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| .lol. | Jul 28 2013, 06:36 PM Post #1 |
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Citizen
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| Xasor | Jul 28 2013, 06:55 PM Post #2 |
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NEGATIVES 1.The stance anim and sprites of the jacket is choppy as hell 2.Same goes for the walk anim and sprites 3 The counter shock sprite looks like he has twisted arms 4.The canon ball is too large 5.For the canon ball is that the explosion or the hitspark either way that fx is way too damn overused find a better one 6.The boat sprite is ugly but It would've been better if he just drops the ship downward and the ship breaks into pieces. 7.The move where he takes the heart should go out the back of his enemy them he uses shambles to get it. It would be better if he just squeezes the heart or he throws it back in so fast that the enemy gets blown backwards. POSITIVE 1. Nice room fx 2. Glad to see your using mugen 1.1 3. Goodluck Questions 1.What kind of gameplay would this character have ? 2. Can the normal cancel to hypers and specials ? 3. What movements does it have ? 4. Does this have any kind of combo system ? 5. Will this have throws ? 6. What button map will you use ? PS. It doesn't even look 90 % it looks like its at 20 %, Polish it better and you will have a nice work. Sadly the only thing I see good in this character is the room fx. Goodluck anyway |
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| heberito95 | Jul 28 2013, 07:02 PM Post #3 |
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very cool! =D |
nanananan batman nanananananan batman =D
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| .lol. | Jul 28 2013, 09:06 PM Post #4 |
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Citizen
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I am very new to create char, this is my first :/ tanks Edited by .lol., Jul 28 2013, 09:06 PM.
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| Xasor | Jul 29 2013, 05:54 AM Post #5 |
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Grand Line Pirate
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.lol., Ok I don't want to bring you down man, but an honest opinion will help you improve rather than the "Good work" comments. |
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| 1120775320 | Jul 29 2013, 09:58 AM Post #6 |
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Citizen
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good |
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| Chris96 | Jul 29 2013, 10:30 AM Post #7 |
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You need to improve more on the sprite. You should make the sprites stance and walk look more flexible like Xasor said. The stance sprites, you can actually make it look more just breathing rather than Law has a bad knee or doing doggy style at the air. |
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| jetredhawk | Aug 6 2013, 12:11 PM Post #8 |
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King of Pirates
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not so good :S work on him please :D |
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