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Untitled/Good Days; set of 2 poems
Topic Started: Jun 17 2005, 09:45 AM (44 Views)
~*Dani*~
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Poem 1:Untitled
If you have to do it, do it
if you believe you will get through it,
if you have to see it, see it
it doesnt mean youll ever have to be it,
if you have to hear it, hear it
it doesnt mean you'll ever fear it,
if you have to try it, try it
you wont die if you dont get by it,
if you have to live it, live it
and when you feel the love, just give it.

Short, simple, and currently looking for a title!

Poem 2:Good Days
Bring on the good days
that i can enjoy
in many different ways
and so can every girl and boy,
take away the poverty
that many people try
to deal with, with their family
but sometimes it makes them cry,
let the good times come
to people, hand in hand
even though, sometimes these things
are barely even planned,
if the world could be more positive
in every single way,
more people wuld be lucky enough to live
so bring on the good days!

Title is good there, open for suggestions to both poems! ^_^
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Genie
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How about for the first one

"Give and Take in Life" :(


The second ones pretty emo, I like how the first one carries on, very sassy! However the second ones my favourite! :wub:
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Aislynne
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I love them both! It reminds me of a famous quote which I don't remember verbatim off the top of my head, but it's still wonderful. The second one has more of a sense of hope, in my opinion, than an emo feel to it. These are great, Dani! I LUUUURRRVVVEEEE them. XD
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~*Dani*~
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Yea, the first one should be called "Give and Take in Life". In my opinion, the second one still outshines it, though. Thanks for the title, Henna! Thanks for the comments, both of you! ^_^
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