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The Accident; Poem
Topic Started: Jun 7 2005, 06:22 PM (44 Views)
~*Dani*~
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I am not sure why I wrote this. probably because I am very against drunk driving.

I went to a party last night,
it sure was a lot of fun,
little did I realize,
this would be my final one.
I drove away, and suddenly,
bright lights blocked my way,
I spun around and hit a tree,
on my final living day.
Well, i'm gripping tightly, grasping,
at this horrifying end,
blood covers my clothes, im gasping,
this is my life i try to defend.
I can feel the pain consume me,
like a great white shark,
the mistake he made, to drink and drive,
has truely left it's mark.
Im not sure this is what he meant to do,
as he was flying high,
Im not sure he knew the consequence,
was that I would have to die.
So please let me live on in the hearts of many,
like a shining, bright star true,
for my soul still soars just like a bird,
and I pray it soars to all of you.

Comments and questions are welcome! :)
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Aislynne
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*Claps* That is so much better than the one I tried to write having to do with the same thing. I love it - it's breathtaking. It's sad, and the flow moves well so each and every line sticks with you easily. I love it.
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Lustre
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Awesome Dani!!! My cousin died cuz of a drunk driver.
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Genie
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My 15 year old step uncle died of a driver speeding as well, ;cry;

Its good!
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~*Dani*~
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Wow, im sorry about the pain that drunk driving must have caused you guys. If only people knew better.
Thanks for the comments.
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