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| Bli | Oct 16 2010, 06:29 PM Post #1 |
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Reference Image: New picture..againName: Bli (BLEE) Weight: 75 Personality: Childish and scared, Bli was, but she always put on a veil of a hardass before moving to her childish, playful ways. She'd often not feel comfortable around other zuets and got along more with hares than her real kind, probably from all the isolation. She was scared for no explainable reason and the isolation she had when she was in her teens didn't help. When she did find Zuets she was comfortable around. Because she wasn't comfortable, she would try to be in charge, be like she was higher than unknown Zuets. History & Origin: From birth Bli had a perfect family, mother and father loved eachother a long with their other kits, the entire family took care of eachother, and this was no facade. The Warren was a tight knit group, there were no secrets, so when Bli started to seem scared of the others for no apparent reason, rumors spread. Her parents didn't want to worry about her so they just took her and let her deal with her problems. Her sessions to her self grew and after long isolation was the outcome. She'd stay in her den and in the dark, only when someone brang her food would she see others. One day the food didn't come, so she wandered outside to see that everyone was gone, they had moved on, forgetting Bli. She waited for them to no prevail, they had really left. Bli didn't think there was anything wrong with her, until now, she thought that it was her fault they left, but she held that inside and convinced herself that it wasn't, that they had just left because of other reasons. That day she cut and dyed her hair, peirced her ear, putting on what she truely felt inside. She soon forgot about her family and lived on her own, hunting on her own, often turning to a Hare to find something to talk to, or relate too. Though one day she saw something that gave her a flashback and she burst into tears, the memory of her mothers face, the last time she saw her, saddened and stressed, unlike the other times. She realized how much she meant to her mother, but didn't know why and why she was so different from her other kin. Leaving the next day she found Redwood, something that didn't remind her of her past, only how it used to be. Redwood was a beautiful place and she loved the open space and the prey. Though she had forgotten her bad points and didn't think she had anything wrong with her anymore, she continued to cut and dye her hair, she had gotten used to the way it was and nothing small was going to make her change it. RP Sample: The rush of clear water tempted Bli upon sight to take a dive. Her childish ways making her curious of how cold the water really was. Approaching it cautiously, the hare would inspect the surface before touching it; sniffing, throwing pebbles and peering into the depths of the creek. When at last she felt it was okay to try, her right paw would dip slowly into it, sure it was not too cold. She lept into it gracefully, bounding around in the water and diving beneath the surface. Inherently the fish were scared away and her fun only lasted a few short momeents before her bones chilled and her muse for the water was lost, pushing her from the water to dry herself off. Age: 24 Gender: Female Edited by Bli, Oct 27 2010, 08:09 PM.
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| Eox | Oct 17 2010, 09:37 AM Post #2 |
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What's Working: I sort of like the design, though Zuet's aren't exactly spotted. I like the fact that you're applying with the 'taboo mane' thing. xDD Corrections Needed: Change the colors, Zuet's aren't normally white/offwhite like you have yours, but you could just change the colors to be darker. Also I don't think Zuet's can be spotted, but you could change it to be rosetted. And I think the colored/stained hair needs a reason unless it's stained. Overall Impression: Pretty neat. Vote: Pending Edited by Eox, Oct 17 2010, 09:37 AM.
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[2:14:26 AM] Jared: because you're just a fucking badass [2:14:27 AM] Jared: thats why | |
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| Bli | Oct 17 2010, 11:41 AM Post #3 |
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Okay, so I changed the look, and added her personality, I think that will explain some things. |
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| Reform | Oct 17 2010, 12:24 PM Post #4 |
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What's Working: Design is neat. Corrections Needed: None, now Overall Impression: Neat! Vote: Yes Edited by Reform, Oct 18 2010, 10:12 AM.
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"Kyo eka guzagtah." We are family. Our howls are heard as many, but our hearts beat as one. | |
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| Redwood Ravine | Oct 17 2010, 02:10 PM Post #5 |
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What's Working: I like that she has a childish personality. Her markings are rather nice, I like that you went with the rosettes. Corrections Needed: In her history I'd like to see more of an explanation as to why she's taboo. Taboo isn't really a type of fashion sense, it's a life-style choice that usually tells others "I'm fucked up. I've fucked up. I'm tainted in some way." It's seen as unattractive and, well, taboo. To some ZH, those who practice the taboo are not suitable mates. Your character needs to have a good reason to bring this kind of stigma to herself. Overall Impression: Getting there! Vote: Yes Edited by Redwood Ravine, Oct 27 2010, 09:53 AM.
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| Redwood Ravine | Oct 17 2010, 02:10 PM Post #6 |
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And I just saw your change just now, I like that a lot better! |
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| Jee | Oct 18 2010, 07:03 PM Post #7 |
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Zuets can be any feline marking. I assume spots are included, such as cheetah. |
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Fugue | Jee | Mahou | Cadet Sandii: You're an idiot, Jee. | |
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| Box | Oct 21 2010, 08:09 PM Post #8 |
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What's Working: The rosettes <3 Love it. Corrections Needed: I'm with Tia, after coming to understand what kind of judging and general negitivity this can bring to your character's life-- what has made her interested in that? Overall Impression: I'm overall kind of confused. I want to know more about this character before I vote on her. Vote: Pending |
| My RWR Alts are:Box the Zuet HekogDevaru the WolfTrample the TanciRah in Fu Enle Beta in Acwellan Lone Tanci | |
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| Jee | Oct 21 2010, 10:32 PM Post #9 |
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What's Working: I like the design and simple colours. Corrections Needed: I'd also like to see why she's chosen to be all taboo. Overall Impression: Along with Box, confused as to her choices. Vote: Pending |
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Fugue | Jee | Mahou | Cadet Sandii: You're an idiot, Jee. | |
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| Bli | Oct 26 2010, 10:04 PM Post #10 |
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She likes to seem like she's all messed up, but truly she came from the perfect family. She doesn't like people seeing how she is silly and childish, or scared. She is often scared and doesn't know why she can't explain it maybe some slight mental illness passed from her family, paranoia or something. She likes to seem like she's in charge, even if she isn't. So to be a total badass, She cuts and dyed her hair but fails at changing her attitude. She also finds that it's easier to scare people off when you seem crazy but aren't really. |
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| Aka | Oct 26 2010, 10:14 PM Post #11 |
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Hey guys, please keep everything to one post, instead of making multiple posts. That way I can go through and ready everything said by each person without worrying about missing something -reading these applications are quite time consuming so it's just something I'd appreciate and something I think Box and Tiamat would appreciate as well. Just put at the bottom of your post (Edit YOUR NEW COMMENT HERE). Thanks! =D What's Working: I like the colors and particular markings, the age and name are also quite acceptable. Bli is a fun word to say. Although I do appreciate the bit of explanation you've posted near the bottom of the thread, I'd appreciate if you could copy and paste that into your main post and then delete that post. Also, I hate that she has purple hair cause it's not nature at all, but thank god it's dyed otherwise I'd have to decline this application, so good job explaining that. Corrections Needed: So far, none that I see are needed at this point in time. Overall Impression: Acceptable Vote: Yes Edited by Aka, Oct 26 2010, 10:14 PM.
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New Image Coming Soon Taneest "Forgiveness, is surrendering my right to hurt you, for hurting me" Aka | Moltenchier | FantastiqueArts | |
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| Bli | Oct 28 2010, 03:15 PM Post #12 |
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History changed. Oh, and personality a bit. C: Hope you like it. |
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