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| Fan-Fic NFF story Part 2 | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Apr 6 2017, 09:26 PM (690 Views) | |
| Mandingo- | Apr 6 2017, 09:26 PM Post #1 |
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Sage of Six Paths
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Final Fight A new era has began, it is no longer, "Naruto Final Fight". The 4 Great Nations have changed greatly. Some have developed, some have fallen. You already know the past, and for that, you shall be educated about the present/future. HERE'S PART 1 IF YOU HAVEN'T READ IT http://s8.zetaboards.com/NarutoFinalFight/topic/8575907/1/ The New era has began with all kinds of new things. The ninja world now has a way to tell the time, date, and era. Of course the first person to be seen doing this back in the old days ways Uchiha, Ina - as he looked up into the sky, he predicted it would stop raining very soon. His partner Hoshigaki, Shadow didn't believe him, but it stopped. One morning a boy by the name of Uzumaki, Nebton - Son of 6th Hokage Uzmaki, Namochi, stumbled upon a boy getting bullied. It was a young child by the name of Saturn. Nebton quickly used his shadow clone jutsu to distract the bullies as the two boys made a brave escape. They got to know each other an so on. The next day, a strange snake bit Saturn and made gave him - a demonic power. Saturn was nothing like himself, he tried to kill three kids on a train. Nebton stopped that quickly though, with the help of Saturn after he was snapped out of what appears to be a Curse Mark. As the two were approaching the ceremony, two girls laughed at them - Uchiha, Kryss , and Akimichi, Chhaya. Both daughters of Uchiha, Aiichi and Akimichi, Choji. Nebton did not struggle at all during the graduation exam, while his friend Saturn did. Saturn failed and was taken under the wing of Aburamae, Snazzy. Snazzy taught him the ways of the shinobi. While Nebton and the genins were beginning to take part in missions, Saturn was training hard the whole time. Nebton, Kryss, and this new team member named Shojiki - son of BasedGawd, along with their instructor Henrique, went on many missions together. Months have passed and it is time for the Chunin Examination. Nebton searches the area for his friend Saturn, but he is nowhere to be found. Shojiki being skeptical as always, lets a few snakes loose into the forest of death. One ninja sees shojiki cheating though. His name was Sabaku, Sloth - Decca' son. He then trails his black sand behind Shojiki's snakes. Son of an Artist- Kisui, paints some snakes to follow along with the others' creations. This new guy however, pulls out this rare sword by the name of "Rose Blade" and he cuts off the trail altogether. His name is Sabaki. He's not very talented but still tries to enforce rules among the students of his age. He has that very over powered sword which gets him by, but without it, he's weak. The chunin procter decided to cancel part 1 and send everyone straight to part 2. It was sudden death, the were all standing on a trap floor, when it opened they were struggling for there lives. Nebton used shadow clones to save everyone, Namochi's supervisor Nara, Max , was shocked. In the final battle for part 3 - it was the two sons , Nebton and Nara, Raito - son of Max. Nebton cheated to defeat Raito. A strange creature that took the form of Ōtsutsuki, Kaio, appeared before them. His name was no other than Ōtsutsuki, Sakana. He was rather a newer member/unknown, rumor has it that he just appeared in the clan after a long time of MIA in the world. Some people thought he died. He kidnapped Namochi while Aiichi, Decca, and the rest of the kage rescued him. A strong storm was emerging. It wasn't natural either. It was being caused by --- a GOD. This was taking place in ISIS. The God's name was Insight - a devious man who apposed to the shinobi world. He didn't like the way his village was treated. The bigger nations pressed on after the war while the bigger ones screamed love and peace at the top of there lungs. So Insight took it upon himself to execute everyone from all 5 great nations. He planning to put everyone in a genjutsu that made it seem like they were getting a raikiri to their chests every second of every hour day in and day out, for..... eternity..... He had his intentions of course. An newer hero by the name of Bruce Lee, had appeared before him to stop him. They had a fight to the death which resulted in both of them dying a bloody death. This was later discovered by Aiichi who was traveling the world to atone for his sins. Aiichi realized something, Insight wasn't dead! He took out Aiichi's rinnegan eye and replaced it with his own. He then used a powerful genjutsu and put Aiichi to sleep- fleeing from the fight. Aiichi warned the Hidden Leaf Village that a dangerous man is on the loose. Namochi immediatly sends Troops to hunt him down as Aiichi chases after him. 2 Years have gone by and they still have yet to find him. Nebton, Shojiki, and Kryss are now 15 years old. Nebton has his Tensigan abilites, Kryss has her sharingan, and shojiki has recently developed the Dragon sage trasnformation. Nebton even knows how to handle a swords pretty well along with his jyuuken style, although he inherited Jesus' way of the jyuuken. The three are sent on a mission to put out a fire in a village nearby. (Nebton has Flashbacks of easedropping on Saturn