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Melodrama at first sight!; Lust ?Yes.
Topic Started: Jun 1 2005, 02:42 PM (136 Views)
Genie
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Ah, love, this is thy wondrous art,
to freeze the tongue and fire the heart.
Words melt upon my tongue-
My lip quivers-
whilst I deeply stare
Into an ocean of blue,
Lavender aroma! Breathtaking!
Your essence awakens this lifeless heart!
The heavens arch upon you my darling!
As your auburn hair flow-
I lay still mesmerising over your goddess like figure!

A frozen mind is useless!
A silent man is helpless!
One glimpse
Is all it takes……?
for this man to stumble forever
over this reverberating feeling!
Her name,
weakens my knees…
Aphrodite!
I bellow,
Joys ebb and flow within my tender heart.
Your palms open,
Anemone petals appear…


Scuffling of the autumn leaves…
Leave me waiting
For your presence once again!


This poem is about a helpless man who thinks he is in love, but really its nothing but lust, but I decided to make it very dramatic, with old English, enjoy!
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Another awesome one!
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I agree, that's awesome. Awwww poor guy. Lust :angry:

Loved these sentences (don't know the proper word):


to freeze the tongue and fire the heart.
Words melt upon my tongue

Lavender aroma! Breathtaking!

A frozen mind is useless!
A silent man is helpless!


Great stuff Henna. This may by your best one yet ;up; That Old English is excellent!!!

How do you think up these ideas?




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03:15 PM
Another awesome one!

aww thanks honey!

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I agree, that's awesome. Awwww poor guy. Lust 

Loved these sentences (don't know the proper word):


to freeze the tongue and fire the heart.
Words melt upon my tongue

Lavender aroma! Breathtaking!

A frozen mind is useless!
A silent man is helpless!


Great stuff Henna. This may by your best one yet  That Old English is excellent!!!

How do you think up these ideas?


aww thanks again honey, my best friend thinks its one of the best as well, i am going to use old English more often now, well my imagination is vast, I decided to have a change usually I write from a ladies point of view however this time I felt like making the man helpless, for the greek myth of Aphrodite(Goddess) does say she makes the male gender helpless :) and being a lesbian you know, I could imagine the beauty of this women :wub:
Hope Matt never see's this post but the first 6 lines were his inspiration, staring into his blue eyes...
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I would say you would have a vast imagination by your writings. The combination of Aphrodite and being a lesbian would definitely make a man weak and looking at the beauty of a woman. Is it easy writing from a man's point of view?

Oh my, I see that Matt can inspire your imagination. ;)

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Lustre,Jun 2 2005
06:00 PM
I would say you would have a vast imagination by your writings. The combination of Aphrodite and being a lesbian would definitely make a man weak and looking at the beauty of a woman. Is it easy writing from a man's point of view?

Oh my, I see that Matt can inspire your imagination. ;)

:wub: haha yes..he can.

Well, it was easy this time because I had to make the man out as weak, and the woman amazing, usually my poetry becomes very less original because the woman is always the one to be heartbroken or to be the one complimenting the man however this time it was different,

But harder then writing from a ladies point on view, :)
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that's true, it always seems like the woman is getting heartbroken. But the same things happen to a guy as well. So, it was a bit different. Can you make one with both man and woman amazing or both get heartbroken?


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Lustre,Jun 5 2005
12:34 PM
that's true, it always seems like the woman is getting heartbroken.  But the same things happen to a guy as well.  So, it was a bit different.  Can you make one with both man and woman amazing or both get heartbroken?

I just completed one for my best friend yesterday, so ive just posted that, ill start on it tomorrow, or tonight, ill do two, one with both of them in love and the other from both points of view in one poem about being heartbroken, dedicated to you Lustre! :)

the first ones going to be cold "Lustres Vision of Love"
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awwwww dedicated to me ;emb; I know they will be great :) "Lustre's Vision of Love" sounds like music to my ears :)

Oh, gotta work on my poem and try and finish it tonight :o
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Lustre,Jun 5 2005
05:19 PM
awwwww dedicated to me ;emb; I know they will be great :) "Lustre's Vision of Love" sounds like music to my ears :)

Oh, gotta work on my poem and try and finish it tonight :o

haha dodo get your poem finished!Im anxious.. :P
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I got writer's block :angry: Do you get that? Working on it though, don't want to make it too short.
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Lustre,Jun 6 2005
05:09 PM
I got writer's block :angry: Do you get that? Working on it though, don't want to make it too short.

huh?someone stopped you, you mean?

Sorry just got back from work, a little tired, guess what? Elton John used our florist and Bridals to deliver flowers to his friend..oh my god!

Go on get on it Lustre ;)
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huh?someone stopped you, you mean?

Sorry just got back from work, a little tired, guess what? Elton John used our florist and Bridals to deliver flowers to his friend..oh my god!

Go on get on it Lustre



ummmm, I wish someone stopped me could be my excuse. Actually, I am stuck and am thinking of changing my subject. Got an idea earlier so gonna try that one. Maybe I can put something in the Works forum for once.


I seen your thread of the Elton John thing, that's awesome. Wouldn't it have been cool if Elton called you?

I'm gonna get this done.
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Lustre,Jun 7 2005
06:06 PM
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huh?someone stopped you, you mean?

Sorry just got back from work, a little tired, guess what? Elton John used our florist and Bridals to deliver flowers to his friend..oh my god!

Go on get on it Lustre



ummmm, I wish someone stopped me could be my excuse. Actually, I am stuck and am thinking of changing my subject. Got an idea earlier so gonna try that one. Maybe I can put something in the Works forum for once.


I seen your thread of the Elton John thing, that's awesome. Wouldn't it have been cool if Elton called you?

I'm gonna get this done.

:wub: Id be speechless..and he's effin gay, me and gay guys get on fine :lol:

GET IT DONE LUSTRE! :angry:
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genie,Jun 8 2005
08:52 AM

:wub: Id be speechless..and he's effin gay, me and gay guys get on fine :lol:

GET IT DONE LUSTRE! :angry:

Haha, you would get along great with Elton :lol:

Working on it, but not so easy for me. ;cry; Either way, will put it up soon. :o
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