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| Fabulous Poetry By Will!; Poems by a non-poet. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Apr 8 2007, 10:12 PM (218 Views) | |
| Willikins | Apr 8 2007, 10:12 PM Post #1 |
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Yeah, so, the thing is, I *don't* write poetry. Until now. I've got 2. This one I wrote for my friend because she needed a ballad for English class. My Darling, Do I Love You Your eyes are as blue as the sky As deep as the ocean, too Loving and caring and happy My darling, do I love you. Your hair is soft and shining As smooth as satin, too Blond and curly and bouncing My darling, do I love you. Your skin is pale as the moonlight As gentle as a flower, too Caressing and holding and touching My darling, do I love you. Your eyes are vacant and rolling. Hair is blood-stained, too. Cold and dead and lonely. My darling, did I love you. This one's about Jonathan. Untitled Empty and cold Describe me no longer Since meeting you I've only grown stronger The light in your eyes Brings joy to my heart I only feel pain When we are apart Your kiss makes me melt Your touch makes me crumble When I try and speak Over my words I fumble Maybe one day We will be together But one thing is certain I'll love you forever. What do you think? |
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| bakahitoprincess | Apr 9 2007, 05:43 PM Post #2 |
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Wow, pretty damn awesome Will. |
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| Willikins | Apr 19 2007, 06:19 PM Post #3 |
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Thanks, Ed! Alright, guys, I wrote another one! This one's kinda PG-13ish though, for Adult Themes. Separate in Euphoria Fiery passion Molten love Sweat steams From our bodies My hands Your hands Whose hands? Touching The smells Intoxicating Sweat, skin Cologne, hair Madness taking over We release As one But separate in Euphoria I decided to kinda experiment with styles. You know, it's funny. Rarely do I ever click with other people's poetry, but I really like the stuff I write! |
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| Willikins | Apr 26 2007, 08:18 PM Post #4 |
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Jonathan, Part Two Empty and cold Describe how I feel I wish that I could Have a heart made of steel The sight of your eyes Brings pain to my heart But it hurts me still When we are apart Your touch meant nothing Your kisses were fake When I try and speak now My voice, it does break Though I know now We won't be together One thing remains certain I'll love you forever |
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| Lemon-Thing | May 8 2007, 07:23 PM Post #5 |
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The very first poem reminds me of Cyrano de Bergerac. Which is a GOOD thing. I like the poem after the very first, though, it flows nicely. ^-^ |
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