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Winter-; I feel you.
Topic Started: Aug 2 2005, 02:48 PM (67 Views)
Genie
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A bridge,
Afloat in the air
Drifting side to side,
Whilst I rock,
My heart senses you-
The cold snow touching a glum cheek
The howling wind unfolding my palm
Travelling through me a sensation
Finally the frost smothers my lips-

I feel you
Winter-
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That's really good!


I don't really want to be thinking about winter just yet, but yeah, I like that poem.
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I really like that Henna!! Good poem, makes you want winter to be here.
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aww thanks guys Mwah xxx Yes it was on about Winter but underneath it a dark love story, the parts

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The cold snow touching a glum cheek
The howling wind unfolding my palm
Travelling through me a sensation
Finally the frost smothers my lips-


Is the girl imagining her bf, he is described as winter because she can't seem to stop loving him but knows its not right to, so he is described as winter.

However also outside is winter not just weather wise, but she has isolated herself from the world far away from her loved ones. In a dream world.
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genie,Aug 3 2005
07:29 AM

Is the girl imagining her bf, he is described as winter because she can't seem to stop loving him but knows its not right to, so he is described as winter.


Awwwww :(


I was thinking maybe he was just being cold to her and she was thinking it as a dream to warm up her heart.
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Lustre,Aug 4 2005
05:44 PM
genie,Aug 3 2005
07:29 AM

Is the girl imagining her bf, he is described as winter because she can't seem to stop loving him but knows its not right to, so he is described as winter.


Awwwww :(


I was thinking maybe he was just being cold to her and she was thinking it as a dream to warm up her heart.

Oops no.... :lol:
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