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| Untitled/Good Days; set of 2 poems | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 17 2005, 09:45 AM (44 Views) | |
| ~*Dani*~ | Jun 17 2005, 09:45 AM Post #1 |
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Poem 1:Untitled If you have to do it, do it if you believe you will get through it, if you have to see it, see it it doesnt mean youll ever have to be it, if you have to hear it, hear it it doesnt mean you'll ever fear it, if you have to try it, try it you wont die if you dont get by it, if you have to live it, live it and when you feel the love, just give it. Short, simple, and currently looking for a title! Poem 2:Good Days Bring on the good days that i can enjoy in many different ways and so can every girl and boy, take away the poverty that many people try to deal with, with their family but sometimes it makes them cry, let the good times come to people, hand in hand even though, sometimes these things are barely even planned, if the world could be more positive in every single way, more people wuld be lucky enough to live so bring on the good days! Title is good there, open for suggestions to both poems! ^_^ |
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| Genie | Jun 17 2005, 02:42 PM Post #2 |
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How about for the first one "Give and Take in Life" :( The second ones pretty emo, I like how the first one carries on, very sassy! However the second ones my favourite! :wub: |
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| Aislynne | Jun 17 2005, 05:40 PM Post #3 |
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I love them both! It reminds me of a famous quote which I don't remember verbatim off the top of my head, but it's still wonderful. The second one has more of a sense of hope, in my opinion, than an emo feel to it. These are great, Dani! I LUUUURRRVVVEEEE them. XD |
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| ~*Dani*~ | Jun 19 2005, 10:16 AM Post #4 |
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Yea, the first one should be called "Give and Take in Life". In my opinion, the second one still outshines it, though. Thanks for the title, Henna! Thanks for the comments, both of you! ^_^ |
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