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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 15 2005, 01:50 PM (76 Views) | |
| Genie | Jun 15 2005, 01:50 PM Post #1 |
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At any distance, I will hold my hand out to you- unfolding my palm All you have to do... is grasp it tight! When you do, up my arm, to my heart, pumped around my body, will be life's greatest gift, You are my oxygen, my life, with every touch, with every glimpse with every smile with every blink- My heart will pump... Im, Truly yours, Im sorry everyone, im really emotional so my poetry sucks horribly, I shouldnt post it really, ignore this one and the rose one ;cry; |
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| Silver | Jun 15 2005, 02:41 PM Post #2 |
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I really liked this! I think that you really feel what you write--you're not just putting words down onto paper to make them sound good. I especially like this part here: I will hold my hand out to you- unfolding my palm All you have to do... is grasp it tight! Very good poem, keep at it! :) |
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| Genie | Jun 15 2005, 02:43 PM Post #3 |
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aww wow thanks, im glad I please you with that poem, its not my usual kind of poem you see, |
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| ~*Dani*~ | Jun 16 2005, 09:12 AM Post #4 |
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It's really good, even though it's not your usual kind of poem. But sometimes trying different things works out. It did for you :) |
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| Genie | Jun 16 2005, 03:44 PM Post #5 |
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Glad you realised that. :) , it isnt, but I took like 5 minutes approx on it because I wrote it for someone, and I thought it sounded not me, but hay, thanks a lot! |
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| Lustre | Jun 16 2005, 08:37 PM Post #6 |
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I will never ignore any of your poems Henna. You are being too critical on yourself. That is a very emotional and devoted poem. Awesome!!! :) |
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| ~*Dani*~ | Jun 17 2005, 09:17 AM Post #7 |
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I agree with every word^ Your poetry rocks! :D |
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| Genie | Jun 17 2005, 01:16 PM Post #8 |
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AWW THANKS DANI AND LARRY! Matt loved it.. :o |
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| Lustre | Jun 18 2005, 11:12 PM Post #9 |
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well if Matt loved it, that's all that matters :) |
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| Genie | Jun 19 2005, 06:28 AM Post #10 |
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Tha hon, |
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| ~*Dani*~ | Jun 19 2005, 10:03 AM Post #11 |
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Im glad Matt loved it. :) |
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