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A perfect feeling, later to regret feeling it.; *tuts*
Topic Started: Jul 5 2005, 09:48 AM (63 Views)
Genie
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This is like 15 minute worth, its different again to my usual poetry, but I cant seem to write my usual poetry, dont ask people, its back to my life again, enjoy it anyway!



“Put your hands up in the air”
“Shake your bodies like you don’t care”

The perfect feeling-
On a Friday night,
So appealing,
A glamorous dress, shining silvery bright,
A dance floor,
Anxiously, on the other side, a burning flame!
Wondering, what lies in the core?
You, decide to play the “Friday night game”

“In da club”
***Is what you want to feel,
Yes, forget, him…He’ll come to the club if he wants you back.
Why should you always have to crack-
Into tears,**


The perfect atmosphere-
Smoky, Blazing, Steaming,
Now, to somehow, get your drunken body to the other side,
Dragging, yourself, in front of his eyes, you start beaming
Hell no. Where’s your Pride?
Blame it on the ecstasy,
when you wake up in his bed.
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Lustre
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wow Henna, totally different from anything I read from you before. I felt like dancing reading it :)

Didn't see that last part coming.

Good title, good stuff Henna :)
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Genie
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Lustre,Jul 5 2005
06:27 PM
wow Henna, totally different from anything I read from you before. I felt like dancing reading it :)

Didn't see that last part coming.

Good title, good stuff Henna :)

Yes its a change, part of my life was in there apparently, :( , and part of my friends..

Thanks, yes unfortunately all my poetry messes up at the end in our days..
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Lustre
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awwwww, it wasn't messed up in the end, I just didn't see that part coming. That was a strong ending.
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Genie
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Mwah thanks!!!
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~*Dani*~
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Unusual, but good. Another great one! :)
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Genie
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~*Dani*~,Jul 12 2005
08:22 AM
Unusual, but good. Another great one! :)

haha tha again,
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