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Memory Shelf; different, much symbolism
Topic Started: Jun 14 2005, 07:30 PM (48 Views)
~*Dani*~
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I put my memories on a shelf,
I fill it everyday,
with loving memories from friends
and what wont go away.
the memories of my friends are nice
all the good times we shared sure were great,
im not sure how we wound up all together,
but maybe this occurance was fate.
The memories of lost loved ones hurt sometimes
I remember how I saw them that day,
and though their love is held in a heart that's mine
how I felt wont truely go away.
But right now it's cleaning time
time to wipe away the dust and stuff,
I can put the bad memories at the back of my mind,
and for now, the good ones are really enough.

Lots of room for improvement. Suggestions and comments are welcome! As well as other messages regarding the poem or overall topic.
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Lustre
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Very good Dani :D Missing old friends is hard and they will never leave your heart.
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Genie
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awww lovely!
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~*Dani*~
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Thanks guys. I guess words put together from the collection of what is floating around in my head can look good sometimes. I write my poetry very quickly. I dont know how to explain it. it's like i think of a poem topic i could do and it blooms into lines. I always title poems last. Thanks again :)
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Aislynne
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I love it! So relatable. Nice work!
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~*Dani*~
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Well, after that, im just glad to still be considered a human. It's really not my best guys...
but thanks :)
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