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| My Collection Of Clorith Fics...; Please Read | |
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| Ke-Ke | Aug 17 2006, 09:12 PM Post #1 |
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Well, I thought it might be good if I finally posted my stories. Most of them are one-shots, but please give them a look anyway. My Fanfiction |
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| Sadhana | Aug 18 2006, 12:18 AM Post #2 |
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capitalism is dead
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I read all your Clorith pieces. I'm sorry I skipped the others-- I happen to be really busy tonight although I usually make as much time as I can to read anything-- and I'll try to get back to those at another time. Either way, I read all the Clorith ones (wow, I talk in circles). Very nice. Each one was unique in itself and from other Clorith fanfics. I particularly enjoyed the one in KH where they have a picnic. It wasn't the usual angsty romance flavor you get from most Clorith fanfics (including my own XD). While I certianly like the angst of the Clorith relationship, it's also refreshing to be reminded of how much of a great, sweet couple they'd make if only Squenix had given them more time together ( ).You should share your fanfics with us more often. Whether if it's just random fluffy drabbles or multifaceted chapter fanfics with rhetorical strategies and all, I'd like to see more of your writing. If I could suggest anything (and don't take anything I say too seriously because I don't consider myself the world's expert on writing), it would be to expand your vocabulary. I noticed you trying to do that at times, but an extensive vocab has to be well-earned beyond the sparse use of a thesaurus (all us writers are guilty of this, probably because it sounds like a dinosaur).You have a knack for writing, so please do share more with us. |
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| Alantie | Aug 18 2006, 05:58 AM Post #3 |
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OMG. You are the author of those incredible oneshots?! You deserve awards for those!! *bows to your awesomeness* I particularly enjoyed Her Theme. It reminds me of a oneshot piece I've been working on, but you wrote yours first! It made me cry, it touched me that deeply! Please, keep writing and share with us!
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| aerisbolt | Aug 19 2006, 03:53 AM Post #4 |
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Beautiful Paradox
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Ke-Ke I had a chance to read The Pink Letter and Stormy. I thought you did a very good job showing Leon's mixed emotions in The Pink Letter, I enjoyed it. But the Stormy story was just adorable I really enjoyed it,especially Cloud's attempts to be romantic. I will try to read more of your work later but I at least wanted to comment on those two. Thanks for sharing your work!
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| Ke-Ke | Aug 20 2006, 10:30 PM Post #5 |
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Thank you all for your comments! You make me want to hug you all. Sadhana, thanks for the constructive criticism! I can't get enough of it. ^^ I have two or three one-shots that are in progress, and possibly a multi-chaptered one, so if you have the time, please take a look at them also.
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If I could suggest anything (and don't take anything I say too seriously because I don't consider myself the world's expert on writing), it would be to expand your vocabulary. I noticed you trying to do that at times, but an extensive vocab has to be well-earned beyond the sparse use of a thesaurus (all us writers are guilty of this, probably because it sounds like a dinosaur).
*bows to your awesomeness* I particularly enjoyed Her Theme. It reminds me of a oneshot piece I've been working on, but you wrote yours first! 
I really enjoyed it,especially Cloud's attempts to be romantic. I will try to read more of your work later but I at least wanted to comment on those two. Thanks for sharing your work!
12:37 AM Jul 11