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Topic Started: Feb 3 2011, 12:33 AM (499 Views)
Voy
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Name: Voy (Taboo'ish Character) goes by Kit
Weight:
Weight Cub:14
Weight Adult:87

History & Origin:
This young cub had the unfortionate luck of being abondoned by his mother and siblings from near soon after his birth. One in One-hundred chance there was of life coming to him, but of a litter of four, from a wolven mother, he was shunned as an outcast for his inherrited Zuet Hekog blood. In what rarity he would later come to find of their kind taking mates outside the coveted bloodline, his story began as one of the ugly duckling. Even was scared upon shoulder before left by his mother as a perminate mark he was no wolf, and did not belong. This act left a taboo mark upon his right shoulder as hair would return in a much lighter shade then that of the surroundings. Claw marks resembling that of a tribal tattoo would forever foresake his form.
Young unknown creature amazingly learned to fend for himself even at such a young age. Surviving off of bugs, berries, and when he was lucky he would even catch a mouse. Enough sustenance to survive upon at his age anyways. Keeping to himself and just trying to make way in his own way, with daily effort to avoid the wolves that had shunned him, as he was still on their land. Near half a year having passed, one day while he was trying to chase down a mouse, amazingly he ran across three wolves whos scent he recognise as the fellow litter mates that had shunned him. They had grown much more then he, and even in what little memory they had of him, furthered his mother's hatred with an attacked. But a curious thing then happened as a bipedal pink skin ran to his aid with some sort of polished lengthy wooden stick swinging at the canines. Their fear enduced defeat was swift and the savior turned back to aproach the cub. Natural fearless nature left him to sit and watch as the creature approaced speaking out, "Aren't you a cute little kitty." Surprised to hear the language he burst out completely unintentionally, "KIT!" with a swatting paw at a dangly golden hoop that hung from the strangers ear as it bent down to pet him. Said being unfassened the object and clung his right ear and pressed it through with a painful shock causing him to growl out at the action. Stepping back the creature smiled and spoke again, "Well Kit. My gift to you. Though I know your kind will hate it, I hope you enjoy it." and turned to walk away. With some great confusion he watched the vertically inclined animal pass into the distance with a final chirp out once more of "Kit". greatly enjoying the lacking ability to mimic the sound. Finally walking to a puddle to look at his reflection. Gold hoop hanging from his large perked ear still hurt, but he actually liked it.
Left alone to wander once more, he left the area he was born to no longer seeking desire to remain. Young male would most likely not come across the fortune of another strangers defense. Three years would come to pass until he came across by chance another of his kind. Upon his meeting, though carring a couple unsaught traits, he would have thought to have grown up to be a handsome male. As greatly disproportioned to his head and body, ears were so large for the cub that they equaled the length of his body and sagged upon his back. Female that he would meet would claim him as her own to raise, and dutifully named him Kit as the uneducated young had an affinty for the one word he knew. But his official name amoung his people would be Voy, which was hardly used. As time passed, much to his own disappointment in finding the exotic nature behind the trait of his lengthy youthful ears, as he would grow, the ears would not with the rest of his form. Leaving them an unsaught shortened length amoung his kind. Through strong of heart and left with a powerful priding attitude to have outlasted as long as he has, he would never show it, but in secret he long to find one who would see him for his strengths and not for his scaring mark and shortened ears and piercing. These were his traits and he was devout to keep each without recourse as they were a part of how he was.

RP Sample:
Young ebon and silken silver highligh male would strut around seemingly to be admired by all thouse around him. Building for him quite the cocky attitude, even though his movements were less then graceful at times. Though his speech was greatly underdeveloped, he could pick out enough of other conversations to know when someone was paying attention to him. Disproportionate long ears for his body would fall from his side causing him to trip and stumble if head would turn to the side to listen in. But it wouldn't get him down as he was just happy to be around his own kind fitting in. ---Sorry if this sucks. I am better when I am interacting with someone---

Age:
4 and maturing.

Gender:
Male

Sexuality:
No preference.

Added Note:
Though I make this profile read across a great timeline, I would hope to actually begin his RP with someone at the point where he meets with another of his kind for the first time. Have his evolution to an adult come more naturally. So if I am accepted and anyone has any interest please tell me.

Edit Notes:
Please read any posted reply I have made below in regard to other's comments for further explanation. Larger edits will be noted.
Edited by Voy, Feb 3 2011, 03:54 PM.
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Ford
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Like: Shortened ears, somewhat well thought out history.
Disklike: Black - Check the colour guidelines for Zuet Hekogs - Black and White are both very rare.
Overall: Moot.
Vote: No for now.
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Like: My overall impression of his adult design is something I like. And, you made him art already as a baby :D
Corrections: Ford makes a good point, black and white are very rare ZH colors. You might consider a different color scheme for him, if it won't hurt your character.
Overall: So, is he a little ugly duckling baby who is wandering around lost/abandoned? It say he gets adopted by a female zuet hekog, and you'd like to start playing him at that point in his life?
Why did this human chick that saved him from a bunch of wolves jam a hoop earring in his ear? That seemed a little weird to me. o_o
tl;dr: good impression, theres just a couple different werid things, like his earring and color.
Vote: Pending
My RWR Alts are:Box the Zuet HekogDevaru the WolfTrample the TanciRah in Fu Enle Beta in Acwellan Lone Tanci
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Let me just say that as far as the history for the character, I could have written a short novel to cover the 4 years of exile Voy lived. But I didn't want to overwhelm any who wanted to vote upon his character build. I read the guidelines carefully when and chose all of his attributes with great consideration, playing heavily upon the rarer things found among the Zuet Hekog breed. Where as I can change his color scheme fairly easily, I was trying to emphasize upon the this fact. Such as the rarity of a Zuet being born outside of a natural mated pair, color, the enjoyment of have the earring due to his early lack of understanding to the taboo traits of his people and so on. As far as the explanation for the earring, I admittedly cut that short cause I didn't want to get sidetracked in his story. Sense Zuet's "can" take human form, imagine the adoptive parent he would meet was not actually the first Zuet he meet, but didn't know the difference. A rogue Zuet that walks as a human by choice, a dark part of his past? A little more secretive taboo thrown in.

Also, while he is an ugly ducking to start, as an inherent trait of Zuet Hekog, a natural inner strength, pride, and cockiness forced him onward until he did meet with said female (or male) of his own people. This being where he would learn of his more rare attributes. In short, after 4 years of internal dilemma to his worth and belonging, would now had blossomed into the swan. And grow back into the ugly duckling, due to the shortened length of his ears.

*Additional note: If people would like, I can extend upon his history further as their is quite the play running its course in my disturbed mind. I mainly wanted to provide as much background without over-doing-it to give explanation for why and who he was. But as these creatures are suppose to be prideful and cocky, I really would rather not change the character, just explain him better. I am already proud of him.
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What's Working: The history and all that what not. I enjoy the novel - shows you have some good thoughts on the character.
Corrections Needed: As stated before (and I know you touched on it about wanting to cap on the rareness) I'd like to see if you could find another colour scheme if possible.
Overall Impression: I like that baby picture.
Vote: Pending.
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