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| Your beauty comes at a price!; 5 minutes work. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 15 2005, 12:54 PM (82 Views) | |
| Genie | Jun 15 2005, 12:54 PM Post #1 |
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Your beauty comes at a price, A beautiful rose stands, Proudly, staggeringly on the window pane, facing the audience it has to please! From a distance, This rose is a womens smile, A mans stride, Standing beauty, Blessed to the world! But... What happens when, you come close to this beauty? When you lay hands upon it? Inner beauty it has, Outer beauty it has, One thing which pricks me each time, are your thorns. This is actually written in abouts under 5 minutes for my bf to tell him how I feel, were having a few problems you see, so I dont expect you guys to like this one, but still I do hope you do |
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| ~*Dani*~ | Jun 16 2005, 09:14 AM Post #2 |
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Oh, it's good. It is very good. Why would you expect me not to like it? I love all of your poetry. :) |
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| Genie | Jun 16 2005, 03:43 PM Post #3 |
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aww thanks, because to me it was rubbish... :( |
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| Lustre | Jun 16 2005, 08:34 PM Post #4 |
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I'm On Top Of The World
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oh Henna, thorns, ouch. I like that one Henna. Hope things are better with Matt so you can write a happier poem. |
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| ~*Dani*~ | Jun 17 2005, 09:12 AM Post #5 |
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So do I^ U rock Henna! :) |
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| Genie | Jun 17 2005, 02:29 PM Post #6 |
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awww thank you guys! *hugs* |
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| Lustre | Jun 19 2005, 08:32 PM Post #7 |
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*hugs* right back :) |
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| DeE | Jun 23 2005, 11:05 PM Post #8 |
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Luv your poem, very nice. Your sig rocks too. |
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| Genie | Jun 24 2005, 11:33 AM Post #9 |
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Tha honey, thanks lol. |
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