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| Dire Peril; An "Exterminatus Now" fan fiction | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Dec 9 2004, 10:40 PM (7,828 Views) | |
| TracerBullet | Jul 5 2005, 03:08 PM Post #51 |
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I give you...the Buddy Christ!
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Ahh yes, that Dire Peril story really made my morning. You truly have the spirit of Douglas Adams in you. Keep it up. P.S. I'm staring at the google ads at the bottom of this page above the fast reply box, and one of them says "True Religion Jeans." I wonder what that means? Jeans with Jesus' face sewn on the right buttcheek? |
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| Stegalt | Jul 6 2005, 01:59 AM Post #52 |
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Okay, that made me laugh extrmely hard, this is the best(and only) fanfic I have read, im going to send the link to my sister haha great job, and hurry with the next part or I will, as eastwood said: :D (elipsis to signify that there is actually more before that but too lazy to type it cause then it wouldn't fit in with the attempted joke... and please don't mind any, if at all, spelling errors for again, I am too lazy to fix them) |
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| jimbo895 | Aug 3 2005, 10:54 PM Post #53 |
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Hey, great story, but when is it goign to be continued? |
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| QueenQeeko | Aug 3 2005, 11:21 PM Post #54 |
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The blaq Qitty in bluu
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Whenever RedFox chooses to finish it. |
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| Master hunter | Aug 3 2005, 11:25 PM Post #55 |
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Sad, Sad Bastard
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Great job. Humour and fanfics rarely work out as well as that. Had me laughing my ass off. |
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| jimbo895 | Aug 5 2005, 08:33 PM Post #56 |
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Sorry, I didn't mean to step on anyone's toes or try to anger anyone. Its a great story and very well put together and I can't wait for the next installment |
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| QueenQeeko | Aug 5 2005, 10:06 PM Post #57 |
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The blaq Qitty in bluu
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What made you think I was angry? I merely answered the question. |
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| CaffieneKitty | Aug 11 2005, 01:20 AM Post #58 |
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Mistress of Procrastination
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Heya all. I just joined and I'd like to say that I'm *really* looking forward to the continuation of Dire Peril. I found it yesterday, started reading it at work then printed it off and took it home. Got to the end at 1 AM with a dismayed wail of "It's not finished???" (Which I totally understand, no pressure, no rush, really! :) I'm not hardly gnashing my teeth anymore either! ) And normally, I loathe fanfic with a white-hot passion. Mostly. This, I like. So there you go. Ego boo. ;) -CK |
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| The Virus | Aug 13 2005, 09:42 PM Post #59 |
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Keepin it odd like a motherfucking gastropod
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"And they shall know no fear." "Well, maybe just a bit." I just read chapter five. I'm only, what, two months late? I think it went up when I was visiting Lothar, and I heard about it then, but soon after that I went to Florida, and forgot all about it. Anyways, much hilarity was had, great work =D |
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| Chaos_Master | Aug 31 2005, 07:19 AM Post #60 |
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Lord of Chaos
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I sooo hope this gets done soon! Also to those who say humour and fanfic are hard that is actually pretty true. I know a few people who make fanfics, not much know as read, and it seems they, as myself, need to think for a good while before they can get an idea in their head. However some do random paradies(SP) instead and only need the licking of a toad to figure ut what to write(That is what I do. <_<). With Dire Peril it seems more so that its one of those classy writers(Mark Twain and such.) infused with the mananiclism(SP cos I don't know if its mananiclsm or maniaclisim.) minds of people like Mencia and Chaplle. Further news is I need sleep before I fall into an emo like state. *Falls over on large, pointy objects* |
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| RedFox742 | Oct 10 2005, 05:07 AM Post #61 |
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Obama's got a gun...
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Hey everyone. Thanks for all the support... all the comments are just kickass. I know it's been five months since I've updated this... and yet, would you believe it, three weeks after I specifically told Vir I could finish, I do in fact bring you: Dire Peril: Part VI added! While the Inquisitors make a beach landing (complete with several Normandy-worthy snafus) and begin working inland, Ryoushi endures his first test of "torture". Hopefully I can start writing faster again very soon. I certainly won't let another half year go by. I want to finish this bad boy! Thanks to everyone for all their comments and let's keep this bus (or Zykian) rolling! |
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| Lothar Hex | Oct 10 2005, 06:51 AM Post #62 |
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Illogical
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I call into question why Lothar would hit an inset on his THIGH. Considering the thigh is bionic and slapping it wouldn't do anything. since most insects can't bite metal. |
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| RedFox742 | Oct 10 2005, 12:48 PM Post #63 |
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Obama's got a gun...
