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| Glen Coresce; The Candyman Can | |
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| Topic Started: Oct 18 2008, 05:12 PM (785 Views) | |
| Mr. Cracker | Oct 18 2008, 05:12 PM Post #1 |
It's gold Jerry, GOLD!
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This was originally a comicbook idea I had, I might still do it... Posted Image Name: Glen Coresce (A.K.A The Candyman) Tier: Tier 2 (veteran) Law/Chaos: -5 Good/Evil -4 Favorite Food: Candy-canes Alliance: Evil Age: 35 Gender: Male Orientation: A-sexual (Neither attracted to male or female) Occupation: None Mental Status: Insane Eye color: Blue Hair color: Brown Race: Caucasian Clothes: Blue long sleeved shirt with rolled up sleeves, designed with white tartan styled lines. Long Khaki pants tucked under 2 large black rubber fishing boots. 2 large red suspenders keep his khaki's attached and are often seen with candy canes sticking out of the sides, like bullet belts. Powers: None, he's a normal "delusional" human being. Abilities: His schizophrenia has left him cold blooded and murderous. His brain releases far too many endorphins meaning he can fight through a battle (even if his arm was cut off) and not feel any pain. Weaknesses: He has flashbacks often, they're enough to paralyze him for a few secounds and strike in a few fatal blows, but afterwards he's star-craving mad, so you better hit him whenever you get the chance. Weapons: A giant, steel, Christmas lawn ornament shaped like a candy cane. its been sharpened at the end to kill his victims. Glen is also equipped with various tiny candy canes, bubble gum balls, candy corn, heart shaped chalk candies, marshmallows, chocolate bars, and gum-drops-- which are all hidden in pockets and lined up on his suspenders. Targets: People who torcher others, anyone that reminds him of his childhood, and (especially) children. Bio: (skip down to the last paragraph if you don't wanna read his life story) As a boy living in the ghettos of Metropolis, Glen was often beaten because of his skin color (white). Everyday he would be pelted with rocks, hit with sticks, kicked into the road and scream as cars came roaring close to him. Glen spent most of his years in fear of his tormenters, running from them every time they were in visual distance. The teachers in his school took the act of fighting as "kids being kids" and sat back to watch them sort it all out...it never worked. He always returned home with a shiner and blood coming out of a few orifices, his parents (they owned their own candy shop in town) didn't care and just fed him candy...hoping it would make him feel better. Years passed and Glen began to have an emotional attachment to candy, he'd always be seen with a chocolate bar or a candy cane. For once in a long time he was happy, loving the sweetness of it in his mouth as it dissolved. Years passed and sadly, all good things must come to an end. During the Christmas season, his old bullies caught him while snacking on a candy bar...needless to say things didn't turn out too good for him or the candy bar. They threw him down, stole his candy, beat him into the pavement, and threw the wrapper at him. He layed on the sidewalk, in blood, staring down at his candy wrapper in horror...his mind split, Glen finally had it. He forced himself to his knee's and wobbly stood up, vowing revenge on those who tormented him all these years, vowing revenge on those who took away his happiness. He knew what happiness was, he saw all of the other kids playing and smiling, Glen never had a chance o do any of these things due to the fear he lived in constant and hiding. A grin grew on his face and he cackled loudly. Glen was no more, now he became the Candyman. The tormenters smirked at him and went for another round, Glen wouldn't have it. He grabbed the nearest object closest to him (which happened to have been a candy cane lawn ornament) and pierced it through one of their eye sockets, stabbing through the brain in the process and instantly killing the bully. The others fled in terror as he continued to maul the corpse, shoving the stolen candybar into the kids throat. Police got word of him and have been searching ever since, only to have been met with failure and casualties. Now, still uncaught by police at age 35 the Candyman seeks his childhood tormentors and quests revenge for what they did to him all those years ago. Even to this day, Glen experiences flashbacks to his childhood of being mauled and beaten, making him murder anything that brings back those memories or reminds him of the kids back then. Stats Strength: 4 Dexterity:3 Agility:1 Reflexes:3 Fortitude: 6 Stamina: 4 Wisdom: 1 Intelligence: 1 Charisma: 2 Willpower: 5 |
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| Aurondarklord | Oct 18 2008, 06:33 PM Post #2 |
Zod Kneels Before ME!
