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| Tuss | May 27 2008, 08:19 PM Post #1 |
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As the title suggests, this is a bad poem I wrote about Dynami that I made off the top of my head: There once was a clan called Dynami Which seemed a little bit crazy There were other clans too But what can you do Dynami was the only one for me |
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| DigDog | May 27 2008, 08:25 PM Post #2 |
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Pantsman
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Ooh, looks like a limerick. I like limericks. |
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| Fishtank | May 27 2008, 08:53 PM Post #3 |
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"a rogue element" -SIGMUND
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It's not THAT bad. You're got rhythm, beat, and maybe a few other poetic devices I haven't identified. So yeah, not bad at all. |
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