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Aletta Vinesra; OMG! GET THE NEW KID!!!!
Topic Started: Jan 26 2009, 10:03 PM (241 Views)
LaserSnowflakes
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Name: Aletta Vinesra

Gender: Female.

Age 15
EDIT: I made a picture! It's not awesome, but it's what I have!
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Physical Description: A total beanpole. Tall, flat, but surprisingly well muscled. Does well in gym, but doesn’t like it. Aletta has stringy, yet long blond hair that has a light green tint to it. She claims its unusual color is from swimming in chlorinated water, and always has it tied back in some way, like braids or a ponytail. Her skin is pale, despite how much time she spends outside and in the greenhouse, and she has large, bright green eyes that can unnerve people who aren’t used to her. She can’t stand the cold, but loves sun and rain. Almost all of her school uniforms are covered in dirt, as she spends as mush time as possible with her plants. Her normal clothes are usually just a loose tee-shirt and some shorts, because she doesn’t like to get nice clothes dirty. (might get a picture if my tablet ever comes back from being MIA X_x)

Mental Description: She is quiet, but can have a bit of a temper. However, most of the time, and especially around the opposite sex, she’s shy. Nonetheless, whenever she gets to know someone, she can be sarcastic and open. She can sympathize with the forest people, but that doesn’t mean she likes them. She’s just interested in the well-being of her friends and plants. She loves music, and often sings to her plants. She does pretty well in all of her classes, but doesn't like to be inside for too long, so she often cuts class and hangs out in the greenhouse with the gardener Zippy. The teachers used to give her detention, but when thorn bushes started randomly popping up in their sock drawers, they stopped.

History: Aletta is an orphan who was sent to live with her aunt when she was 6, after her parents died in a crazy accident that involved an icy night in December, their car, some VERY sturdy trees, and a deer that was in the wrong place at the wrong time. She never had many friends. Once her aunt noticed how the girl liked plants, she let Aletta grow her own garden. Aletta cared for it everyday, but when her aunt noticed that vines had grown up the side of their house and into the girl’s room, she became wary. When she asked Aletta about it, she claimed that the plants would “Talk” to her. The aunt immediately sent her to Libri Fornicis, so that Aletta could develop these abilities, and also so the aunt wouldn’t have to explain to the neighbors what her niece was doing when she was caught talking to plants. Her aunt writes to her one a week, and continues to care for Aletta’s garden, even though it doesn’t flourish as much as when Aletta’s at home. Aletta used to deny to her teachers that she had any power, and said that she was just good with plants, but eventually accepted in when she made a fully grown oak tree grow from an acorn in under an hour.

Talent/Disability: Aletta can manipulate plants and communicate with them. She can make them do whatever she wants, and can also make them grow wherever she wants, even if she’s in the middle of the most barren desert. All she needs is a seed, so she carries a pouch of different types of seeds with her wherever she goes.

Gil: Aletta’s Gil is named Steve. No one knows why, not even her. She just decided one day to name it Steve, even though it's basically an inanimate object. He looks like a normal pair of pruning/cutting shears, but is actually ultra-sharp and can be split into two daggers (for stabbing/throwing), or kept as a whole (for cutting/violently poking to death).

Electives Chorus, Art, French, and Marine Biology.

Clubs: Volunteering and Free Swim (mondays and wednesdays).
well, you may expect me to use some brilliant quote of mine that makes me sound smart. Instead, you get this:

Why are there sea-snakes in Canada wearing sombreros?

(yes, i really said that. i have witnesses.)
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Meryl
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She sounds cool! I think you could add a little more under her mental description (since it's the shortest category there). Since this is a school, tell me what she's like concerning academics. Or, maybe, how she feels about her powers, does she feel blessed? Or does she take it like it's something normal.

Otherwise, you're all set. What I said above is mainly some advice so you don't have to add it. It'd be nice to hear more about your character though!

Ok. Approved.

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I can't seem to concentrate, my body is still wandering
If I keep trembling, I'll lose my control and go slack
Neither the SUN nor MY LUCK are looking this way but
I whisper to myself that I just have to keep on going


Kale Aventhais / Male / 26 / Magic Teacher
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YOU HAVE SEVEN DAYS
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Scrapple
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She's cool~ I wanna RP with her~

However, a few things:
~What happened to her parents?
~Where'd her aunt hear about LF? (I know it's not exactly apparent how you can hear about it, but make something up. ;;;;)
~And what days does she take swimming? Free time (Tuesdays and Wednesdays), swim meets (Mondays and Thursdays) or both?

Other than that, I don't see anything wrong. Fix those, and you're approved (by me at least).

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Lux Lucis/Male/13/Student

Caliga Acerbus/Female/46/Founder, Principal, and Computers and Invention Teacher.
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Pyon
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ah, the picture is rlly cool~
what do you mean, not awesome? 8D
Reading this will one day save your life.
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YESH. IT LOOKS REALLY NICE~ 8D
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Lux Lucis/Male/13/Student

Caliga Acerbus/Female/46/Founder, Principal, and Computers and Invention Teacher.
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