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| Tweet Topic Started: Dec 6 2010, 06:07 PM (550 Views) | |
| Akebia | Dec 6 2010, 06:07 PM Post #1 |
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Edits include: raised her age three years. Reference Image: ![]() [ also the darker almost black stripes are just a dark gray they are not black] Name:Akebia Weight:73lbs Age:21 Gender:Female History & Origin:Akebia's life was simple for the first few years. she spent most of her time with her father and learned what she could from him. Her father taught her to fend for her self. to fight on her own, and to make a kill. One day she was practicing hunting around their den. chasing lizards about. her parents both sleeping in their little warren. And that's when the tremors began. Their home caved in, burying her parents alive. She ended up wandering till she found some place new to call home. but still to this day she remains very nomadic. Never able to stay in one place for to long. RP Sample: Akebia's ears perked as the crows swooped and called at her, it seemed as if they we're laughing at the young Zuet, mocking her for her foolishness to travel the narrow mountain path, and perhaps they were right. Her wire thin pelt didn't at all seem thick enough to brave the harsh climate. She'd no idea what at all she was looking for, shelter perhaps from the brittle winter freeze. her long auburn mane hid putrid green eyes.Though the color was not the most alluring they still seemed so very gentle, even if they we're hidden under a unruly mess. Large paws left their imprints in the cold snow as she wandered the flat near the point of the mountain. a brisk gust blew frost from atop the weathered ruins that she made her way into. To her surprise it seemed that some one had made this their home. crates and barrels, and a warm fire with a cooking pot over it. she moved closer to the fire curling her self on the warm blankets next to it. a content sigh leaving her as she managed to find a cozy place to spend the night. ![]() its hard to find three letter names that aren't taken D: so I looked up tree types hope that its alright Edited by Akebia, Jan 11 2011, 03:17 AM.
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Akebia, Zuet hekog. Fu Enlé Tuerie, Canine. Pending | |
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| Box | Dec 8 2010, 09:08 AM Post #2 |
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What's Working: That Name. Its a vine, right? Or at least, on Wikipedia it is. My mom has taught me a wonderful respect for vines. She loves to hate them. She grows them with the intention of containing them-- and then they're growing up the house popping siding off. Vines are aweful. also, those effin' rosettes are cute. Corrections Needed: None Overall Impression: Good :3 Vote: Yes |
| My RWR Alts are:Box the Zuet HekogDevaru the WolfTrample the TanciRah in Fu Enle Beta in Acwellan Lone Tanci | |
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| Akebia | Dec 12 2010, 11:52 AM Post #3 |
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I think that it is a vine c: and yes vines can be nasty D:, but I thought the name was pretty c:. thanks for the feed back <3
Edited by Akebia, Dec 12 2010, 11:52 AM.
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Akebia, Zuet hekog. Fu Enlé Tuerie, Canine. Pending | |
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| Redwood Ravine | Dec 15 2010, 01:20 PM Post #4 |
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What's Working: I'm not a big fan of orphans or "my family died tragically" backgrounds, but I'm guilty of it too. I really like the markings. Purdy! I like how simple and to the point your application is. Simple characters are often the most successful. Corrections Needed: Overall Impression: Good Vote: Yes |
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| Akebia | Dec 15 2010, 02:27 PM Post #5 |
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^^; normally i try to refrain from having family issues. but i was at a loss of what to do with the parents.Who knows >3> just cause they we're buried doesn't mean they didn't eventually dig them selves out! XD; :p Hehe thank you! c: i hope that she does end up rather successful! Thank you again for the feedback! |
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thanks for the feed back <3
11:38 AM Jul 11