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Trafalgar Law 2 years later
Topic Started: Jul 28 2013, 06:36 PM (1,119 Views)
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Xasor
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NEGATIVES

1.The stance anim and sprites of the jacket is choppy as hell
2.Same goes for the walk anim and sprites
3 The counter shock sprite looks like he has twisted arms
4.The canon ball is too large
5.For the canon ball is that the explosion or the hitspark either way that fx is way too damn overused find a better one
6.The boat sprite is ugly but It would've been better if he just drops the ship downward and the ship breaks into pieces.
7.The move where he takes the heart should go out the back of his enemy them he uses shambles to get it. It would be better if he just squeezes the heart or he throws it back in so fast that the enemy gets blown backwards.

POSITIVE
1. Nice room fx
2. Glad to see your using mugen 1.1
3. Goodluck

Questions
1.What kind of gameplay would this character have ?
2. Can the normal cancel to hypers and specials ?
3. What movements does it have ?
4. Does this have any kind of combo system ?
5. Will this have throws ?
6. What button map will you use ?

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It doesn't even look 90 % it looks like its at 20 %, Polish it better and you will have a nice work. Sadly the only thing I see good in this character is the room fx. Goodluck anyway
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very cool! =D
nanananan batman nanananananan batman =D

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Xasor
Jul 28 2013, 06:55 PM
NEGATIVES

1.The stance anim and sprites of the jacket is choppy as hell
2.Same goes for the walk anim and sprites
3 The counter shock sprite looks like he has twisted arms
4.The canon ball is too large
5.For the canon ball is that the explosion or the hitspark either way that fx is way too damn overused find a better one
6.The boat sprite is ugly but It would've been better if he just drops the ship downward and the ship breaks into pieces.
7.The move where he takes the heart should go out the back of his enemy them he uses shambles to get it. It would be better if he just squeezes the heart or he throws it back in so fast that the enemy gets blown backwards.

POSITIVE
1. Nice room fx
2. Glad to see your using mugen 1.1
3. Goodluck

Questions
1.What kind of gameplay would this character have ?
2. Can the normal cancel to hypers and specials ?
3. What movements does it have ?
4. Does this have any kind of combo system ?
5. Will this have throws ?
6. What button map will you use ?

PS.

It doesn't even look 90 % it looks like its at 20 %, Polish it better and you will have a nice work. Sadly the only thing I see good in this character is the room fx. Goodluck anyway
I am very new to create char, this is my first :/
heberito95
Jul 28 2013, 07:02 PM
very cool! =D
tanks
Edited by .lol., Jul 28 2013, 09:06 PM.
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Xasor
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.lol., Ok I don't want to bring you down man, but an honest opinion will help you improve rather than the "Good work" comments.
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good
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Chris96
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You need to improve more on the sprite.
You should make the sprites stance and walk look more flexible like Xasor said.
The stance sprites, you can actually make it look more just breathing rather than Law has a bad knee or doing doggy style at the air.
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not so good :S work on him please :D
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