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Topic Started: Sep 19 2014, 12:07 AM (958 Views)
Coby
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Is this a good pic for my login screen? I mean it's gonna have a BG and everything, but that's just like the "logo". http://puu.sh/bEXLq/d1a6542cf3.png
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No.
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Too bland. Needs to be more visually appealing.
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Here's with a bg and stuff: http://puu.sh/bFrMl/902c0f9fec.jpg
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Better
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As amateur as it gets. The sword is cut off and still has a white square behind it. Nothing is centered. The background is in poor quality. The text is too close together with new, load and delete. Nothing is appealing. Not the placement, size or quality.
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Fukyuu
Sep 19 2014, 02:32 PM
As amateur as it gets. The sword is cut off and still has a white square behind it. Nothing is centered. The background is in poor quality. The text is too close together with new, load and delete. Nothing is appealing. Not the placement, size or quality.
Everything you said is true, and I like your honesty alot ^_^, but instead of criticizing only, can you please tell me some tips to make my work better?
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Play Destiny.
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Coby
Sep 19 2014, 04:50 PM
can you please tell me some tips to make my work better?
He already told you what was wrong with it, though. Use deductive reasoning to break down what he's saying you should do.


Fukyuu
Sep 19 2014, 02:32 PM
The sword is cut off and still has a white square behind it.
Redo the sword, so that it's not cut off like that at the hilt. (or use a different sword) There's also too much "nothing" behind it, even with the background.
Fukyuu
Sep 19 2014, 02:32 PM
Nothing is centered.
Add uniformity; everything seems to be put in without any thought, and looks unaesthetic. Centering everything would be a good place to start.
Fukyuu
Sep 19 2014, 02:32 PM
The background is in poor quality.
Edit the background, clean up the background, or just use a different one; this one doesn't work well with this.
Fukyuu
Sep 19 2014, 02:32 PM
The text is too close together with new, load and delete.
The letters for the buttons are overlapping. Redo it so it's properly spaced out, and easier to read, and more appealing to look at.
Fukyuu
Sep 19 2014, 02:32 PM
Nothing is appealing. Not the placement, size or quality.
See above everything.
Trying to learn a bit of Moonrunes... I've decided that 赤眼付 is now the official spelling for Akametsuki. Basically means "Red Eyes", though, it kinda also means "Expression of the eyes"
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Self explanatory.
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Fukyuu
Sep 19 2014, 08:32 PM
Self explanatory.
Some people need self explanatory things explained to them.
Trying to learn a bit of Moonrunes... I've decided that 赤眼付 is now the official spelling for Akametsuki. Basically means "Red Eyes", though, it kinda also means "Expression of the eyes"
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