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| Tweet Topic Started: Oct 21 2010, 09:26 PM (745 Views) | |
| Wally-Burger | Oct 21 2010, 09:26 PM Post #1 |
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Reference Image: ![]() Did a little reworking and changed her hair color. Name: Lyk Weight: 76 lbs History & Origin:Bouncing along it was clear that the partial albino, a daughter of inbreeding, had not quite reached the same level of maturity of her peers. Instead seeming more child like in her play, pinks and whites accenting the deamenor. It was one such day that found her in her current frame of life, as a child bounding away untill the woods claimed her for lost, it wasn't untill a dark furred adult took her in the zuet had a higher function then simple play and amusment of others. With years passed since then Lyk had since began to almost worship that zuet, trailing him like a lost animal to which she probably could still be considered, or the closest to true, a school girl after a crush. She was simplistic, obediant, but for it happy as could be even on damper days, a trait not to be scoffed at. RP Sample: (A quick rp between me and Cre) Cre slid like a selkie from the water, after years of ingesting and being so near fish and the swamps, his pelt had an oil like quality to it, the water sliding off as if he himself had a fishes scales. But for all the males fish like qualities the catch in his mouth while a creature of the water was no fish, a couple squirming pink crawfish clutched tight for him an his accomplice. "Lyk." The creature called, his voice deep and unamused in tone, a lions tail swishing back and forth to spray fans of water droplets in either direction. Lyk had been off in her own world by the waters edge chasing after bugs here and there catching them between her paws concentraiting hard on the little six legged creatures. After a moment of watching and waiting a particular bug she shifted her wirey muscles and pounced slamming her paws down on the insect. The insect had no way of a escape and squirmed under the zuet's paws till she lifted and peeked in, the insect taking it's change and hopping off in a random direction. Pouting for the moment Lyk looked around for another bug but was cought off gaurd at the deep familiar voice. Jumping from her spot and looking wildly around for the other till she laid eyes on him and just stared, taking in the beauty of the beast. Ignoring the tone of the voice. A sigh escaped Cre's maw, he found it hard to be irritated at the little albino, finding a sort of amusment from watching her jump around, it was probably that that lead him to lift a dark paw. Picking up one of the still squirming crawfish and toss it at her feet, the creature amking a wet 'plopping' noise upon impact. "Lunch, I have more if you like it." He spoke, voice less unbemused, simply dry as usual, laying down in a single motion, fur seeming to meld with the stone below the two. Lyk's ears perked straight up grinning as she saw the crawfish. Being the little kid everyone had made her out to be since her teens she began to bat the 'fish around a few times before taking it's body and tossing it up in the air catching it in her mouth as it came back down to earth. Licking her pink nose of anything she pranced up to Cre and plopped down next to the male. She looked almost completly white next to the dark zuet and stone as she got uncomfortably close to him. Age: 22 Gender: Female Other: Lul at random beauty of the beast pun in post. And uhhhh hope the albino thing works 8u;;;;;;;;;;;;; Edit: New reference image Possible add to back story? - Thinking possible solution to the inbreeding and albinism as a kitten. Possibly the two parents were half siblings, though did now know this, coming from the same Father in two warrens. And when Lyk was born they had left her for dead out in the forest where someone of another species had picked her up and raised her till she had run off on her own. Really blunt but it's a start xD; Edited by Wally-Burger, Nov 12 2010, 12:17 AM.
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Oh my sugar blossoms! If idiots could fly this place would be a freakin' airport! | |
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| Eox | Oct 21 2010, 09:53 PM Post #2 |
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What's Working: I like the name. I think its neat that your applying with albinism/semi-albinism. Corrections Needed: Uhh, none that I can think of, unless the albinism isn't fine with Tia. xD Overall Impression: Pretty neat. <3 Vote: Yes |
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| Jee | Oct 21 2010, 10:42 PM Post #3 |
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What's Working: I freaking adore those ears. Just sayin'. Corrections Needed: I don't see anything, unless Tia's got a problem with the albinism. Overall Impression: Nice. Vote: Yes |
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| Box | Oct 22 2010, 06:10 AM Post #4 |
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What's Working: Markings-- do love. (Is she lusistic (sp?) perhaps? I believe that is a form of partial albinism.) Corrections Needed: I can see that she's albino as a result of inbreeding. How did she survive the fact that she ought to have been killed as a pup? Overall Impression: I like the visual, and her personality, but the inbreeding is sorta out of place to me. Albino animals dont have to come from inbreeding to exist, so why have her inbred? Vote: Pending |
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| Wally-Burger | Oct 22 2010, 11:25 AM Post #5 |
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Thanks for all the good reviews so far guys! XD As for the inbreeding part I thought it'd be an interesting reason behind the albinism rather then just "Hey look at me I'm albino yaaaay~" There's not much more beyond that I can really say as to why I picked the inbreeding other than I've only seen one other Zuet out there that's also an inbred and I thought it was an interesting idea. As for how she survived... hmmm that's a good question! Only explanation I can think of right now for that it another Zuet took her in behind her parents backs or her parents left her for dead and another stumbled upon her and didn't know about the inbreeding *Edit*Oh! I really love the idea of Leucism! I knew there was a medical term/condition of it but I could not think of the term or find it when I googled partial albinism. Thanks Box! Edited by Wally-Burger, Oct 22 2010, 11:27 AM.
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| Redwood Ravine | Oct 26 2010, 03:48 PM Post #6 |
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What's Working: I love albinos, and partial albinos. Eykodu Hesfuh was albino due to inbreeding. Corrections Needed: I'd like to see a resolved reason for her parents to allow an inbred and deformed kitten to live. Overall Impression: Neato Vote: Yes |
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| Aka | Oct 26 2010, 09:54 PM Post #7 |
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What's Working: The name, and age. I'm not sure what guidelines there are on Albinos, some animals that are albino are usually larger than the standard breed but I think specifics would have to be discussed with Tiamat. The design I think is fairly pretty, and I don't think I've yet seen an albino Zuet Hekog application so I am fairly surprised and now that I'm aware Tiamat accepts the albinoism I fully support it as well. For the most part, her history seems pretty steady and I don't have much to comment about the roleplay sample. Corrections Needed: As stated previously, some resolve would be nice. It is to my understanding that Zuet Hekog, although are fairly sexual creatures, are also very picky and particular about their breeding. I didn't think they'd ever inbreed, so more information provided in regards to that bit would be greatly appreciated. My second note is that, although Lyk is an albino, I do not accept pinkish hair. I don't think it's a natural color besides what is found in flowers, so I'd settle with something grayish or more white, but that's just my preference of opinion, I don't really think it'll effect the overall decision to accept you as a player of the Zuet Hekog later on. Overall Impression: Acceptable Vote: Yes Edited by Aka, Oct 26 2010, 09:56 PM.
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| Wally-Burger | Nov 12 2010, 12:19 AM Post #8 |
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Made some edits to the original post, just making this post so that the topic shows up with new junk. Go look hoes >:U |
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