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Should TrueFist be a Zuet Hekog?
HECK YEAH! 5 (83.3%)
HECK NO! 1 (16.7%)
Total Votes: 6
TrueFist
Topic Started: Nov 12 2011, 12:35 PM (496 Views)
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* I just wanns see if I'd make it. :/ If not, fine. If so, cool.*

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Name: TrueFist * I know you guys like 3 letter name but I really like that name, and think it would be cool to be a little different.*

Weight: 88 lbs

History & Origin: The love for human life started young, ever since Keb (name given when born.) found out how to change into one he started to wonder into town and study there every move. Only once did someone find out what he was, but they didnt live to tell. Keb was about 11 when someone decided to kidnap him (In his human form) and hid him in a warehouse where he was kept for ransome, only promblem was they didnt know who his parents were, in self defence Keb quickly changed and killed them, then quickly changed back again and ran for the door. Keb ran into a 12 year old named Calvin. Calvin was shocked to see blood on Kebs clothes and walk inside the warehouse to investigate. Keb told calvin the story of the kidnapping but didnt tell him about the changing. It was then that Keb found out that Calvin was an orphan and the two became close friends. When Keb was 17, Calvin and him joined a gang where he earned the name TrueFist. Months after Calvin died from the violence and TrueFist had no choice but to ran away. The rest of his life he spent running till he knew he out lived most the gang members. And tired of humans destroying forests and wild life TrueFist vowed to never turn into a human again. And with that vow he knew he had to find a safe place to live, a place with no humans, Redwood Ravine.

RP Sample: *This has nothing to do with TrueFist btw* I raise my head high and low, searching for the sent of any sorce of prey as I trot through the hard and cold blinding-white blanket resting on the earth.

Age: 109 Years * Seeing how the Zuet Hekogs can live for 200 years...*

Gender: Male


* Look, I know I'm not the best and that I may be a little "different"... But some different things are good, right? I don't know how I would make my app better to get me accepted, but let me know what works and what does not work. I'll be... Standing by?... *
Edited by TrueFist, Nov 24 2011, 11:56 AM.
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What's Working: The weight and age are fairly spot-on in accordance with the species information.
Corrections Needed: If I recall correctly, black is a fairly rare color in Zuet Hekogs. Although, it's hard to know how much black you intend on including without a picture. Also, I would suggest looking further into the history of your character. This section lets us know how dedicated you are to the character and how well you have learned the information about the species. Also, it isn't necessary, but I would also suggest writing up a post for the character for the same reason.

(P.S. The Zuet Hekog template is MS Paint/Paintbrush friendly! They should come free with your computer, depending on whether you have a Windows or Mac. (: )
Overall Impression: This application needs some adding-to, as well as a few spelling and grammar fixes.
Vote: No
Edited by Sandi, Nov 12 2011, 01:50 PM.
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How silly of me to think I'd pass like that. I'll work on it a little more.
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You have to post your image on the web and use that URL. (http://thesiteaddress.com)
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Sandi
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You can use free image hosting sites like:
` http://www.tinypic.com
` http://www.deviantart.com
` http://www.photobucket.com
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I fixed your image btw. I'll post a review on your app soon too. :>
My RWR Alts are:Box the Zuet HekogDevaru the WolfTrample the TanciRah in Fu Enle Beta in Acwellan Lone Tanci
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Thanks, I was wondering why I couldn't see it before.
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