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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 27 2011, 11:39 PM (668 Views) | |
| Kana | Jan 27 2011, 11:39 PM Post #1 |
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![]() Furcadia Name: Hematoma Name: Tic Weight: 85 lbs History & Origin: Tic's original name chosen by her parents was Jyb, but because of the odd twitch the girl had whenever she was upset or nervous, they promptly re-named her. The first born in a litter of three, Tic was always the largest and therefor the most dominant. Tic and her younger siblings enjoyed rough-housing. A lot. At some point in her childhood the Zuet Hekog was trying to catch her little brother when he suddenly swerved right, causing her to run headlong into a huge boulder, breaking her nose. It didn't heal properly, and now whenever she breaths too heavily, it whistles. In her teenage years, she went from a bossy little girl to an angst-ridden adolescent, mostly because her younger siblings didn't see her as divinity anymore, and instead began teasing her about her whistling nose and odd tics. She began striking out at them without warning and was prone to fits of rage at the drop of a hat. Her parents were always loving and understanding, but this Zuet would have none of their over-protective nonsense and upon maturing decided to blaze her own trail. That was two years ago, and Tic hasn't seen another Zuet since then. Her arrival into the heavily Zuet-populated Redwood Ravine should be quite interesting... RP Sample: It was early morning, perhaps a half hour before the sun would rise and warm the forest. A heavy, ankle-deep mist swirled chillingly over the carpet of pine-needles, giving the woodland an ethereal feel. Tic paid no mind to the beautiful scenery and unceremoniously tromped through the silvery condensation. Her overly-long, crooked snout was even more wrinkled than usual, and her lips were turned down in an obvious grimace. She hadn't gotten much sleep last night, for it had been far too cold, and thus the curmudgeonly Zuet was beyond cranky. She continued forward blindly, focusing on her rage instead of where she was going. There was no one to take the boiling fury out on, so her body began to internalize it. The oh-so-familiar twitching began; one ear flicked backward repeatedly, and her left eye cinched shut. Teeth were bared against her will and from her jaws came an odd clicking noise. Of course, the onset of her tics pissed her off even more, and thus, the hair along her spine stood on end, giving her a comically porcupine appearance. Anyone witnessing such an image would no doubt be laughing their ass off. Quietly though- one didn't want to get on the bad side of a crazy looking gal like her. [that was awful...] Age: 28 Gender: Female Sexuality: Undecided/Hasn't come up yet. Edited by Kana, Feb 14 2011, 04:59 PM.
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| Akebia | Jan 28 2011, 06:05 PM Post #2 |
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What's Working:The colors ;3; oh my lord ...her design...so pretty. the mane to colors the rosettes stripes *swoons* her past is interesting. and the whistling nose is insanely cute. Corrections Needed:none i see to much Overall Impression: Love it! she's got a rather normal past and i like that. I'd love to see this character wandering about Vote: Yes |
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Akebia, Zuet hekog. Fu Enlé Tuerie, Canine. Pending | |
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| Clemency | Jan 29 2011, 08:34 AM Post #3 |
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What's Working: Agreeing with Akebia, I just love the design. It's gorgeous! I like the whistling nose, as well. That could give the roleplays the Zuet is in that little 'push' to get things going. The history is uber awesome, too! Corrections Needed: None whatsoever. Overall Impression: I loved it! You did awesome on it! Vote: Yes Dunno if I can vote or not, but since Im Davallia and Im a Zuetaholic, I might as well do it. xD |
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Falling feet first into hell is not my job. Making sure it's crowded when I get there is. Davallia--Zuet Hekog Clemency--Wolf Call meh Vanilla. | |
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| Box | Feb 14 2011, 10:15 AM Post #4 |
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What's Working: Her overall deisgn is nice, I like the color combination you've selected. Corrections Needed: ![]() Overall Impression: Very good! Vote: Yes! Edited by Box, Feb 14 2011, 05:55 PM.
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| My RWR Alts are:Box the Zuet HekogDevaru the WolfTrample the TanciRah in Fu Enle Beta in Acwellan Lone Tanci | |
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| Jee | Feb 14 2011, 11:04 AM Post #5 |
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What's working: the design in general and what not Corrections: I don't like the yellow. You should tone it down to maybe a cream or a tawny or something, but that yellow is just an eyesore. I agree with Box on the pawpads, and pink nails? Overall: Decent. Vote: Pending |
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Fugue | Jee | Mahou | Cadet Sandii: You're an idiot, Jee. | |
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| Kana | Feb 14 2011, 04:57 PM Post #6 |
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I fixed the paw pads to a more realistic color. The nails are pink because they have no coloring, much like a luecistic or albino rabbit might have. I tried to take some of the green out of the beige parts, but I was going for a pale khaki color, not yellow... so I was wondering if that's okay? Maybe the colors are different on my computer or something. If you still dun like it I'll change it. :3 |
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