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The Need For A Hero; A drama/angst ReTi story
Topic Started: Oct 8 2006, 09:30 PM (430 Views)
aerisbolt
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Hi there yes it is aerisbolt with another story :blush: what can I say this fanfiction is like a new toy, I can't get enough of it.

This one is about a different couple with a totally different feel to it as stated in the topic description, but I thought I would post it in case anyone wants to check it out. ReTi lovers should want to :lol: and actually should be required to...

Okay not really but if you don't mind reading angst than please read. I hope you enjoy it and as always feedback is most appreciated...Sadhana *cough* :whistle:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3188938/1/

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Sadhana
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Okay not really but if you don't mind reading angst than please read. I hope you enjoy it and as always feedback is most appreciated...Sadhana *cough* :whistle:


Well, I can't deny a request! :D Plus, once I read this one, I really wanted to respond.

Aerisbolt, congratulations. You have done some serious growing in your writing in a very short amount of time. It took me years to go through the changes that you've done in a few months. I really enjoyed this. The imagery was great, the characters were handled well, and the angst wasn't over the top or lacking. Is this a oneshot, or will there be more chapters? I'm not the biggest ReTi person, but I'd love to read more.

You've improved so much, I feel like you don't deserve any constructive criticism. :lol: And the only thing I can think of anyway is just to work on your conventions some more. Maybe you didn't proofread or proofread closely enough, but there were occasional mistakes.

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He voice became progressively louder.


Yeah, that should be "His voice". But the mistakes like that were finite and few between, so nothing to fret over.

I really want to offer my congratulations 'cause this was so great. :cheer: Fantastic job!
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darkmoonlitdreamer
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I agree with Sadhana. Very good job. I am not a big fan of Reti, but I still respect really good writers and their writing when I see them. Keep up the good work! ^_^
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aerisbolt
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Oh yay for reviews!

Sadhana: Wow, I am so flattered by your thoughts, I am so happy you liked it and thank you for always helping and encouraging me. I really appreciate it. And if I am a better writer, I must tell you, you are a big reason why so thank you. :huggle:

And oh darn it on the mistakes, I did check but I have a habit of reading what I want it to say instead of what it really says so thank you for pointing that out, I will go back and fix things.

To answer your question, this was a oneshot to get my feet wet as it were in this type of theme and therefore I am done with this background and storyline for now,but it may creep in again in my next story.

For my next story I want to combine the three types of stories I have already done into a major story, probably two parter. It will feature ReTi but other couples will come up as well.

Again thank you so much, hearing praise from such a wonderful writer as you has really made my day!


Darkmoonlitdreamer: Thank you so much for the compliment and encouragement, it means alot to me, especially coming from another talented writer :huggle:

And of course last but not least, please review!! :lol:
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goddess_in_pink07
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Lovely Aerisbolt. Once again, you've out done yourself again. I'm personally not a ReTi can, but it was touching indeed. A good story that doesn't concern Tifa in love with Cloud! :huggle: Teehee, I hope to see more soon. I'd love to see what happens next. :wub:
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aerisbolt
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goddess_in_pink07: Aww goddess thank you very much :huggle: I am glad you enjoyed it, your encouragement means a lot to me as well.

I am sorry but that is all aerisbolt is writing on this particular story. Like a said earlier I am wanting to write a major story and have ReTi as the predominate couple so aspects from this short story may be present again, but this will stand as a quick oneshot.

Hopefully I can convert some of you to ReTi fans in the process :whistle:
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Imaginary__girl
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I got all teary at the end :sad: . Very well written, aerisbolt! You captured the emotion of the scene very nicely, especially with the gloomy effect of the weather outside. As a diehard ReTi fan, I give this fic a 10/10! I, actually, like stories a lot better with that gloomy ending at the end. It gives you a ton of "what if's?" to think about. Very nice! ((BTW, I began working on my ReTi fic again after weeks of neglection!))

aerisbolt
 
Hopefully I can convert some of you to ReTi fans in the process :whistle:


DO IT.
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aerisbolt
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Yay! I am so happy you liked it IG, it means a whole lot since you were the one who got me into ReTi as a couple in the first place :huggle: And I hear ya on the ending, sometimes I like a sadder open ended story as well, gives the reader the choice to decide what happens. I have to say I have enjoyed writing all these different themed stories, it has been a lot of fun.

Just a quick note I did go back and fix al the mistakes I could find and added one or two very small things for those interested. If I still missed mistakes please let me know, I would be very grateful (editing is definately not a gift I have :lol: )

Again thanks to everyone for reading it and don't be shy about reviewing ^_^
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LadyAerith
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Wow I just read this! I'm a pretty big ReTi fan so I definantly loved this. Is this just a oneshot? Are you going to post more chapters? I'm hooked! Definantly want to read more :D
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LadyAerith
Dec 12 2006, 10:53 PM
Wow I just read this! I'm a pretty big ReTi fan so I definantly loved this. Is this just a oneshot? Are you going to post more chapters? I'm hooked! Definantly want to read more :D

Yay another fellow ReTi fan! Hello there Lady Aerith and welcome to C&A! Thank you for reading and reviewing my story I am very glad you enjoyed it. To answer your question, yes it is a oneshot but I do plan to write an actual chapter story about them in the future. I have started it but it will be a while probably before I post any of it. But as far as this particular story or moment goes, I am leaving this as a oneshot.

Oh and just to let you know there is a ReTi club in the club section if you want to join :lol: We ReTi fans have to spread the love of this couple :whistle: Thanks agan for reading!
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