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Athan Kedar
Topic Started: Jun 18 2007, 10:06 AM (380 Views)
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Name: Athan Kedar (pronounced Ah-than Keh-dahr, meaning Immortal Mountain Lord, or Immortal Lord)
Nickname: Hawk

Age: 29, though he looks mid-thirties
Birthday: eighth of May, though he ignores it.

Race: Human

Advantages:
-Well Rounded (Can do just about anything)
-Adaptable (Adapt easy to new surroundings)
-Quick Learner (Picks up new ideas faster)


Disadvantages:
-Weak Magic (Their magic is not up to par with other races)
-Easy to Possess (Make perfect vassals for sprits)
-Arrogant (Most races assume humans to be arrogant colonialists)

Sex: Male

Occupation: Mercenary? Read “Extra”.
Extra: Well known amongst Bandits, he is a man that gets things done. He is a criminal that kills sabotages and steals for money, whose services are hired by bandits, criminals and even countries alike.

Job Class: Gunman

Weapon/fight-style: He mainly uses an expensive breech loading rifle (bullets loaded into the rear), which is the reason it was so expensive – he also calls that gun his “Weapon”, and has many modifications that he keeps close-by (not in the place he mainly keeps weapons), such as a long bayonet. He also has many other, lesser, weapons located at a secret cache (the location known only to him). He always keeps three “Le Mat Revolvers” with him – a six bullet revolver – as backups
link to weapons. The fourth gun, for a picture.
When fighting he uses only his fists, elbows, and sometimes feet and knees, slow, yet incredibly powerful blows – that surprise most enemies because of his appearance.

Appearance: He is bald, apart from a thin layer of buzz-cut like hair. Many have commented on the fact that he often has a grim face – one of those people that when doing nothing with their expression seems slightly angry. He has a small scar running vertical through the edge of the leftmost part of his left eyebrow. He often shaves his beard to the length of his hair – a 5 o'clock shadow. Though young his face has deep-set features.

Clothing 1: He has a large hooded red cloak that he’s had for years; it has sleeveless armholes that let through his arms. it has many burn marks, rips and bullet holes. He has a thick red – darker than his cloak - scarf with its ends tucked into his dark grey, unzipped, jumper (hoody), which has no pockets. Through the open front you can see two other thin layers and a black shirt. He has a Belt that has many clipped on bags, each filled to the brim with ammo – Athan has memorised their order. On his left hand only is a black leather glove- he lost the other. He has dark black jeans, and leather boots that are fitted to his feet perfectly – not too big nor too small. These clothes that he often wears hide his true shape – no one who meets him can tell his physique and therefore his strength; and many believe he is week since he uses mostly guns.

Likes, Dislikes, Fears Hobbies, and Aspirations:
-Likes: His job, his friends, water.
-Dislikes: People that annoy him; Stupid, loud, arrogant and obnoxious people.
-Fears: Not much.
-Hobbies: His job, Dangerous things – legal or Illegal. He has a Celestial friend (Gear), and Athan jumped off from a cliff with him, and as they neared the ground Gear took flight, and grabbed Athan… they landed softly – he loves doing that, but Gear is hardly ever around.
-Aspirations: To kill the King of Serdio as Drake has killed two Dark Beings, and Athan thinks that if he kills him it will affirm his sense of strength to himself

Personality: Athan Kedar is Schizophrenic. Athan Kedar is the original man, but his counter¬-part calls himself Hawk (from whence comes his criminaly-known name).

Athan: Usually quiet, but can have his moments that he talks without pause. He is often very blunt, and quite brutal in his words and actions; he says what he thinks and when people disagree he does take it into account. When people say something against him or commit an action he sees as against him, he will often fight them. He does fight in any way he can (for example, he would, if they opportunity arose, hit the enemies head into the wall), but prefers, if engaging in a fight for something, that it would be fair (though fair is how Athan sees fair… He doesn’t care about numbers). These actions reveal much about his personality.
Athan not exactly a loner, but he doesn’t like the people he associates with, as most bandits and criminals tend to be stupid men who are loud, arrogant and obnoxious – but he must associate with them as to continue the job he loves. Many of the bandits fear him if they know his name, but will not speak their hate of him to him – those who don’t know his name will. The friends he does have do tend to be criminals, but not those like the normal obnoxious bandits. Though he does like doing his job, he sometimes has moments where he hates it, hates the killing and wishes he had done something else – but these quickly fade. He and Gear are good friends, but Gear is only ever around to sell his “goods” to a specific fence, who is with a specific bandit camp; One that is far from Athan’s home.
He knows completely of Hawk’s existence, but does not know if he is merely the harvest of an abnormal mental state or if he is real. To Athan it does not matter – Hawk is real to Athan and Athan is real to Hawk.

Hawk: Hawk is sharp tempered when speaking to Athan; though is cool-mannered when in control of their shared body. When he is in control, oddly Athan’s eyes go slate grey (as opposed to a grey-streaked blue). Hawk only comes out when he chooses, and even then Athan has to have his mind’s “barriers” down. Hawk believes in whole that Athan’s abilities and strength are derived from him. This belief is derived from the fact that when Hawk is in control he has sharper reflexes, can get more strength and speed from his and Athan's body and has eyes of a hawk. Not only that but, since the person when not in control of the body he can focus more, whatever skill Athan learns, Hawk tends to learn quicker and be able to see the intricacies of skills faster. Hawk often chides Athan when Athan is trying to carry out a certain skill, Hawk claiming he himself could do better. More is yet to be revealed!

History: His mother died with his birth, his father had to look after him and his older brother (by 5 years). Athan found out when he was 5 that his father had been beating his brother, Nathan, since Athan’s mother’s death. At age 13 Athan killed his father when he tried to start beating Athan. His father raised his fist to him in the kitchen, Athan grabbed a knife and cut his fathers throat with lightning speed. Within days Nathan joined the towns Church.
They claimed that their father was killed by bandits and war-makers, and the house was put under Nathan’s name.
Athan left the day he became 18 with his father’s pistol – which he traded in the next town for a lesser pistol; he never wanted to touch anything his father ever touched again.
Over time of travelling he was caught by bandits he used him practically as a slave. At 20 Athan stole a rifle and shot the new leader, when he went to urinate at night. He then stole the leader’s pistol and killed the remaining 5. He took all of their guns, and strung them to a backpack which he filled with food and drink. He sold it all at the closest town, and saved it all over time. Another group of bandits, having heard it was him that killed their rivals, allowed him to work with them. Building up his money (and skills) he one day tried to leave, but they wouldn’t allow him to and so he killed their strongest in a melee fight. They then allowed him to leave.
After time he was called upon by a criminal to murder a rival thief. He did so and was paid well. This began his career.

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