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A message within a dream,; Personal so a little confusing.
Topic Started: Jun 24 2005, 04:49 PM (56 Views)
Genie
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I have to warn you all first, this is a bad poem, its not actually written as my usual passionate poetry is because this is suppose to be a message to someone, and so its very confusing to understand, but hopefully it will work since im no good with my feelings :( But still enjoy!

It was just a dream with you,
A dream which seemed so true,

For the future to come,
I simply stand,
With a white flag,
Knowing, nothing but the feeling of emptiness,

I had the strangest Vision,
The strangest message,
The strangest feeling,
Within this dream,

A sea of emotions
A mind of commotions
Signs everywhere,
Showing me your obsession
With this unborn blessing,

Words, seem to melt upon my tongue,
Every time I open my mouth,
Wishing my words would flow-
With truth

I simply write this poem,
Feeling selfish,
But determined to tell you-
Determined to let ink dab across
This white crinkly sheet,

Look into this glass ball,
Yes, stop and stall.
Slowly the snow falls,
Slowly the little figure twirls,
Slowly, this world freezes,
Within this glass ball,
A little child awaits a saviour.

Nor is it me
Nor is it you.

A bond as great as love exists between you two,
But I beg and plead,
Do not let this dream become true.
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Lustre
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wow Henna, if it is meant for someone, they will get the idea. If you can't tell this person "Wishing my words would flow- With truth" they will get it from your poem. Good stuff though Henna, you are talented.
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Genie
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Lustre,Jun 24 2005
07:02 PM
wow Henna, if it is meant for someone, they will get the idea. If you can't tell this person "Wishing my words would flow- With truth" they will get it from your poem. Good stuff though Henna, you are talented.

Hopefully, *fingers crossed* there was nothing but truth in it anyway...

Glad you liked it! :)
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~*Dani*~
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Wow henna, that is pretty good! :D
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Genie
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~*Dani*~,Jun 27 2005
02:18 PM
Wow henna, that is pretty good! :D

Thanks honey!
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