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oooo...a serial killer! that's a new one. the best irony of the thing is I have a female police officer named Candace Cain, or, "Candy", who has a similar, if much less homicidal, sweet tooth. I see some good potential there. |
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AkaneSyria: I failz at horsex AkaneSyria: AUCK, HORSIES Aurondarklord: what? Aurondarklord: I don't wanna know Aurondarklord: Candy: actually even I don't wanna know! AkaneSyria: XD, I made a horrible typo. My horse hates me in Red Dead Redemption Aurondarklord: NO SHIT IF YOU TRIED TO HAVE SEX WITH IT!!! | |
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| Mr. Cracker | Oct 18 2008, 07:59 PM Post #3 |
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It's gold Jerry, GOLD!
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I feel a conjunction coming alooong. |
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| Evasto | Oct 18 2008, 09:11 PM Post #4 |
The Bot Stops Here
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Nicely done, man. Characters like this guy are rare, and a candy themed bad guy just makes it more cool. I look forward to seeing how you RP this dude. ^-^ b |
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| Stu | Oct 18 2008, 10:22 PM Post #5 |
I dislike you
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Cool. Can I make a suggestion though? Since he's such a candy lover, his teeth could be all rotten? |
 Aurondarklord--You Are Terminated says: OKAY, THERE YOU HAVE IT! I ADMITTED BEING WRONG ABOUT SOMETHING!!! PRINT IT OUT AND HAVE IT FUCKING FRAMED!! | |
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| Mr. Cracker | Oct 19 2008, 01:13 AM Post #6 |
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It's gold Jerry, GOLD!
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Well, they're yellow and crooked, I tried to go with a Willem Dafoe-type face on my first attempt with rotten teeth...didn't really turn out well and I kinda ruined it. Funny thing, I got the idea of this guy from a dream... Mr. Dafoe himself played the villain. He was very convincing, I doubt I could RP the correct way I envisioned him then, but I'll try. |
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| Shau | Oct 19 2008, 08:24 PM Post #7 |
Hell's very own St. Peters. / BANANA PHONE
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FIRST CLOCKWORK AND JOHNSON NOW THIS CRAZY FUCK AND CANDY It was all meant to be! |
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“A book is made from a tree. It is an assemblage of flat, flexible parts (still called "leaves") imprinted with dark pigmented squiggles. One glance at it and you hear the voice of another person, perhaps someone dead for thousands of years. Across the millennia, the author is speaking, clearly and silently, inside your head, directly to you. Writing is perhaps the greatest of human inventions, binding together people, citizens of distant epochs, who never knew one another. Books break the shackles of time, proof that humans can work magic.” ― Carl Sagan "Omfg, you actually have my alias as 'Deucer'?" --- Deucer | |
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| Larson | Oct 20 2008, 12:40 AM Post #8 |
Is it Green?
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What will he think of next? *the ex paladin cringes back in the far corner* Though I have to give some congrats on the character too, we've seen quite a few cookie cutter shapes here on the boards so it is rather interesting to see something new and mysterious. A candy themed villain is a nice touch. And Willem Dafoe, what isn't there to love? |
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| Mr. Cracker | Oct 20 2008, 05:41 PM Post #9 |
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It's gold Jerry, GOLD!
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One word... "Anamorph". |
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| Larson | Dec 8 2008, 02:24 AM Post #10 |
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Is it Green?
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Not familiar with that.... |
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| Mr. Cracker | Dec 30 2008, 06:40 PM Post #11 |
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It's gold Jerry, GOLD!
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Shouldn't bother yourself with it, terrible movie. EDIT: Applied the tier system from Shau's thread. |
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| Aurondarklord | Dec 30 2008, 06:56 PM Post #12 |
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Zod Kneels Before ME!
