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Aerodu fell in the deep hell !
Topic Started: May 24 2009, 08:12 PM (244 Views)
ThunderDragonSlayer
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Even more Krazyyyy!!!!
When I saw the FotD I had an idea : why not write a poerty about Aerodu's fall ?
I wrote one quickly :

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Aerodu fell
in the deep hell,
Light,darkness and thunder,
brought them to Lucifer !
They lost the Tempest,
now they have no nest !

They fly in a sulfure cloud,
They are so far we can't see them !
They are so far we can't hear them !
So now they must say out loud :
Please have pity of us !
Please,please, don't attack us !

We looked in the sky,
They were not that high.
We looked in the streams,
They weren't in the seas,
Then we did something ebil,
Then we asked the devil.
He said : They are in my home,
Yes they are in my kingdom.

Aerodu fell
in the deep hell,
Light,darkness and thunder,
brought them to Lucifer !
They lost the Tempest,
now they have no nest !


What do you think of that ?
The three rules that are over everything :
-The best is the opposite of the good
-Everything that can end badly ends badly
-Each attempt to do nothing,so nothing will end badly,ends badly
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Tuss
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I think you should've put it in the writing forum.
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DigDog
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Pantsman
And into some Aerodu thread.
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ThunderDragonSlayer
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Even more Krazyyyy!!!!
New version :

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Aerodu fell
In the deep hell,
Light,darkness and thunder,
brought them to Lucifer !

They fly in a sulfure cloud,
They are so far we can't see them !
They are so far we can't hear them !
So now they must say out loud :
Please have pity of us !
Please,please, don't attack us !

We looked in the sky,
They were not that high.
We looked in the seas :
Nothing more than in trees.
Then we did something ebil,
Then we asked the devil.
He said : They are in my home,
Yes they are in my kingdom.

UltraPowerPie is angry,
He said he won't surrender,
We aren't afraid by his fury,
He's not really a danger:
Minus hundred thousand defense,
Coming back would be very tense !

Aerodu fell
In the deep hell,
They lost the Tempest,
now they have no nest !
The three rules that are over everything :
-The best is the opposite of the good
-Everything that can end badly ends badly
-Each attempt to do nothing,so nothing will end badly,ends badly
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DigDog
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Pantsman
Still needs to be posted in some Aerodu thread.
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Liveman Ieb
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Something bad happened in Paxia? I did it.
Makes me wish I could do poetry.
It's good though.
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Goro was admitted to the hospital after the incident, and was pronounced paralyzed from the neck down. In 2016, he was outfitted with a prototype robotic replacement body. He quickly conquered the world through superior firepower.

All hail our robotic overlord, King of the World, Gorobei.
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Mark Chung
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Amazing.
Let it spin, let it spin, let it spin...
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