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| Razarod | Aug 11 2008, 09:32 AM Post #1 |
King of Angkar
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Simple 1. Skill - Martial Weapons I: The ability to effectively wield nearly all weapons, with the exception of highly unique or rare styles of weaponry. 2. Skill - Strength I: Due to his own level of fitness and the presence of a second being in his body, he is a bit more than twice as strong as the average human. (The average human being defined as a person who is decently physically fit, but is not overly impressive or outstanding in any way, including, but not limited to, physical size and strength. The average person is about 6' tall, maybe a bit under, and weighs roughly 150 lbs.) 3. Skill - Awareness I: Very aware of his surroundings, including people, animals, and objects. 4. Spell - Fireball I: Throws a ball of fire about 10 cm. wide at a target. If held for a full 30 seconds before throwing, the fireball can increase in size, up to to 30 cm. wide. 5. Spell - Nature's Fingers I: Several vines shoot out of a surface of the caster's choosing and can be controlled by the caster, often being used to tie up the target. The vines are very thin, most physically fit humans could break free within one minute. These vines also have no thorns. 6. Skill - Resist Earth I: Lessens the effect had on Razarod by Earth-elemental weapons and spells by about 10%. 7. Skill - Resist Fire I: Lessens the effect had on Razarod by Fire-elemental weapons and spells by about 10%. |
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| MidnightShadow | Aug 17 2008, 09:24 PM Post #2 |
If she were warm and fuzzy she'd be a kitten
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Alright, they look fine, however... Given that Razarod is significantly larger than most humans, I think you need to add more to your description in parentheses regarding what exactly an 'average human' is. What is the average human's height? What is their weight? What can they accomplish and what can Raz accomplish (briefly; I don't need all the details, just a general idea). After that, we'll go from there. |
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| Razarod | Sep 3 2008, 03:01 PM Post #3 |
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I changed it. |
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| MidnightShadow | Sep 3 2008, 03:05 PM Post #4 |
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If she were warm and fuzzy she'd be a kitten
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Alright, that looks alright. You can add them to your profile. |
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| Razarod | Feb 19 2009, 10:47 AM Post #5 |
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Intermediate Skill - Strength II: Raziel's presence in his body has caused his flesh, muscles, and bones to absorb massive amounts of magical energy, causing his to be twice as strong physically as his appearance conveys. This includes his body's resilience to damage. (So not only can he apply twice the force that a normal human of his size and build would be able to, but his skin and bones are twice as hard to damage. Injuries that would causes minor scratches or bruises have no noticeable effect, stronger bones are in many cases able to stop weapons entirely, ect.) Upgrade of Strength I Intermediate Skill - Awareness II: The magical energy flooding Razarod's body has spread to his sensory organs, and they now perform at levels beyond what would normally be humanly possible. (He picks up on all visible movements and all details of an object, person, or animal easily. Sounds which people would ordinarily miss are heard clearly, ect.) Upgrade of Awareness I Edited by Razarod, Feb 19 2009, 10:54 AM.
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| MidnightShadow | Feb 19 2009, 11:46 AM Post #6 |
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Those look good, though I have an issue with stronger bones being able to stop weapons. Like... if a character swings a mace at his femur or something, I would expect it to crack, whereas in a normal person it would be completely shattered. So... I think that having bones that are resilient to blunt weaponry especially are Advanced, not Intermediate. The bones can resist the blow by only fracturing or cracking, but I wouldn't go so far as to say that they can resist completely. |
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| Razarod | Feb 19 2009, 11:59 AM Post #7 |
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Sounds good. Also gives me room to make Strength III. lol |
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| Razarod | Oct 1 2009, 08:47 AM Post #8 |
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Fireblast: Throws a ball of fire about 30 cm. wide at a target. If held for a full 30 seconds before throwing, the fireball can increase in size, up to to 60 cm. wide. This fire spell is orange and is at a temperature of 1200 C (2190 F). It can also be launched as a stream instead of thrown as a ball, in which case the stream is 30 cm. wide and can reach a length up to 360 cm. (12 ft.). The stream burns out in 10 seconds, the ball lasts until it makes contact with something, at which point a minor explosion occurs. (Intermediate Spell, upgrade of Fireball) Gaea's Claws: Several vines shoot out of a surface of the caster's choosing and can be controlled by the caster, often being used to tie up the target. The vines are thicker than average vines and can hold a physically fit human for 2-3 minutes. these vines have small thorns that are typically solid enough to not break when tightened against flesh, instead digging in. (Intermediate Spell, upgrade of Gaea's Fingers) Improved Healing: The magical energy concentrated in Razarod's body allows it to heal more effectively and efficiently than a normal person's body. Minor cuts will often heal shut in a matter of minutes. More serious injuries will often not worsen over time as they also slowly heal themselves. Even in the case of a potentially life-threatening hit on a vital organ, Razarod's chances of survival are greatly increased, almost doubled. (Intermediate Skill, original instance) Edited by Razarod, Oct 1 2009, 08:55 AM.
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| MidnightShadow | Oct 1 2009, 02:59 PM Post #9 |
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Approved. |
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