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| Lazy River : Poem | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 15 2005, 03:13 PM (69 Views) | |
| Aislynne | Jun 15 2005, 03:13 PM Post #1 |
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I'm not sure why I wrote this. Bored, maybe? Lazy River Lazy river, Where do you flow? Down the mountains that make me shiver, To the valleys lying below. Oh, lazy river, how I wish, I could float away, Careless as the fish, If only for today. Oh, lazy river, in the shade, I can rest on the comfort of your banks, What a masterpiece God has made, Where I can sleep, you're mine to thank. Oh lazy river, Put the dying to rest, You ancient years echo in the mountains, They pound deep in my chest. Youth is but a state of mind, You're only as old as your despair and fear, Sitting by this river, unwind, I feel I will last another year. |
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| Genie | Jun 15 2005, 03:20 PM Post #2 |
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lalalala I like it! Very cool amigo, |
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| Aislynne | Jun 15 2005, 03:23 PM Post #3 |
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Thanks ^_^; It's one of my more light-hearted ones.... |
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| Genie | Jun 15 2005, 04:16 PM Post #4 |
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lol moi likes light hearted ones! :wub: |
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| Silver | Jun 15 2005, 04:19 PM Post #5 |
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Ooh, I like it! Very cool...especially the title, man. Lazy river! |
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| Aislynne | Jun 15 2005, 04:45 PM Post #6 |
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XD Thanks. I got the name from a ride in Water Country. It's really nice. Just sit in a tube and let the day sweep you away. Though this obvious is quite different. I'm so glad you like it though, it's great to hear. |
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| ~*Dani*~ | Jun 16 2005, 08:59 AM Post #7 |
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Very well written :D |
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| Aislynne | Jun 16 2005, 09:29 AM Post #8 |
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Thank you ^_^; I usually don't write stuff so... light-hearted but it's a nice change. |
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| ~*Dani*~ | Jun 16 2005, 09:46 AM Post #9 |
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It is a nice change. You can write awesome poetry, wether it's light-hearted or not. :) |
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| Aislynne | Jun 16 2005, 11:22 AM Post #10 |
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Aww, thank you. Same goes for you! |
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| ~*Dani*~ | Jun 17 2005, 09:30 AM Post #11 |
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Aw, youre sweet...and i love your poetry... |
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| Aislynne | Jun 17 2005, 05:26 PM Post #12 |
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Your poems rock though. They really do. |
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| ~*Dani*~ | Jun 19 2005, 10:28 AM Post #13 |
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And so do you. I rock, you rock, we all rock. :) |
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| Lustre | Jun 19 2005, 08:35 PM Post #14 |
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I missed this one, like it Aislynne :) Excellent |
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| Aislynne | Jun 21 2005, 04:22 PM Post #15 |
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Yep, we all rock Dani. Thanks for the review, Lustre ^_^; Glad ya' liked it. |
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