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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 12 2011, 09:23 PM (543 Views) | |
| Mocha Latte | Jan 12 2011, 09:23 PM Post #1 |
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Reference Image: ![]() Only did SLIGHT editing to the lineart. Name: Vik Weight: around 84lbs History & Origin: Life in the beginning for Vik was wonderful though his dark appearance seemed rather odd for his kind. He was cherished by his family, being blessed with a caring mother and strong father. Sadly, as the male aged things started to change. Upon turning 10 years of age Vik's mother was going under abuse from the father and soon enough decided to take her own life. The father, being a rather arrogant fool believed this was Vik fault, thinking Vik's very existence was the cause of his love's despair which resulted in her death. Vik was since then beaten and abused, soon enough the abuse went so far as his father broke and tore the young Zuet's tail off. After this little incident his father backed off a bit with the abuse, only injuring him enough to break the skin and not scar. Upon turning 15 or so Vik started showing signs of Homosexuality and his father was disgusted by it. He found it unnatural and an insult to the Zuet Hekog species; therefore disowned his son and turned him into an outcast among the clan. Years after Vik had traveled; he had turn into a selfish, cold, extremely prideful individual; putting on the act that he doesn't care about others and being utterly self-centered. But underneath that tough exterior he's rather a softy. At age 20 the Zuet found himself within the comfortable confines of Redwood Ravine. Now upon recent aging he lives comfortably upon these lands and lives his life as he pleases. [Bah it's kind of rough but..I hope it'll do.] RP Sample: Ears pinned back and lips curled upward, eyes narrowed in upon the fiend who has so foolishly stolen his meal. A sickening hiss escaped the Zuet while staring the thief down. Muscles stiffening and stub of a tail doing all in its power to make the appropriate stance as Vik let out a harsh 'roar' towards the fox. Sneaky creature hissed itself and lashed out towards the Zuet Hekog. Male only allowed a grumble bubble up from his throat as he leaped forward at the animal. Lips curled and jowls going in to attempt to snap at the creature's thin form. Luckily the animal moved and retreated, running away from Vik and allowing him to stand in victory. .though now he didn't have a thing to eat. [ 8C I have to say. . .you must forgive me on this. .post. My muse has been down so low lately. . D8 but I tried.] Age: 23 Gender: Male. |
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| Box | Jan 13 2011, 10:06 AM Post #2 |
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What's Working: His markings ~~~ They remind me of a tabby cat's almost. Corrections Needed: I don't see much of anything. Overall Impression: I like that you didn't go straight (lolbadpun) to the taboo template for this character. He's got a rough life behind him, and it looks like that's where he'll leave it? Vote: Yes |
| My RWR Alts are:Box the Zuet HekogDevaru the WolfTrample the TanciRah in Fu Enle Beta in Acwellan Lone Tanci | |
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| Akebia | Jan 13 2011, 10:39 AM Post #3 |
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What's Working: I love the markings, his past seems well thought out. and the fact he's different give him a bonus. Corrections Needed: as much as i love the coloring and the markings im not to sure if his markings are white and black or just dark and light grays. that might be a problem im not to sure 8D; Overall Impression: I like it! c: a lot and would love seeing him around Vote:Yes |
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Akebia, Zuet hekog. Fu Enlé Tuerie, Canine. Pending | |
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| Mocha Latte | Jan 13 2011, 10:55 AM Post #4 |
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It's uh.. Black... down to a dark grey then light grey. xD OuO;; I do hope it's alright.
Edited by Mocha Latte, Jan 13 2011, 10:58 AM.
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| Redwood Ravine | Jan 16 2011, 08:47 PM Post #5 |
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What's Working: Whoa. Cool design. I like the eye marking, too. Very striking. I like that he's sort of gothic, but not taboo. I like the idea of an evil badass homo demon rabbit. I'm betting Vik would probably be the only ZH able to freak Kix out. Corrections Needed: Normally I don't accept characters with colors like this since they're rare and we have to control how many there are so it stays that way. This one can slide. Overall Impression: Good Vote: Yes |
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