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| Possessed | Apr 26 2009, 05:01 PM Post #1 |
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http://s576.photobucket.com/albums/ss202/PossessedJil/ look at my newbie work please! XD Ive done all this in the past 5 does maybe =) So comment my work here ^^ just link the picture you like and make a comment here so I kno which one you like. |
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| fakewolf | Apr 26 2009, 05:21 PM Post #2 |
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http://i576.photobucket.com/albums/ss202/PossessedJil/103_0767.jpg http://i576.photobucket.com/albums/ss202/PossessedJil/103_0768.jpg http://i576.photobucket.com/albums/ss202/PossessedJil/103_0685.jpg I think - keep in mind that I don't know all that much about photography, and these are just opinions - that these are the strongest photographs. The house is cool - it feels very sad and old. One thing I wish was different was that I want it to be darker - it's very light, and I think that, while the softness is great, more contrast would make it a stronger photo. Also, I wish that the pole in the center of the picture wasn't quite so in the center - maybe more to the left would be better - the eye would like it better. I just like the Berry Hill pic - it makes me happy. I only wish that there was a tiny bit more darkness in that upper right hand corner where it's so bright. Otherwise, I think it's a cool pic. I like the flag, too. It seems a bit washed out, but not too bad. It would also be more cool if the pole itself were more off-center. http://i576.photobucket.com/albums/ss202/PossessedJil/103_0760.jpg I like the composition and the lighting in this picture, but my problem with it is that the eye doesn't move - it just looks at the prettily lighted tree. I think, especially in photography, that you want to make the eye move over the picture. Alrightey. I think these were the most interesting of your pictures. The dog one is nice, but that whatever-it-is on the ground reflecting light is not so good. Some of the pictures get repetitive, but that's not necessarily a criticism. I think if I were you I would play around with lighting and composition some more - it looks like you already are some - and look up rules of composition - I've stumbled upon some very interesting ones on the Internet - and on lighting. Good Job! |
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| Possessed | Apr 26 2009, 05:31 PM Post #3 |
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Ok thanks XD Im just taking pictures that hit me. IM doing that to see what im best at and when I figure that out im going to head in that direction and stuff. but thanks. |
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| Mitsu | Apr 26 2009, 07:30 PM Post #4 |
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Well... I'd like to add something new... but I pretty much agree with Fakey. |
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| Possessed | Apr 27 2009, 10:10 AM Post #5 |
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Add away. I want all the comments and help I can get |
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