Three Person Haiku

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Three Person Haiku
Topic Started: May 10 2009, 07:36 PM (78 Views)
Mitsu	May 10 2009, 07:36 PM Post #1
Oblivion Mercernary Posts: 928 Group: Members Member #5 Joined: January 26, 2007	I got this from that Literature site Fakey found. A Haiku is a poem consisting of three lines. The first line has 5 syllables, the second line has 7, and the last has 5 again. Like this... A blue bird in spring Watch as it flutters along Past the red sunset Now to the point of the topic. This is kinda like a forum game, but with haikus. The first poster writes the first line and then the second poster continues it. The third poster will finish and the fourth poster will start a new haiku. Like this... Mitsu: A blue bird in spring Fakewolf: A blue bird in spring Watch as it flutters along Tomasu: A blue bird in spring Watch as it flutters along Past the red sunset Possessed: In the bright sunlight Mitsu: In the bright sunlight I wish I had a cheesecake And so on like that! There aren't really any rules... But please post all the lines written before yours in your post. It looks better that way and kinda keeps it organized. I guess I'll have to start a haiku now... If I had a pen Edited by Mitsu, May 10 2009, 07:48 PM.



fakewolf	May 10 2009, 07:49 PM Post #2
Oblivion Mercernary Posts: 1,089 Group: Members Member #19 Joined: May 9, 2007	If I had a pen I would wonder what to write
	Take me to You, imprison me, for I, Except You'enthrall me, never shall be free, Nor ever chaste, except You ravish me. "In layman's terms: Speedy thing comes in, speedy thing goes out."


Mitsu	May 10 2009, 07:52 PM Post #3
Oblivion Mercernary Posts: 928 Group: Members Member #5 Joined: January 26, 2007	If I had a pen I would wonder what to write No pen do I have



fakewolf	May 10 2009, 08:00 PM Post #4
Oblivion Mercernary Posts: 1,089 Group: Members Member #19 Joined: May 9, 2007	That's a silly haiku! But not really... Anyway, here go: Under broken beds Edited by fakewolf, May 10 2009, 08:48 PM.
	Take me to You, imprison me, for I, Except You'enthrall me, never shall be free, Nor ever chaste, except You ravish me. "In layman's terms: Speedy thing comes in, speedy thing goes out."


Mitsu	May 10 2009, 08:51 PM Post #5
Oblivion Mercernary Posts: 928 Group: Members Member #5 Joined: January 26, 2007	Under broken beds There are monsters bright and red Edited by Mitsu, May 10 2009, 08:54 PM.



fakewolf	May 10 2009, 09:06 PM Post #6
Oblivion Mercernary Posts: 1,089 Group: Members Member #19 Joined: May 9, 2007	Under broken beds There are monsters bright and red Speaking in your heads
	Take me to You, imprison me, for I, Except You'enthrall me, never shall be free, Nor ever chaste, except You ravish me. "In layman's terms: Speedy thing comes in, speedy thing goes out."


Mitsu	May 11 2009, 07:31 PM Post #7
Oblivion Mercernary Posts: 928 Group: Members Member #5 Joined: January 26, 2007	Unfortunately



fakewolf	May 11 2009, 10:26 PM Post #8
Oblivion Mercernary Posts: 1,089 Group: Members Member #19 Joined: May 9, 2007	Unfortunately This is not the thing to do
	Take me to You, imprison me, for I, Except You'enthrall me, never shall be free, Nor ever chaste, except You ravish me. "In layman's terms: Speedy thing comes in, speedy thing goes out."


Mitsu	May 13 2009, 07:41 PM Post #9
Oblivion Mercernary Posts: 928 Group: Members Member #5 Joined: January 26, 2007	Unfortunately This is not the thing to do For myself and you



fakewolf	May 13 2009, 10:29 PM Post #10
Oblivion Mercernary Posts: 1,089 Group: Members Member #19 Joined: May 9, 2007	The fog on the bank
	Take me to You, imprison me, for I, Except You'enthrall me, never shall be free, Nor ever chaste, except You ravish me. "In layman's terms: Speedy thing comes in, speedy thing goes out."


Tomasu	May 14 2009, 03:59 PM Post #11
Oblivion Mercernary Posts: 1,318 Group: Admin Member #1 Joined: January 13, 2007	A fog on the bank With a light in the distance
	un soukamone... "One of the worst of his sins [is] kind of looking down on the rest of humanity, scorning the rest of humanity."


Hollow	May 14 2009, 09:51 PM Post #12
Oblivion Frontline Posts: 108 Group: Members Member #57 Joined: January 2, 2008	Unfortunately = 6 syllables, right? Un-for-tu-nat-e-ly. Isn't haiku 5, 7 5,? Anyway... A fog on the bank With a light in the distance Was very blinding Edited by Hollow, May 14 2009, 09:51 PM.



fakewolf	May 14 2009, 10:31 PM Post #13
Oblivion Mercernary Posts: 1,089 Group: Members Member #19 Joined: May 9, 2007	Well, Hollow, it really depends on if you pronounce the "e." But, "unfortunately" can be pronounced as a five-syllable word. To continue: Alone among leaves
	Take me to You, imprison me, for I, Except You'enthrall me, never shall be free, Nor ever chaste, except You ravish me. "In layman's terms: Speedy thing comes in, speedy thing goes out."


Mitsu	Oct 11 2009, 08:11 AM Post #14
Oblivion Mercernary Posts: 928 Group: Members Member #5 Joined: January 26, 2007	Alone among leaves Flitter, flutter, slither by



fakewolf	Oct 18 2009, 01:57 PM Post #15
Oblivion Mercernary Posts: 1,089 Group: Members Member #19 Joined: May 9, 2007	Alone among leaves Flitter, flutter, silther by A bag full of bones.
	Take me to You, imprison me, for I, Except You'enthrall me, never shall be free, Nor ever chaste, except You ravish me. "In layman's terms: Speedy thing comes in, speedy thing goes out."


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