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| Haunting Ground; my first fanfic | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Oct 23 2006, 04:23 PM (406 Views) | |
| Clorith88 | Oct 23 2006, 04:23 PM Post #1 |
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hi guys how r u all? new here ![]() i love reading clorith fics and love the 1s here and on the fanfiction web... some time ago, i drew a pic of aerith wearing the outfit of the main character's of the game haunting ground and soon after a story was born im making my own version of haunting ground with some changes, here's the following characters: aerith as fiona cloud - hewie (replacing the white german shepard with a flaxen wolf) lol ask later debilitas as himself tifa as daniella (sorry tifa fans but dw there's a story behind it!) hojo as riccardo sephiroth as lorenzo there will also b another character added but it'll b pretty obvious who when ur done reading: unknown: nothing is known about this person except that he is...or was regarded as an intruder in the castle. he has a connection to sephiroth and knows about aerith. according to hojo, this is a bad thing. he can only be identified with spikey blonde hair and wields a massive sword. this man is rarely seen so aerith is not sure if this is someone she should trust compared to the other dangers she has faced so far. if ur unfamilar with the game, here's a video from youtube (the game's rated M soooo.....not that the video is bad or anything, just thought i'd leave a warning) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SSt6OEKYA-A here's the story (my ff7version): 18 yr old aerith gainsborough was a normal girl living a normal life...but when she and her parents fall victim 2 a car accident...her life is never the same again. when she regains concious, she finds herself trapped in a strange castle. as she makes her way through unsettling surroundings, she is constantly stalked by terrible horrors. her only hope of survival is a mysterious wolf who she rescues from a fatal trap. can aerith get out b4 she loses her sanity...or her life? what do u think? like the idea? im actually WAY too shy making stories so im feeling a lil paranoid but im going 2 try and b more brave 4 once... if u'd like more info about this, u can email me at devilsnevercry1988@hotmail.com also u can go 2 the fanart section and find a drawing i made of aerith in her hg costume
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| Schala | Nov 8 2006, 12:41 PM Post #2 |
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I just came from the fanart section after seeing your drawing of Aerith! On a sidenote, welcome to the forum, Clorith88; hope you stick around! I really don't know a thing about Haunting Ground, but the story sounds interesting. It's a good base, so it depends on how you build the story. Either way, give it a try. I know a thing or two about being paranoid. I read fanfiction for a couple of years before writing my first piece. Posted it on fanfiction.net ... and got shot down in flames. :lol: Oh well, the point is I tried again and finally wrote something good. Besides, it doesn't even matter how many reviews you get as long as you enjoyed writing it. ...Darn, I sound dumb. Anyway, I hope to see this story of yours turn up on this board. Don't worry, the people around here are nice.
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| Clorith88 | Nov 9 2006, 12:58 PM Post #3 |
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thku 4 ur opinion and reply Schala, looking at the number of views compared the lack of reply's made me think no1 was interested at all thats a shame 2 hear (well, read lol) what happened 2 ur 1st story, gd 2 kno they appreciated ur other 1 and dw u dont sound dumb :) im having a bit of difficulty trying 2 put this story on fanfiction.net, i have a username and i downloaded openoffice so now im lost with what 2 do nxt lol, ive got a basic idea tho... im tempted 2 put the story here...but im a lil worried about what ppl would say compared 2 what this story will contain (not my fault! just following as the story goes!) definetly not considered 4 young 1s 2 read, more like 4 older ppl, it mainly contains blood n stuff (that's capcom 4 u lol) eg. when aerith (fiona) 1st wakes up, shes in a cage wearing nothing but this silk material to cover her, obviously u wont c anything rude but just reading it would make ppl think "my god!!" lol so 4 safety the story's gonna have 2 b rated M...is that aloud here? ![]() despite this, the story's fun 2 write i think the character's roles suits every1 well except tifa but im using her 4 a reason lol since u dont kno haunting ground here's a video that contains the opening when u load the game up and the start of the game, if some scenes jump to something completely different, that mean the story has gone to gameplay http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tEhGLMjhlwE Capcom did a really gd job making this game (love the movement of the silk lol) |
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| Schala | Nov 10 2006, 02:46 PM Post #4 |
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You would have thought that "Haunting Ground" would give it away as a horror game. Don't know why it didn't occur to me. To be truthful, the video kind of scared me (it was around night time and I was the only one in my room), but I agree that the silk movement was very delicate. Anyway, I did the next best thing and went to Wikipedia. It's an interesting storyline, if not more than a little dark. I can definitely see Hojo in there though... *shivers*. It's just the sort of twisted thing that he'll do. I'm curious though, will Cloud ( as the wolf) do any speaking? Hmm, I really don't know if M stories are allowed here. Maybe it's somewhere in the rules? You're having trouble putting it on fanfiction.net? I believe that you can just use the Document Manager and upload it from Microsoft Word (that's the most simple way, unless you don't have Word). Good luck with the story! I'll go review it once it's up! (P.S. Thanks for listening to my sob story) |
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| Clorith88 | Nov 11 2006, 12:54 PM Post #5 |
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yh haunting ground is a horror game, ff7 horror fanfics r quite rare rnt they? i actually 4got about Wikipedia and had a look at it's hg info and i agree, it does seem dark. bless u about the video yh i think the 1 of the best suited roles is hojo as riccardo as 4 cloud as a wolf, no he doesnt speak, it adds more mystery to him, especially with the fact that his eyes r in the form of a human and not a wolf. i was thinking mayb i could make a safe version of the story 4 this web but that'll b VERY hard lol worth a shot tho right? the prologue is definetely clean 4 all 2 read but thats mainly about aerith's normal life lol thx 4 ur advice i already have microsoft word, and openoffice, where abouts is the document manager? (i can b a blind bat sometimes lol) yw (the sob story) and thx 4 the support, if i had this up i would look 4ward 2 ur review |
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