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| Dire Peril; An "Exterminatus Now" fan fiction | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Dec 9 2004, 10:40 PM (7,829 Views) | |
| The Virus | Apr 8 2005, 04:31 AM Post #26 |
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Keepin it odd like a motherfucking gastropod
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Eh, I thought the coffee bit was overdone. The hallucinations preceding and the 'Let’s get the hell out of here' aftermath were good though. Choice excerpts?
The opening paragraph, no less. This is funny. And very characterful. Oh yes, Virus is an optimist at heart. Always sees the best in a person. Which is of course completely at odds with his chosen profession.
Heh heh, packing asbestos. This is also a very character-driven sort of funneh. Cool cool. More plz kthx. |
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| QueenQeeko | Apr 20 2005, 08:59 PM Post #27 |
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The blaq Qitty in bluu
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Mewness and reminders. I hope you haven't given up, man, I really wanna see the results of the rescue mission ^^ |
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| Chaos_Master | Apr 23 2005, 04:19 AM Post #28 |
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Lord of Chaos
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I enjoyed your stories really well. Plus I also like your other projects(The links in your sig.). They were enjoyable, but nontherless I still need to tell you about your story. It really felt like you entered the mide of a man from the 1800s that was funny, read EN for 6 monthes striat, and made a story that can beat even Captin Kidd in detial. That means it was gooooood! |
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| RedFox742 | May 3 2005, 11:41 PM Post #29 |
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Obama's got a gun...
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Man from the 1800's? Odd praise, but I'll go with it. :P Dire Peril: Part IV added! After rounding up Blasphemy, the trio head for the port of Dagou... and very quickly through the port of Dagou. Meanwhile, Rogue is learning from Tirzah just why he and his have been singled out for this brutal ritual. I'm still plugging on this whenever I can. I aim to finish (probably about 2/5 through) so despair ye not, I'm always working whenever I can find a second! It'd be tons, tons easier if HTML didn't hate me, too. It doesn't ever want to indent, unless I use the more advanced Word at my library to convert into HTML. I have to go do half the indenting manually Word 2003 is SO much better than this ME I'm using. That means a lot of Ctrl-C, Ctrl-V with the words "<p class=MsoBodyTextIndent>" where Word has conviniently forgotten to place them. The price I pay for working on this on a dozen different computers, I guess, shuffling it to and forth through my e-mail. But enough of that. Go nuts. |
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| Rust | May 4 2005, 12:53 AM Post #30 |
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Rank of Some Significance
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JESUS, MARY, JOSEPH, VISHNU, BUDDHA AND MOSES! Finally. Too bad I've got bed so soon. But it'll be here tomorrow. |
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| Retrogamer! | May 4 2005, 01:08 PM Post #31 |
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IT'S HERESY
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Hehe, I think thats you best written one yet, not the funniest one yet (Thats still chapter 3) but the best written. |
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| Lothar Hex | May 4 2005, 10:55 PM Post #32 |
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Illogical
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OK Red, tell you what, I'll see if I can add this to the site on Friday. |
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| QueenQeeko | May 5 2005, 09:20 AM Post #33 |
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The blaq Qitty in bluu
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*grins at RedFox, happy for him* Very nice! On the actual EN site it's going. ^_^ *clap clap clap* And a very good chapter indeed! |
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| The Virus | May 9 2005, 02:26 AM Post #34 |
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Keepin it odd like a motherfucking gastropod
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I actually read it a few days ago, but wasn't feeling coherent enough to go into any depth commenting at the time. And I haven't been able to read it again to do so properly now. I figure, at this point, at least a brief thumbsup is better than a hypothetical longer comment that will never come. That's the trouble with procrastination - you always do useless things when avoiding something else. It wouldn't be so bad if I could slack off work by doing something unrelated, but mildly constructive. I always feel that to purposely go sit down and intentionally begin something else when I'm meant to be working on something is a no-no. Instead I lurk forums, surf aimlessly, catch up on webcomics, watch TV, do lots of small, pointless things and never get anything done. Eh, this is turning into a longer comment just with my griping. *skimskimskim* Oh yes, nailed Blasphemy. You just keep getting these characters spot on. It was a pleasure to read, as usual (I would read it again, I swear, it's just my brain keeps interrupting to tell me I'm supposed to be working). I'd like to say more, cuz I know you work hard on this (it shows). But I can't. Not right now. We also need to stop breaking promises to put it on the site... |
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| Fat Man | May 10 2005, 12:04 AM Post #35 |
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Re-enacters answer to the armoured company
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bloody brilliant Red I will never look at a pumkin the same way again |
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| RedFox742 | May 11 2005, 06:35 PM Post #36 |
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Obama's got a gun...