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Nitpicker. :P I sort of meant right above the bionic joint, but it might be phrased differently, yes. I was careful to avoid any references to organic issues that Lothar wouldn't have with arm or legs. |
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| Lothar Hex | Oct 10 2005, 03:06 PM Post #64 |
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Illogical
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The thigh is the top part of the leg. You sound like you're reffering to his HIP. |
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| demishock | Oct 10 2005, 09:20 PM Post #65 |
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Natural Selection
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Lovin' the hilarious escapades. I knew it was going to be more non-stop laughs as soon as I read this bit:
It may have been five months since part V, but you certainly haven't lost the edge off your humor. XD And the "torture"... brilliant. *grins* I especially loved the POV swap to the guys in the flimsy tower... bad guys have feelings, too. *snerk* And the last two lines in that part -
- were awesome. I like the subtlety; you could've written out the whole explosion, but you didn't need to... I don't know. Hard to explain; I just really liked how you pulled that bit together. Wish I could write like that. * . *; You've certainly done your research, though. The jokes are plentiful and none of them fall on their face... can't wait for the next part! ^_^ |
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| RedFox742 | Dec 13 2005, 09:15 PM Post #66 |
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Obama's got a gun...
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Thanks a lot, Demi... though just one comment makes a fairly sad RedFox. Even so: Dire Peril: Part VII added! The Inquisitors close in on the Rikako sanctum sanctorum--is their journey nearing an end? And, meanwhile, Rogue's torturers get serious. Very, very serious. Fiddled with the HTML a little. I think it makes it more readable. Preview of the next chapter: Jamilla! |
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| Anoko | Dec 13 2005, 10:40 PM Post #67 |
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Pathlariant
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Oh ho ho, didn't see that little twist coming. Great stuff, Redfox. |
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| RedFox742 | Dec 15 2005, 02:25 AM Post #68 |
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Obama's got a gun...
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That's been one of the very few things I had planned from the beginning. ^^ |
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| demishock | Dec 15 2005, 03:48 AM Post #69 |
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Natural Selection
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Wooooo! Well-timed (though certainly coincidental) update -- this was quite a nice way to end my last day of classes for the semester. ^^V
*gapes* I wasn't sure whether to laugh or to cry here... XD; I love how you do everyone's stream-of-consciousness. Makes for very interesting pacing. That electric soul-killing device sounds pretty damn ungood. "No Torture Without A Scorcher"... fitting, but I agree, not a very nice final thought. And I love (in that gut-wrenching, "oh-crap-that's-not-good" kind of way) how they botched the mission. Nicely summed up later by Rogue. He has too much confidence in them, methinks... :<_<: Again, I look forward to more updates! :) |
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| HunteRS | Dec 15 2005, 03:31 PM Post #70 |
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Power is all that is needed.
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Damn you! I had only got about halfway through Dire Peril (about too where the female wolf cultist gets up close and personal with Lothars blade) when I had to cut out and go to an exam. I nearly got thrown out because I was sniggering so much as I replayed it in my head. The people next to me must have thought I was a real mentalist, considering the questions were all about war, Propaganda and censorship. But bloody funny all the same. Question tho': when/how do you sit doen to write? Usually with me I'm on my second drink and out comes the writing pad. I'd be interested how you do it-maybe I should try a different approach. |
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| RedFox742 | Dec 15 2005, 06:15 PM Post #71 |
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Obama's got a gun...
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I am actually unable to write on a pad, at least, not well. I do all my writing straight-to-computer; usually during long afternoons before I start in on my homework. I'm working right now, though, just during an off-day in TV production class. Everyone else is on a field trip, but I can't go 'cause of volleyball practice. Glad I made you laugh... even if it was the complete wrong time. XD |
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| Conker the Great | Dec 16 2005, 02:11 PM Post #72 |
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This is how I roll.
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Favorite part. |
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| TracerBullet | Jan 4 2006, 10:54 PM Post #73 |
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I give you...the Buddy Christ!
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Ahh, interesting twist. It reminds me of that line from that Mario game. "Sorry, but the princess is in another castle!" |
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| Zero-Sama | Apr 30 2006, 09:20 AM Post #74 |
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I've enjoyed the story so far. New here, though. Big fan of the webcomic. I wish i could have Blasphemy..Or a plush of him. But the story's GREAT. I hope you keep up the good work, Red. I DEFANANTLY want to see the end of the story. |
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| RedFox742 | May 1 2006, 02:39 AM Post #75 |
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Obama's got a gun...
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;_; You guys make me so sad that I abandoned this. But it just wasn't going anywhere. The plot read like one long run-on sentence. And yet even so, I would have finished it if the guys hadn't been adverse to my printing it for non-profit. But them turning that down was sort of the last nail. I had fun with this, and I think that it made me a better writer. But now it's time for me to start working on my own projects... my own creations, and to be unhampered by the wishes of others regarding their characters. I'm working on my own individual project now. Hopefully I'll finish it before I rot... and maybe you'll check that out then. ^^ If you still want my zaniness, though, check out the Middle Ground, and my comic Mobius Strip. That's not going anywhere for a while. Again, thanks so very much for all your support, people! You guys give me the drive to keep on pushing the stories I have to tell! |
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