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Sensational Drowning?Hell no.; Im sorry if it sucks, emoness invades me
Topic Started: Jun 14 2005, 12:46 PM (57 Views)
Genie
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Swept into a vortex,
My body turns numb,
My thoughts freeze-
Upon this moment,
My heart beats weaken,
No longer can I lay my hand upon my chest to feel them,
Pale skin,
Blue quivering lips,
My body shudders,
Drowning in my fearful thoughts…
I slip away from safety…

Hour by hour,

Minute by minute

Second by second

Slowly, painfully, sadly, full of fear-
I pass through to you..
Drowning every day, in your world…

The sensation you suggested,
was just another “escape route” for you…
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~*Dani*~
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I really love these lines:
Drowning in my fearful thoughts…
I slip away from safety…
It's like life, in a way. it's actually very good! :)
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Lustre
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oh my Henna!!! ;up; that was strong, Excellent
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Genie
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~*Dani*~,Jun 14 2005
03:28 PM
I really love these lines:
Drowning in my fearful thoughts…
I slip away from safety…
It's like life, in a way. it's actually very good! :)

Yes it is, them lines I wrote because I was thinking of people who try to escape from it all by cutting and everything so what I did, I thought of when ive been depressed(which is hardly ever) and ive thought of something so much that I realise im entering a depressing world of my own, thats why I say "I slip away from saftety" this poem is suppose to be very pschological

Thanks a lot hon!

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oh my Henna!!!  that was strong, Excellent


hahah thanks Larry, glad you liked it!
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~*Dani*~
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I like the meaning that all of your poems could have to other people. You really write from your heart.
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