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| Tweet Topic Started: Nov 29 2010, 07:29 PM (480 Views) | |
| Infectious | Nov 29 2010, 07:29 PM Post #1 |
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Reference Image: ![]() Name: Rhubarb Weight: 85lbs (When Full Grown) 75lbs (At age 15) History & Origin: Rhubarb was born to a very material family. Starting at the age she could walk, she began indulging in her parent's pastimes. Sitting on the beach collecting shells, finding pretty rocks, and taking wooden beads from old human buildings. Together they would forage for berries to make dyes, and together they would gang up on the lone wolf or other animal to raid their cache. However, what she saw was a strict sense of "this is mine." There was no "family" anything. It was either Mom's, or Dad's, or Rhubarb's. The only thing shared was food. Rhubarb would usually go out in search of substances to make her dyes with, occasionally finding the rabbit at the berry bush and killing it to two in one search. By living like this, she learned to live by a certain code: Take what you want, What's yours is yours, and Work hard. Sharing has become a sign of weakness in her eyes, and has no tolerance for those who are not ready for whatever may lie before them. This has filled her out for combat and survival, but not so much for social life. She will be destined to be possessive over her friends, her lovers, and her family. RP Sample: The tensity of the situation was up. She had the young zuet up against a rock, and leaned in closer, her face only inches away from that of the thief. "You ate my blackberries." She hissed, her warms breath hot on the air. "YOU ATE THEM. THEY WERE MINE!" No cries of pity would stop her there. The reddish zuet jerked up her paw and was about to go and try to swipe her claws across his eyes, but slowly put it back down. This was another zuet. She shouldn't be doing this. But she was. She turned her head, then looked back to the young one. She didn't want his berries. She wanted her own, but they were gone now. Gone. Age: 16 Gender: Female Editted with new hair color~ Edited by Infectious, Dec 5 2010, 05:40 AM.
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| Infectious | Ilut Upsilon of Imber Acwellan | Rhubarb Zuet Hekog | |
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| Jee | Dec 5 2010, 05:30 AM Post #2 |
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Pros: The story and Rp post are lovely~ Cons: The pinkish bits of the hair near the base are kinda iffy to me. Overall Impression: Nice. c: Vote: Yep. |
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Fugue | Jee | Mahou | Cadet Sandii: You're an idiot, Jee. | |
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| Redwood Ravine | Dec 15 2010, 01:30 PM Post #3 |
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What's Working: I like how you've predicted your future weight. Her design is beautiful. I like that she is spunky. Be aware that the ZH in RwR have a strict social order. You might want to start a posse. Corrections Needed: Overall Impression: Fun Vote: Yes |
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| Bix | Dec 15 2010, 01:43 PM Post #4 |
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Pros: I love her attitude, her design is nice too. I like your rp post as well, I love when people keep their characters... in character lol... and you do a great job of that. Cons: ... Overall Impression: Very noice~ Vote: Yes. |
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Bix Zuet Hekog Chief Owsla & Advertiser see my im screen names? that means I don't mind if you add me~ | |
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