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Hidden Lovers; Seperated but still loving each other..
Topic Started: Jun 13 2005, 01:59 PM (65 Views)
Genie
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In all translucent loveliness
a moment of beauty
Is captured by these eyes,
Staggering within the heavenly skies-

Upon ethereal
Surreal
Wings,
She flies towards
Two lonesome angels,
Who unite…
Under the blossoming tree
Every full moon,
Blossoming they loving bond for a spectacular moment

Separated for eternity,
This hidden love shall stay protected,
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~*Dani*~
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Wow. You are a very good poet. :)
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Lustre
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I agree with Dani, you are a great poet!!! Awesome!!!! Love that last line :)
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Genie
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~*Dani*~,Jun 13 2005
02:22 PM
Wow. You are a very good poet. :)

Thank you very much hon,


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I agree with Dani, you are a great poet!!! Awesome!!!! Love that last line




Aww thanks Larry :)
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~*Dani*~
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It is not easy to communicate imagery(sp?) through poetry, but in your poems, you manage to do so flawlessly.
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~*Dani*~,Jun 14 2005
04:55 PM
It is not easy to communicate imagery(sp?) through poetry, but in your poems, you manage to do so flawlessly.

Believe me its taken years to get better and your imagination has to flow!
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~*Dani*~
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I know what you mean, ive written lots of poems, but sometimes my messages still come out screwed up. Sometimes you've just gotta let yourself go and pour your imagination into your poetry. You managed to do that very well in this poem.
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