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Hangnail Memories; Beware=slightly messed up O_o
Topic Started: Jun 14 2005, 07:39 PM (53 Views)
~*Dani*~
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I have just got a hangnail
it may not be meant to be,
but it hurts little, in compare
to the pain inside of me.
The hangnail in my mind
would be something quite unplanned,
it would be a quick feeling or impulse
that I could barely understand.
But now I tear the hangnail
as I cry in bed at night,
this is the thing I cannot fail
this is doing what is right.
Now Ive turned my life around
things no longer hurt so much,
but once in a while, I get a hangnail
and shiver as it, I touch.
this hangnail is just a memory
that cuts me like a knife,
but I smile because I know that inside of me,
that hangnail wont be there for life.
although one will be inside someday
I will be ready to deal,
I have just got a hangnail,
but the pain is something I can heal

Different, isnt it? I dont try symbolism too often.
I welcome suggestions, questions, concerns, comments, etc! :)
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Lustre
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that was different, and was interesting to me, I like the hangnail symbolism. Great job again Dani :)
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Genie
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Lustre,Jun 14 2005
06:51 PM
that was different, and was interesting to me, I like the hangnail symbolism. Great job again Dani :)

I agree with Sir Larry I liked it because it was very original, I have not come across that before!

Good job!
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~*Dani*~
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Thanks. Sometimes i really dont know what im doing, but somehow, it all makes sense in the end.
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genie,Jun 15 2005
08:08 AM

..Sir Larry ...


ahem, that's Madame Larry to you:P


you're welcome Dani :) Keep writing :D
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~*Dani*~
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Ha ha^
I will :)
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