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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 13 2005, 01:59 PM (65 Views) | |
| Genie | Jun 13 2005, 01:59 PM Post #1 |
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In all translucent loveliness a moment of beauty Is captured by these eyes, Staggering within the heavenly skies- Upon ethereal Surreal Wings, She flies towards Two lonesome angels, Who unite… Under the blossoming tree Every full moon, Blossoming they loving bond for a spectacular moment Separated for eternity, This hidden love shall stay protected, |
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| ~*Dani*~ | Jun 13 2005, 05:22 PM Post #2 |
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Wow. You are a very good poet. :) |
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| Lustre | Jun 13 2005, 09:44 PM Post #3 |
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I agree with Dani, you are a great poet!!! Awesome!!!! Love that last line :) |
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| Genie | Jun 14 2005, 10:19 AM Post #4 |
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Thank you very much hon,
Aww thanks Larry :) |
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| ~*Dani*~ | Jun 14 2005, 07:55 PM Post #5 |
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It is not easy to communicate imagery(sp?) through poetry, but in your poems, you manage to do so flawlessly. |
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| Genie | Jun 15 2005, 11:12 AM Post #6 |
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Believe me its taken years to get better and your imagination has to flow! |
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| ~*Dani*~ | Jun 16 2005, 09:56 AM Post #7 |
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I know what you mean, ive written lots of poems, but sometimes my messages still come out screwed up. Sometimes you've just gotta let yourself go and pour your imagination into your poetry. You managed to do that very well in this poem. |
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