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Your beauty comes at a price!; 5 minutes work.
Topic Started: Jun 15 2005, 12:54 PM (82 Views)
Genie
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Your beauty comes at a price,
A beautiful rose stands,
Proudly, staggeringly on the window pane,
facing the audience it has to please!

From a distance,
This rose is a womens smile,
A mans stride,
Standing beauty,
Blessed to the world!

But...
What happens when,
you come close to this beauty?
When you lay hands upon it?
Inner beauty it has,
Outer beauty it has,
One thing which pricks me each time,

are your thorns.


This is actually written in abouts under 5 minutes for my bf to tell him how I feel, were having a few problems you see, so I dont expect you guys to like this one, but still I do hope you do
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~*Dani*~
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Oh, it's good. It is very good. Why would you expect me not to like it? I love all of your poetry. :)
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Genie
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~*Dani*~,Jun 16 2005
06:14 AM
Oh, it's good. It is very good. Why would you expect me not to like it? I love all of your poetry. :)

aww thanks, because to me it was rubbish... :(
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Lustre
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oh Henna, thorns, ouch. I like that one Henna. Hope things are better with Matt so you can write a happier poem.
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~*Dani*~
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So do I^
U rock Henna! :)
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Genie
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awww thank you guys! *hugs*
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Lustre
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*hugs* right back :)
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DeE
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Luv your poem, very nice. Your sig rocks too.
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DeE,Jun 23 2005
08:05 PM
Luv your poem, very nice. Your sig rocks too.

Tha honey, thanks lol.
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