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| Coby | Sep 19 2014, 12:07 AM Post #1 |
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Nikola WATTUP
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Is this a good pic for my login screen? I mean it's gonna have a BG and everything, but that's just like the "logo". http://puu.sh/bEXLq/d1a6542cf3.png |
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| Wolfenstein | Sep 19 2014, 12:28 AM Post #2 |
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H4x
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No. |
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| Kitten | Sep 19 2014, 08:31 AM Post #3 |
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Awesomness
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Too bland. Needs to be more visually appealing. |
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| Coby | Sep 19 2014, 11:44 AM Post #4 |
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Nikola WATTUP
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Here's with a bg and stuff: http://puu.sh/bFrMl/902c0f9fec.jpg |
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| Kitten | Sep 19 2014, 02:29 PM Post #5 |
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Awesomness
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Better |
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Sep 19 2014, 02:32 PM Post #6 |
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Ego
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As amateur as it gets. The sword is cut off and still has a white square behind it. Nothing is centered. The background is in poor quality. The text is too close together with new, load and delete. Nothing is appealing. Not the placement, size or quality. |
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| Coby | Sep 19 2014, 04:50 PM Post #7 |
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Nikola WATTUP
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Everything you said is true, and I like your honesty alot ^_^, but instead of criticizing only, can you please tell me some tips to make my work better? |
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| Wolfenstein | Sep 19 2014, 04:51 PM Post #8 |
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H4x
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Play Destiny. |
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| Rage | Sep 19 2014, 05:57 PM Post #9 |
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虚妄激怒
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He already told you what was wrong with it, though. Use deductive reasoning to break down what he's saying you should do. Redo the sword, so that it's not cut off like that at the hilt. (or use a different sword) There's also too much "nothing" behind it, even with the background. Add uniformity; everything seems to be put in without any thought, and looks unaesthetic. Centering everything would be a good place to start. Edit the background, clean up the background, or just use a different one; this one doesn't work well with this. The letters for the buttons are overlapping. Redo it so it's properly spaced out, and easier to read, and more appealing to look at. See above everything. |
| Trying to learn a bit of Moonrunes... I've decided that 赤眼付 is now the official spelling for Akametsuki. Basically means "Red Eyes", though, it kinda also means "Expression of the eyes" | |
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Sep 19 2014, 08:32 PM Post #10 |
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Ego
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Self explanatory. |
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| Rage | Sep 19 2014, 09:07 PM Post #11 |
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虚妄激怒
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Some people need self explanatory things explained to them. |
| Trying to learn a bit of Moonrunes... I've decided that 赤眼付 is now the official spelling for Akametsuki. Basically means "Red Eyes", though, it kinda also means "Expression of the eyes" | |
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