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| Keia | Nov 10 2010, 11:09 PM Post #1 |
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Reference Image:![]() Name: Smo short for Smoketree Weight: 75 History & Origin: North American born but London raised she was an oddball out of an already strange family. The only girl out of a litter of five. She followed after her brothers in just about everything. Being fast and looking like smoke seem to help out when her brothers got her into get in a tight spot. Raised more as a human she didn't have a clue what the hell a Zuet was. All she knew was that her family was strange and could shift into an equal strange thing. However on the rare visits to her grandparents she learned that something just weren't allowed. Like cutting on dyeing ones hair, or fighting with the wolves and rabbits. Elders were to be respected since they hold the key to the information they needed. The most taboo thing she had ever down was piercing her ears. Being raised mostly human however, it was kind of hard not to follow the coward. Being in the world of furcadia it was easy for everyone to overlook the fact that she was part hare. For those who couldn't seem to stop staring, often time got themselves a reminder of how bad Smo's temper was. About the time she was fifteen she learned something about herself that damn near kicked out of the family. It was one thing to be a tomboy but when it came down to her being a lesbian it was a big no. Trying to do the right thing and pretend to be something she wasn't was probably the hardest thing she ever done. Being threatened to be kicked out of the house made her realize just how hard her life was going to be. Turning more toward being a loner since she was afraid of being rejected like before. Upon her twentieth birthday she decided to take a trip back to America to learn the truth about her strange family. That's how she ended up here in Redwood Ravine. RP Sample: Smo stood within the crowd of her brothers and slowly shook her head even as they changed into their Zuet form. "Didn't I tell ya dat Da wasn't gonna like et? Retarded twit, why de hell would anyone want cabbage of breakfest?" The others laughed as they stretched there limbs and looked around. Before they knew it, Smo bolted out the back door into the field behind the house like a bat out of hell. "Ya'll never beat me so stop tryin." She called over her shoulder with a taunting laugh. Age: 20 Gender: Gay, Female Edited by Keia, Dec 11 2010, 12:54 AM.
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| Jee | Dec 5 2010, 05:17 AM Post #2 |
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Pros: The backstory and that stuff works. Cons: I don't like the yellow on the body. It doesn't really work, and I don't consider vibrant yellow a natural colour. Overall Impression: As stated, the design kinda throws me off. Vote: Yes, now that design has changed. EDIT: Approved since design change. Edited by Jee, Dec 15 2010, 01:48 PM.
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Fugue | Jee | Mahou | Cadet Sandii: You're an idiot, Jee. | |
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| Keia | Dec 6 2010, 05:15 PM Post #3 |
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Colors have been editted |
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| Box | Dec 8 2010, 09:15 AM Post #4 |
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What's Working: I like your new colors and design, its much more natural. Corrections Needed: I don't really understand what's going on with the history. It feels like its missing a chunk. Overall Impression: Almost there-- I'd just like to see the history expanded more. Vote: Pending |
| My RWR Alts are:Box the Zuet HekogDevaru the WolfTrample the TanciRah in Fu Enle Beta in Acwellan Lone Tanci | |
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| Keia | Dec 11 2010, 12:57 AM Post #5 |
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Add more to the history, thanks for the input. |
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| Keia | Dec 11 2010, 03:30 AM Post #6 |
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Added more to the history, thanks for the input.
Edited by Keia, Dec 11 2010, 03:30 AM.
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| Redwood Ravine | Dec 15 2010, 01:27 PM Post #7 |
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What's Working: Wow! I really like the design and colors. I think the name is awesome! I kind of wish she was male. I like the idea that she's rebellious. Note that traditional warrens usually use homosexual ZH as concubines, and aren't allowed to breed. It's that or death. It's not a very liberal civalized age. Consider this when you imagine your future RP interaction with other ZH. Avoid IC Owsla and Rah. Corrections Needed: Overall Impression: Interesting! Vote: Yes |
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