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... yeah, uh... yeah.... :rolleyes: There was another possibility that I know Lothar was tossing around; I don't want to say anything else because I'm not sure whether or not it flew. I'd have to ask Lothar in person. Thanks for the great comments, everyone. For some reason I've been avoiding posting in this topic unless I had an update--because it's sort of an updates page in that regard--but I did have to say that I really appreciate all the thumbs-up and helpful comments. More DP will be with you... eventually! |
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| Mechka | May 16 2005, 10:02 AM Post #37 |
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Citizen
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Awesome story Redfox. I'm going to do a fanfiction of my own. But your fic blew me away. I've never, in my whole life-journey ever come across a story so good, and i haven't even finished reading this yet! So, do ypu just post a link up to your fic to submit it? Thanks :D |
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| Mechka | May 17 2005, 08:02 AM Post #38 |
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Citizen
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Right, that's it, i've read all of it and now i want more! Please submit the next part soon! I'm not very good at being patient! :lol: |
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| Wildfire1985 | May 19 2005, 10:50 PM Post #39 |
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oh....my....gods..... it is brilliant! and we now know why virus doesnt drive. good work man ;) |
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| RedFox742 | Jun 20 2005, 09:11 PM Post #40 |
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Obama's got a gun...
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Took me long enough. Still, summer's here. That means: Dire Peril: Part V added! While the bumbling trio plot their course for Okakir, employing a few simple math tricks and skirting a medium disaster, Rogue is busy pissing off Tirzah... and he likely won't enjoy the results. By the way, is the spacing and margins working out for everyone? Before it looked fine on my computer, but at my school all the text would be shifted way over to the right. Now it looks okay on my comp as long as it's at full width, but I think it might get really, really squashed on a small monitor. Lemme know how it's working out. Enjoy! |
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| Jeffk38uk | Jun 20 2005, 10:01 PM Post #41 |
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Everything's great at your Junes.
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A cool continuation of the story. Took a while for it too but it was worth it. Gotta love this bit though.
It jsut dripped with sarcasm that it was hilarious. |
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| QueenQeeko | Jun 21 2005, 08:35 AM Post #42 |
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The blaq Qitty in bluu
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*love for RedFox* |
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| Retrogamer! | Jun 21 2005, 05:28 PM Post #43 |
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IT'S HERESY
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And the premiere EN fanfic does it again. Good job Redfox! Personally I felt there was perhaps just a tad slow plot development going on in this one, however it seemed more humour oriented than the others, hence it fitted in well to avoid such a criticism. The fish thing was, as my friend put it. "Very Hitchhikers." ;) |
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| Silversword | Jun 23 2005, 10:02 PM Post #44 |
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your soul is mine
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I suppose it is worth pointing out that there are two machine gods. Fernex is the Dark God of Machines, and Gruss is the Justice God of Machines. Part V read as if there were only Fernex, which is somewhat untrue. That niggle aside, not a bad read. :) |
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| pies | Jun 24 2005, 12:11 AM Post #45 |
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Citizen
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Go Red! These are great! Geep going! :) |
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| RedFox742 | Jun 24 2005, 01:46 AM Post #46 |
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Obama's got a gun...
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Thanks. I'll try to edit that somehow. *goes to work* Be so much easier to know these things if--*MAULED BY VIRUS* And thanks for the compliments, all of ya. ^^ Part VI is in the works! |
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| Chaos_Master | Jul 1 2005, 02:21 AM Post #47 |
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Lord of Chaos
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Alright can not wait fer the next part! |
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| Mechka | Jul 1 2005, 01:44 PM Post #48 |
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Citizen
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OMG i can't wait for the next part! Red Fox, you're the best writer ever! |
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| Melchior | Jul 3 2005, 07:06 PM Post #49 |
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student/waster/bum
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wow, so many views and so little replies - SHAME ON YOU ALL!!!! That was the most woo and uber thing i have read in a while :P thought it would be a waste of time (I deserve beatings) but nooo, the most worthwhile half-hour I spent today. great stuff, keep writing, i cant wait for the next chapter :) |
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| QueenQeeko | Jul 4 2005, 09:50 AM Post #50 |
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The blaq Qitty in bluu
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I sowwy. T-T |
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