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Ride
Topic Started: Jan 7 2011, 02:30 PM (612 Views)
EmeraldSong
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Name:Koa but likes to go by Ride

Weight: Around 80lbs

History & Origin: Ride's life was never really easy for him. His parents abandoned him when he was only 10 years old, leaving him behind in the cave he once called home. After that day he had been wandering the coasts on the mainland, growing weary with hunger everyday. Since his parents never taught him to hunt nor had he ever seen them hunt, the only thing he could live off of was the occasional berries and leaves. Even water was hard to find, most of it was either saltwater or to muddy and unclean to drink. Before long he finally collapsed on top on a rather large, dead chunk of wood near a canal leading out to the ocean. His breathing was heavy and shallow, the heat of the sun was crashing upon him, sapping what little moisture and strength he had left. Eventually he passed out, to weak to stay conscious any longer.
That night, when the high tides came in, the large piece of wood rose from the sandy shore of the beach and slowly begun to drift out to sea, not going in any particular direction. Eventually, after the near dead Ride finally drifted ashore, Akebia, another Zuet, happened to be passing by when he came ashore. She rushed down to help him, carrying his near-lifeless body to a nearby cave. She put him in the back of the cave so other animals wouldn't be tempted to mess with him in any way. After awhile, Ride sort of developed a small crush for Ake, only to be crushed by realization of her being with another already.

RP Sample: Ride sighed, it had been another long, boring day sitting in his small cave near the beach. It had been 10 whole years since Akebia found his almost lifeless body floating ashore the Ravine. By now he had grown stronger, learned how to hunt, and other such things that Zuet Hekogs do. He had made a few friends in other parts of the ravine, but being very forgetful, he can never remember there names easily. He perked up his ears to a slight rustle of leaves nearby. He ran back further in him cave then slowly started to walk by out again. "Ake!" he called, "Is that you?"
"Who else would it be?" she giggled in response.
"Okay," he sighed in relief, "I figured it was you, but I can never be to sure, ya know?" He laughed, trotting up to cuddle next to her. As they watched another beautiful sunset, he accidentally let a few words slip that had been in his mind for ages, "I love you..."

Age: 21

Gender: Male

(On a side note, the chest/belly/under tail marking aren't white, there a light gray. It just looks white compared to the darker shades of gray around it)

Edit1: Changed name to Koa and nickname to Ride
Edit2: Added half of his human form
Edited by EmeraldSong, Jan 17 2011, 07:50 PM.
My characters in RwR:
EmeraldSong- The Tanci Owsla
Ride/Koa-The Zuet Hekog
Shakey the quiet Freak
Zapzy the Elemental Dragon
Abeno the Hybrid Fox
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The name...? Doesn't seem like a tree/flower and it's four letters.
"Kyo eka guzagtah." We are family.
Our howls are heard as many, but our hearts beat as one.
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Jan 10 2011, 03:54 PM
The name...? Doesn't seem like a tree/flower and it's four letters.


What's Working: He's an ausssssie! :D
Corrections Needed: I might make your light grey a little darker too, but thats just me. And his name, which you fixed.
Overall Impression: Cuuute.
Vote: Yes
Edited by Box, Jan 13 2011, 09:45 AM.
My RWR Alts are:Box the Zuet HekogDevaru the WolfTrample the TanciRah in Fu Enle Beta in Acwellan Lone Tanci
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Jan 10 2011, 03:54 PM
The name...? Doesn't seem like a tree/flower and it's four letters.
I could find another name for him, but use that alt? And Ride could be like his nickname or something :D (Was thinking maybe Koa-timber tree, Ash-Fraxinus, I like Koa better)
Edited by EmeraldSong, Jan 11 2011, 05:25 PM.
My characters in RwR:
EmeraldSong- The Tanci Owsla
Ride/Koa-The Zuet Hekog
Shakey the quiet Freak
Zapzy the Elemental Dragon
Abeno the Hybrid Fox
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Jan 11 2011, 05:16 PM
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Jan 10 2011, 03:54 PM
The name...? Doesn't seem like a tree/flower and it's four letters.
I could find another name for him, but use that alt? And Ride could be like his nickname or something :D (Was thinking maybe Koa-timber tree, Ash-Fraxinus, I like Koa better)
koa sounds cuuuuuuuuute :D
My RWR Alts are:Box the Zuet HekogDevaru the WolfTrample the TanciRah in Fu Enle Beta in Acwellan Lone Tanci
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You guys, please vote properly. :P

What's Working: Most everything :)
Corrections Needed: The name, like the others have been saying.
Overall Impression: Nice and too the point
Vote: Yes
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lol oops, sorry. :D
My RWR Alts are:Box the Zuet HekogDevaru the WolfTrample the TanciRah in Fu Enle Beta in Acwellan Lone Tanci
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