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ummm...it's worth pointing out that if you're using that system, a stat cannot be lower than 1 or higher than 6. otherwise I know a couple characters who'd have like -50 charisma and loads of free points. talk about rewarding a character for being an ass :lol: |
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AkaneSyria: I failz at horsex AkaneSyria: AUCK, HORSIES Aurondarklord: what? Aurondarklord: I don't wanna know Aurondarklord: Candy: actually even I don't wanna know! AkaneSyria: XD, I made a horrible typo. My horse hates me in Red Dead Redemption Aurondarklord: NO SHIT IF YOU TRIED TO HAVE SEX WITH IT!!! | |
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| Shau | Dec 30 2008, 07:00 PM Post #13 |
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Hell's very own St. Peters. / BANANA PHONE
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I see someone's been reading the CSI! I'm such a revolutionary! Btw I've got a dastardly plot to help Candyman get unleashed back onto society, hit me up on MSN some time so we can talk more about it! I'm sure you'll love it. Deuce has already run the basics by you, but we can get something more comprehensive (And more actively with your input/modulation) done with a bit of tweaking. |
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“A book is made from a tree. It is an assemblage of flat, flexible parts (still called "leaves") imprinted with dark pigmented squiggles. One glance at it and you hear the voice of another person, perhaps someone dead for thousands of years. Across the millennia, the author is speaking, clearly and silently, inside your head, directly to you. Writing is perhaps the greatest of human inventions, binding together people, citizens of distant epochs, who never knew one another. Books break the shackles of time, proof that humans can work magic.” ― Carl Sagan "Omfg, you actually have my alias as 'Deucer'?" --- Deucer | |
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| Mr. Cracker | Dec 30 2008, 07:26 PM Post #14 |
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It's gold Jerry, GOLD!
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Alright, I tweaked it a tad to fix up any errors I had before. |
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| Larson | Dec 30 2008, 09:31 PM Post #15 |
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Is it Green?
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I didn't know that... I had assumed that like in DnD a stat of zero meant you didn't have it whatsoever... Like a robot would certainly have a 0 stamina. |
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| Aurondarklord | Dec 30 2008, 09:35 PM Post #16 |
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Zod Kneels Before ME!
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well that's what Shau told me. I asked him once if the operative could have negative charisma on the grounds he's such a jerk it bends the universe. |
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AkaneSyria: I failz at horsex AkaneSyria: AUCK, HORSIES Aurondarklord: what? Aurondarklord: I don't wanna know Aurondarklord: Candy: actually even I don't wanna know! AkaneSyria: XD, I made a horrible typo. My horse hates me in Red Dead Redemption Aurondarklord: NO SHIT IF YOU TRIED TO HAVE SEX WITH IT!!! | |
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| Larson | Dec 31 2008, 02:35 AM Post #17 |
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Is it Green?
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I can see the argument there, but I would think that he would need to set up a minimum and maximum score setting just like any RPG that has points to build something. The old BESM (Big Eyes Small Mouth) anime RPG from Guardians of Order used to have something like that, you'd procure bonus points to use by taking on negative affects on your character such as awkward balance, fuggin ugly, guy/girl magnet and the like. So I would say that any and all negatives would have to be no greater than a total of -30 to. But then we would run into the problem of someone creating that sonovabitch character that has a -30 Charisma and good stats in everything else... like sixes across the board... Chris: What!? I didn't do it, I swear. |
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| Shau | Dec 31 2008, 04:58 AM Post #18 |
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Hell's very own St. Peters. / BANANA PHONE
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Stamina is a measure of something's ability to "keep going", and even robots have to have a power source like everything else. Anyway, I know of that setup, Larson, but I found it to be redundant, even excessive, given that we aren't using dice rolls or direct number crunching. For example, say you're a chick magnet (A bad thing?!). That takes a high CHA. Blammo. Shitty balance? Low dexterity. Fucking ugly? I tried not to bring "looks and appearance" into the stat system, even though they do have potential tangible impacts (A hot person succeeding more with charisma-related abilities than an ugly one). But in order to keep things from getting more complicated than they already were, I didn't get so in-depth. |
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“A book is made from a tree. It is an assemblage of flat, flexible parts (still called "leaves") imprinted with dark pigmented squiggles. One glance at it and you hear the voice of another person, perhaps someone dead for thousands of years. Across the millennia, the author is speaking, clearly and silently, inside your head, directly to you. Writing is perhaps the greatest of human inventions, binding together people, citizens of distant epochs, who never knew one another. Books break the shackles of time, proof that humans can work magic.” ― Carl Sagan "Omfg, you actually have my alias as 'Deucer'?" --- Deucer | |
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