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Fabulous Poetry By Will!; Poems by a non-poet.
Topic Started: Apr 8 2007, 10:12 PM (218 Views)
Willikins
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Yeah, so, the thing is, I *don't* write poetry.

Until now.

I've got 2.

This one I wrote for my friend because she needed a ballad for English class.

My Darling, Do I Love You

Your eyes are as blue as the sky
As deep as the ocean, too
Loving and caring and happy
My darling, do I love you.

Your hair is soft and shining
As smooth as satin, too
Blond and curly and bouncing
My darling, do I love you.

Your skin is pale as the moonlight
As gentle as a flower, too
Caressing and holding and touching
My darling, do I love you.

Your eyes are vacant and rolling.
Hair is blood-stained, too.
Cold and dead and lonely.
My darling, did I love you.


This one's about Jonathan.

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Empty and cold
Describe me no longer
Since meeting you
I've only grown stronger

The light in your eyes
Brings joy to my heart
I only feel pain
When we are apart

Your kiss makes me melt
Your touch makes me crumble
When I try and speak
Over my words I fumble

Maybe one day
We will be together
But one thing is certain
I'll love you forever.


What do you think?
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bakahitoprincess
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Wow, pretty damn awesome Will.
Jyasuto kidingu!

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Willikins
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Thanks, Ed!

Alright, guys, I wrote another one!

This one's kinda PG-13ish though, for Adult Themes.

Separate in Euphoria

Fiery passion
Molten love
Sweat steams
From our bodies

My hands
Your hands
Whose hands?
Touching

The smells
Intoxicating
Sweat, skin
Cologne, hair

Madness taking over
We release
As one
But separate in Euphoria


I decided to kinda experiment with styles. You know, it's funny. Rarely do I ever click with other people's poetry, but I really like the stuff I write!
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Willikins
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Jonathan, Part Two

Empty and cold
Describe how I feel
I wish that I could
Have a heart made of steel

The sight of your eyes
Brings pain to my heart
But it hurts me still
When we are apart

Your touch meant nothing
Your kisses were fake
When I try and speak now
My voice, it does break

Though I know now
We won't be together
One thing remains certain
I'll love you forever
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The very first poem reminds me of Cyrano de Bergerac. Which is a GOOD thing. I like the poem after the very first, though, it flows nicely. ^-^
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