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Revenio; A Dark Clorith Fic
Topic Started: Aug 24 2006, 08:42 PM (359 Views)
Ke-Ke
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Since my other stories were so well-recieved ( :huggle: ), I decided to post my newest one-shot (I'm so sorry it's a one-shot, I have a multi-chaptered one in progress, I swear!). It's quite dark, but the end could be considered happy, depending on how you view it.

Title: Revenio
Rating: T for violent themes.

Revenio (fixed link)

Please note that I most likely will be rewriting this in the future. Not completely, but I want to flesh it out a little more. :)

Edit: I think I fixed it the link this time. ^^
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aerisbolt
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Wow KeKe that was really dark. I am very impressed you wrote a story like this. I liked how you showed that every action has a consequence and even if you had the oportunity to stop a tragic event, that doesn't mean it will stop tragic events from happening, different as they might be. Well done. I don't know if I could read it over and over because of the content but I thought it was well written overall.

Oh and your link isn't working correctly :blush: I found it though!
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Ke-Ke
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Thank you! :gift:

*kicks link* Thanks for pointing that out, I'll try to fix it. ^^
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Sadhana
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That was great. Bravo! :cheer: You must've worked very hard, and it came out very well. The last line was a perfect closure. Darkness doesn't matter as long as the story serves to tell the audience something which I felt it did.

I have a question: what does the title mean/symbolize?

And just one thing... I think that Hojo was Sephiroth's father, but I could be wrong..?

Anyway, fantastic! I look forward to reading your multi-chaptered fanfic as soon as you decide to show it to us. ^_^
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Trisse
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I want to read it but i cant see IT!!! :no: :cry:

It sounds so interesting
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Ke-Ke
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Link still isn't working...? <_< Okay, I'll try again. :)

As for the title, it's Latin for 'to come back'. At least, I think that's what it means. :lol:

And I'm also sure that Hojo is Seph's father, but Vincent doesn't know that in the story.
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My goodness that was...was... phenomenal, yet very dark.
I really liked it, and I thought it told a moral of somesort.
Great job =)
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Trisse
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Yay the link works!

Goodness it was good :) in a dark serial kind of way!

I loved it, you must've worked real hard with this story, it really worked well from beginning to end. It was very emotional i felt. But all in all it was awesome!

The titled is very well suited for the story aswell, 'To come Back'

I hope to hear from you mulitchaptered fic soon!

Kudos to your work!


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