similar poem about a month ago, different topic entirely, but using the tripartite very similarly...Though it was Dot and Tap, not Drip and Splash...and the poem was about elipises, which you use a lot of there. :uns: Sorry, that freaked me out :P I'll have to dig that one up and post it at some stage.

Nice poem, strange to come long after the Tsunami was making headlines, is it an old one? Your style is somehow curiously off-centre, in a way that reminds me of a poet I was reading about a month ago. I think it was Sujata Bhatt.

No No it was only written this evening, Wow you better find it and post it lol that was a shock, did she right a poem in the Anthology that you do your GCSE'S with something to do with bengali or another language?

Thanks, :)
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;worship; Henna, that is a nice poem ;goodjob;
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Lustre,Aug 18 2005
06:01 PM
;worship; Henna, that is a nice poem ;goodjob;

Why, thank you. :wub:
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Ummm I think there was an extract from Search for my Tongue in there. But meh.
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Kaos,Aug 19 2005
10:19 AM
Ummm I think there was an extract from Search for my Tongue in there. But meh.

Me confused, was search for the tongue not written by Mrs.Bhatt? Oh were you on about another poem written by her,
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I wasn't referring to that poem particularly. I just meant the way you write, your voice, reminds me of her. I think it's her I'm thinking of anyway. I wasn't referring to that poem, just her style of writing in general.
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Kaos,Aug 20 2005
08:52 AM
I wasn't referring to that poem particularly. I just meant the way you write, your voice, reminds me of her. I think it's her I'm thinking of anyway. I wasn't referring to that poem, just her style of writing in general.

ah I see, dodo me, I think she's like from the same cultur/background as me any how...
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