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| Revenio; A Dark Clorith Fic | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Aug 24 2006, 08:42 PM (359 Views) | |
| Ke-Ke | Aug 24 2006, 08:42 PM Post #1 |
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Since my other stories were so well-recieved ( ), I decided to post my newest one-shot (I'm so sorry it's a one-shot, I have a multi-chaptered one in progress, I swear!). It's quite dark, but the end could be considered happy, depending on how you view it.Title: Revenio Rating: T for violent themes. Revenio (fixed link) Please note that I most likely will be rewriting this in the future. Not completely, but I want to flesh it out a little more. :) Edit: I think I fixed it the link this time. ^^ |
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| aerisbolt | Aug 24 2006, 09:03 PM Post #2 |
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Wow KeKe that was really dark. I am very impressed you wrote a story like this. I liked how you showed that every action has a consequence and even if you had the oportunity to stop a tragic event, that doesn't mean it will stop tragic events from happening, different as they might be. Well done. I don't know if I could read it over and over because of the content but I thought it was well written overall. Oh and your link isn't working correctly I found it though!
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| Ke-Ke | Aug 24 2006, 09:19 PM Post #3 |
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Thank you! *kicks link* Thanks for pointing that out, I'll try to fix it. ^^ |
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| Sadhana | Aug 24 2006, 11:23 PM Post #4 |
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That was great. Bravo! You must've worked very hard, and it came out very well. The last line was a perfect closure. Darkness doesn't matter as long as the story serves to tell the audience something which I felt it did.I have a question: what does the title mean/symbolize? And just one thing... I think that Hojo was Sephiroth's father, but I could be wrong..? Anyway, fantastic! I look forward to reading your multi-chaptered fanfic as soon as you decide to show it to us.
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| Trisse | Aug 25 2006, 04:06 AM Post #5 |
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I want to read it but i cant see IT!!! ![]() It sounds so interesting |
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| Ke-Ke | Aug 25 2006, 07:43 PM Post #6 |
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Link still isn't working...? <_< Okay, I'll try again. :) As for the title, it's Latin for 'to come back'. At least, I think that's what it means. :lol: And I'm also sure that Hojo is Seph's father, but Vincent doesn't know that in the story. |
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| momoju | Aug 25 2006, 09:00 PM Post #7 |
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D: My goodness that was...was... phenomenal, yet very dark. I really liked it, and I thought it told a moral of somesort. Great job =) |
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| Trisse | Aug 26 2006, 12:34 AM Post #8 |
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Yay the link works! Goodness it was good :) in a dark serial kind of way! I loved it, you must've worked real hard with this story, it really worked well from beginning to end. It was very emotional i felt. But all in all it was awesome! The titled is very well suited for the story aswell, 'To come Back' I hope to hear from you mulitchaptered fic soon! Kudos to your work! |
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), I decided to post my newest one-shot (I'm so sorry it's a one-shot, I have a multi-chaptered one in progress, I swear!). It's quite dark, but the end could be considered happy, depending on how you view it.




I found it though!

You must've worked very hard, and it came out very well. The last line was a perfect closure. Darkness doesn't matter as long as the story serves to tell the audience something which I felt it did.

12:37 AM Jul 11