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| Eoba | Oct 14 2010, 05:46 PM Post #1 |
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Reference Image: This Image Was Deleted And Put Down Below As A Fixer To His Neon Lime Green Hair Name: Eoba Weight: Roughly 86lbs History & Origin:The very definition of taboo, cut hair, and stitched lips. Though reasons were there for the need to look as such. As a young boy, Oba was stuck following in his fathers footsteps, eventually something finally snapped! From far off in northern america this always family loving boy, the lad was distraught and hopes of family life after watching the death of his mother before his very eyes was shattered. Now appearing as his father wasn't turning out to be a good thing, if murder was in his blood he wanted nothing to do with it. His hair was cut and dyed a grassy green, concocted of various plants and even the own stringy stalks that grew up from the dirt. Corners of the mouth sewn shut, never then would he be able to speak of what horror he observed. In his wild transformation, his attitude and use for common emotion diminished, though not completely without feeling he kept a place open for those who deserved it. Now seventeen years of age, Eoba stuck close to what friends he could make. In the years ahead he hoped to gain back what he'd lost in his own way. RP Sample: Warv wander'd along with Ella and Slim, so far his only friends, well besides his lover of course. For now life was good, but there was some business to take care of. Strolling in soon after the smaller of his friends, cold emerald eyes locked on the bastard there had been an earlier quarrel with. His words were nothing in his mind, death came to everyone in time, it was just how they die that told the story. "You know old man... You speak of hell and places you don't even understand. Though being without religious beliefs I don't choose where I go. I know where I will end up. In the ground, with the rest of the fallen who faught and defended what they held close. We all become food for the lower organizms." Wandering round, kicking the fish out from under the mutt, he'd stare and smirk. Parting his lips to speak once more. "You know... You're right... my father isn't here now.. he hasnt been around for many many years... Do you know why that is? It's because I killed the son of a bitch... I couldn't stand livnig in his shadow anymore, so I did what I wanted to get rid of the weight of having to end up like him." With that, War took his place back beside his friends. Waiting for the first blow to be struck upon any of the three. Age: 22 Gender: Male -{ Notes: The hair is a slightly less vibrant green but it turned out in such a way with SAI, I as on my medications when i was creating this therefore I was slightly unaware of the brightness of the hue. As far as the Rp example goes, I borrowed this from my alt when he was in a time of great anger. It most resembles the attitude of the Zuet Hekog that I could find among my Rp's. I hope I'm well accepted into the community of Zuet Hekogs :D! And if changes must be made to the ref as in the brightness of the color I can do so. }- |
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| Eox | Oct 14 2010, 07:49 PM Post #2 |
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What's Working: I like the use of the brown and black together, I haven't seen that much coloration like that on ZH's, especially what seems like brown markings on black. I like the unique design. Corrections Needed: I don't think ZH's would normally dye/stain their hair, but it seems like you have a good reason for it! c: Overall Impression: Really good. Vote: Yes /I hope I did this right. xD/ |
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| Redwood Ravine | Oct 14 2010, 07:59 PM Post #3 |
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What's Working: I like that he has a working history, which explains his appearance. I like his color combo, it's really nice. His markings are bad-ass. Corrections Needed: I'm not sure what Eoba means. There are some rules about the names as well. I know you said it was mostly an accident, but the bright green, though it looks beautiful and I really like it, should probably be taken back a notch. In the continuity of Acwellan, the ZH create the dyes for their ear staining ritual, so fur staining is perfectly acceptable IMO. However, I think a green of that vibrancy would hard to make, rare, or both. You might want to tone it down, or use it more sparingly. You may also want to keep in mind that traditionally raised ZH tend to be very prejudice and he may be victim to a lot of abuse, even form Kix--but that's up to you ![]() Overall Impression: I like him! Just clear up those few things in reply and I'll give you a yes ![]() Vote: Yes Edited by Redwood Ravine, Oct 16 2010, 03:25 PM.
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| Reform | Oct 14 2010, 10:13 PM Post #4 |
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What's Working: I like the rather simple design as compared to Zuet's like mine (lol /sob). Corrections Needed: The haaair~ It's just a bit much. Perhaps try and choose a different green? Like Tia said, tone it down and it would be good. Kix is all strange and taboo because he can be Overall Impression: Good C: Vote: Yes, given you tone down the hair. c: |
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"Kyo eka guzagtah." We are family. Our howls are heard as many, but our hearts beat as one. | |
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| Eoba | Oct 14 2010, 11:11 PM Post #5 |
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Alrighty guys I fixed his rather.... VIBRANT hair and the old image has been deleted.
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| Eoba | Oct 14 2010, 11:12 PM Post #6 |
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OH! and one more thing, Thank you EVERYONE for your comments on Eoba. I kinda realized this morning his hair needed to be fixed cause I thought it was rather bright myself... But He's fixed now and sexier than ever!
Edited by Eoba, Oct 14 2010, 11:13 PM.
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| Aka | Oct 18 2010, 07:09 PM Post #7 |
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Fierce and Strong
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Just Editing Some Of My Post What's Working: The fact that his over-all markings are simple is good and rather appealing. The history is acceptable from my point of view, especially since Tiamat approves. Corrections Needed: I wouldn't expect any corrections are needed but I'd like to know what creature with thumbs were able to stitch the sides of his face -unless he transformed and stitched the sides of his mouth by himself, which is also acceptable. I'm not fond of the green color even though there's an accepted explanation for it, I rather like Earthly toned Zuet Hekogs but that's just my style, and not something to take to heart. Overall Impression: Acceptable. Vote: Yes Edited by Aka, Oct 26 2010, 10:34 PM.
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New Image Coming Soon Taneest "Forgiveness, is surrendering my right to hurt you, for hurting me" Aka | Moltenchier | FantastiqueArts | |
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| Redwood Ravine | Oct 19 2010, 11:57 AM Post #8 |
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She's not officially accepted btw. |
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| Box | Oct 21 2010, 08:18 PM Post #9 |
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What's Working: I like the purple skin tone with the black/dark grey fur and the history behind his tabooness. Corrections Needed: Cant think of anything I'd change, since the hair has apparently been toned down. Overall Impression: Good stuff ![]() Vote: Yes |
| My RWR Alts are:Box the Zuet HekogDevaru the WolfTrample the TanciRah in Fu Enle Beta in Acwellan Lone Tanci | |
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| Jee | Oct 21 2010, 10:37 PM Post #10 |
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What's Working: I like the design overall. Corrections Needed: I'm pretty sure that much black is pretty rare, so that's up to Tia for judgment. I don't understand why it has stitched up lips, as that's very strange. Also I don't like the purple paw pads. Overall Impression: Acceptable. Vote: Pending |
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Fugue | Jee | Mahou | Cadet Sandii: You're an idiot, Jee. | |
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| Eoba | Oct 27 2010, 02:43 PM Post #11 |
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The stitched lips were part of him not speaking of the past, its his version of eternal silence I suppose. I can change the pads easily, though it'd be a pain. And he's not really black, more of a darker tone of gray. |
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But He's fixed now and sexier than ever!


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