The Adventures of Auto and Joe

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The Adventures of Auto and Joe; A sprite-type comic.
Topic Started: Aug 22 2007, 09:25 AM (220 Views)
Enigma	Aug 22 2007, 09:25 AM Post #1
PSYCHEEEEEEEEEE! Posts: 223 Group: Members Member #40 Joined: June 6, 2007	Posted this over on the Undernet, wanted to see how it goes over here. It's a comic based on the exploits of two lesser-known and unpopular characters, Auto and Joe the Yellow Demon (not Devil, Demon).



Derek Barona	Aug 22 2007, 10:07 AM Post #2
Now with 50% more Bastard!! Posts: 342 Group: Admin Member #21 Joined: April 22, 2007	The first two are funny, and the last two are sorta dry, textwise. The third one, I'm not really sure a lot COULD be done to improve it, seeing as how it's basically an exposition comic, but the fourth one could probably be tuned up a little, if you wanted. Auto seriously needs to sound more like he does in the first two comics if he's going to be any kind of funny outside of a "prudish, stating the obvious just before he gets the crap knocked out of him" kind of funny.
	*ALL HAIL THE BASTARD KING* I have a very cynical and skewed view of the world. It took me years of practice to achieve it.


Enigma	Aug 22 2007, 11:56 AM Post #3
PSYCHEEEEEEEEEE! Posts: 223 Group: Members Member #40 Joined: June 6, 2007	Yeah, I know what you mean; as I made the last two I figured they weren't funny, but there's not a whole lot to do if they're expositions. As for Auto: He's supposed to be sort of polite, almost to the point of stupididity, while also being oblivious to the world around him and a bit odd for his own good. I don't really see how he's any different from the first two, so if anyone would care to enlighten me....



MohawkMan	Sep 11 2007, 04:28 PM Post #4
Two Mavericks Defeated Posts: 144 Group: Members Member #42 Joined: June 8, 2007	I quite enjoyed them, make more please! Auto should try to convince Dr. Light to let Joe stay with them. Those oblivious characters who somehow remain unscathed are hillarious.



Enigma	Sep 12 2007, 10:21 AM Post #5
PSYCHEEEEEEEEEE! Posts: 223 Group: Members Member #40 Joined: June 6, 2007	You really think that wasn't going to happen? =P



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