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Lazy River : Poem
Topic Started: Jun 15 2005, 03:13 PM (69 Views)
Aislynne
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I'm not sure why I wrote this. Bored, maybe?

Lazy River


Lazy river,
Where do you flow?
Down the mountains that make me shiver,
To the valleys lying below.

Oh, lazy river, how I wish,
I could float away,
Careless as the fish,
If only for today.

Oh, lazy river, in the shade,
I can rest on the comfort of your banks,
What a masterpiece God has made,
Where I can sleep, you're mine to thank.

Oh lazy river,
Put the dying to rest,
You ancient years echo in the mountains,
They pound deep in my chest.

Youth is but a state of mind,
You're only as old as your despair and fear,
Sitting by this river, unwind,
I feel I will last another year.
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Genie
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lalalala I like it! Very cool amigo,
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Aislynne
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Thanks ^_^; It's one of my more light-hearted ones....
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Aislynne,Jun 15 2005
12:23 PM
Thanks ^_^; It's one of my more light-hearted ones....

lol moi likes light hearted ones! :wub:
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Ooh, I like it! Very cool...especially the title, man. Lazy river!
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Aislynne
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XD Thanks. I got the name from a ride in Water Country. It's really nice. Just sit in a tube and let the day sweep you away. Though this obvious is quite different. I'm so glad you like it though, it's great to hear.
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~*Dani*~
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Very well written :D
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Aislynne
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Thank you ^_^; I usually don't write stuff so... light-hearted but it's a nice change.
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~*Dani*~
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It is a nice change. You can write awesome poetry, wether it's light-hearted or not. :)
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Aislynne
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Aww, thank you. Same goes for you!
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~*Dani*~
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Aw, youre sweet...and i love your poetry...
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Aislynne
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Your poems rock though. They really do.
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~*Dani*~
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And so do you. I rock, you rock, we all rock. :)
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Lustre
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I missed this one, like it Aislynne :) Excellent
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Aislynne
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Yep, we all rock Dani.

Thanks for the review, Lustre ^_^; Glad ya' liked it.
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