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| Sensational Drowning?Hell no.; Im sorry if it sucks, emoness invades me | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 14 2005, 12:46 PM (57 Views) | |
| Genie | Jun 14 2005, 12:46 PM Post #1 |
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Swept into a vortex, My body turns numb, My thoughts freeze- Upon this moment, My heart beats weaken, No longer can I lay my hand upon my chest to feel them, Pale skin, Blue quivering lips, My body shudders, Drowning in my fearful thoughts… I slip away from safety… Hour by hour, Minute by minute Second by second Slowly, painfully, sadly, full of fear- I pass through to you.. Drowning every day, in your world… The sensation you suggested, was just another “escape route” for you… |
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| ~*Dani*~ | Jun 14 2005, 06:28 PM Post #2 |
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I really love these lines: Drowning in my fearful thoughts… I slip away from safety… It's like life, in a way. it's actually very good! :) |
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| Lustre | Jun 14 2005, 09:47 PM Post #3 |
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oh my Henna!!! ;up; that was strong, Excellent |
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| Genie | Jun 15 2005, 11:17 AM Post #4 |
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Yes it is, them lines I wrote because I was thinking of people who try to escape from it all by cutting and everything so what I did, I thought of when ive been depressed(which is hardly ever) and ive thought of something so much that I realise im entering a depressing world of my own, thats why I say "I slip away from saftety" this poem is suppose to be very pschological Thanks a lot hon!
hahah thanks Larry, glad you liked it! |
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| ~*Dani*~ | Jun 16 2005, 09:22 AM Post #5 |
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I like the meaning that all of your poems could have to other people. You really write from your heart. |
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