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| The Goddess Alexia | Feb 24 2007, 11:34 AM |
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"Eppur si muove"
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we don't rate here, so no worries about that
I like it...I think it could be just a TINY bit more structured, but I'm not really one to talk because I don't like structure in my own poems either lmao... but even so, don't make excuses if you tink it sucks and yo're tring to warn or brace yourself for an onslaught of "crappy-poemsnessism" because who fucing cares what we think. Its your powm isn't it? You wrote it to express some form of yourself, and so 1. you should be proud of it, and 2. you opinion is the only one that really counts. But even so, like i said, I like it. |
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