talking about how he hated his life, how he was miserable, and how he was jealous of him. Nebton remembers what Saturn deemed the strength of Nebton was. He believed it was Namochi.) When the squad arrives to the fire they see a man who looks like saturn but they really can't tell if it's him. They take a closer look and it turns out it is him. They call him out, but Saturn says he has been reborn as Soraka. (He was the reincarnation of Uzumaki, Shinger this whole time.) His rinnegan abilites awaken and standing beside him was no other than Insight of the Raikiri with his rinnegan. It was a 2v3 for a little , but then a group of grass, shark, rice, and stone shinobi were surrounding the two with rinnegan. Even Aiichi and Namochi met up, but everything was falling into place. Insight used a genjutsu with the rinnegan on Aiichi to kill him quickly, and Sorka used one on Namochi to finish him off. Soraka now holds all Bijuu in him and Insight has the Eternal Mangekyou SHaringan. The two killed many shinobi. Nebton was just shocked and couldn't believe his eyes. His two teammates were fighting or there lives against the two enemies. Shojiki used a shadow clone to generate sage chakra and when did, he almost killed soraka, but out of nowhere comes BasedGawd, the snake in the the shadows, also Shojikis fathers. Ironic. He was the one who put the cursed seal on Soraka/Saturn to begin with. Shojiki was in total confusion and depression, Based took advantage of this and took Shojiki's body. Kryss awakened her MS, but it wasn't enough to stop insight, she dies a bloody death as well. Nebton does not know what to do. Out of nowhere, Rock Tangu's Son- Metal Ishrui threw himself infront of a kunai for Nebton reminding him to never give up on his dreams. Nebton instantly awakened his White Lion Tiger fist and beat the flying FUCK out of insight and Soraka. It still wasn't enough, insight snook up behind him and rakiri'd his heart. Amazingly, Nebton had incredible will power and was able to fight on. Nebton was at 0 chakra and was just about ready to die. He had on last rasengan. In the spick of time, he threw it, it did it's dissapearing thing. Soraka knew about Nebton's ability to make it dissapear and reappear. But what he didn't project was this - the rasengan reappeared and was blocked by soraka, but in the nick of time , nebton used flying thunder god level 1 used by the second hokage. Nebton used his sword that he picked up off his old sensei Aiichi and killed his best friend soraka. Insight was shocked, as a shadow rasengan appeared before his head and a clone appeared behind him while the real Nebton was charging for him. Insight raikiri'd the correct Nebton but was killed by the rasengan. Nebton was down and hurt badly as it was time to face the final enemy based. Using his Feminine Voice based asked Nebton what shall he do now? Nebton told him- "I don't know, it's over, you win". Spiralling out of his fathers Curse seal - was shojiki. He spat a sword out of his mouth and tried to kill his father which failed. Shojiki learned a new technique while he was "gone", which was the reanimation jutsu, which he used to reanimate Kryss. It was only the paper/human sacrifice one. He told them that the only way to reanimate everyone who has died, was to get the rinnegan eyes from Insight and Sorakas corpses and use it to reanimate everyone. It was the only way to fully bring them back. So they faught Based 3v1 and defeated him.The took out insight's eye and as they reached for Soraka's eye ...... His hand.. Grabbed Nebton's. He told him "i'm sorry for everything." Nebton being as forgiving as he is always, accepts his apology and they revive everyone who has died. Written By Mandingo Mandi [rainbow] Part 3 In the Final Fight Series Coming Soon![/rainbow] Edited by Mandingo-, Apr 6 2017, 09:56 PM.
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| God | Apr 7 2017, 12:00 AM Post #2 |
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Kage
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i skimmed this and what I gathered is theres a lot more sex for these characters than their real life counter parts |
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| raelson | Apr 9 2017, 09:18 PM Post #3 |
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Student
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And aburame mist ;( |
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| Rente | Apr 13 2017, 07:29 AM Post #4 |
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Uchiwa
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i agree |
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| Yaku | Apr 13 2017, 10:51 PM Post #5 |
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DehMatsuroSenpai.~
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Checked part two hoping it would be an improvement upon part one. I still see a lack of Yaku within the story.
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![]() Credit to Twist. Brilliant artist, awesome bro. ![]() Credit to Aiichi. Epic bro, body flicker rival, and portrayed me perfectly. | |
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| Rente | Apr 14 2017, 08:05 AM Post #6 |
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Uchiwa
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this nigga didnt mention The Uchiwa im done with this community gg |
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