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| I Come Bearing A Few Fanfics; Please read? I'd like some feedback... | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jul 23 2006, 03:53 AM (245 Views) | |
| BlackWind | Jul 23 2006, 03:53 AM Post #1 |
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My fanfics, there are 6 of them. My first ever fanfic I wrote, a Cloud/Aerith oneshot. Set in Kingdom Hearts 1. Come Back The second one I ever wrote, another Cloud/Aerith, but people say its predictable. I don't like it much because I know its been done many times before, but here. Aeris' Death A short Riku/Zexion. I'll Remember Unfinished, five chapters so far. Demyx/Zexion It Started Out Simple One-shot Zexion/Demyx. Am I Predictable Now? And my newest, Demyx/Zexion. Dreams Do Come True Feedback please.. |
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| xClarexStrife | Jul 23 2006, 04:03 PM Post #2 |
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There's No Rock, Like J-Rock n__n~~
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Ahhh! The first two were so sad! i shed a tear at the second CloudxAerith one. But thts because i cry at most CxA fingys <_< i loved them! there totally wicked B)i didn't bother reading the others because i didn't no hu they were, apart from riku but i bet they were rly gd xx :lol: |
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| BlackWind | Jul 23 2006, 06:32 PM Post #3 |
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o.o Really? Wow. Thanks! I never thought that the second one was very good...
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| Sadhana | Jul 23 2006, 06:49 PM Post #4 |
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I never played KH, so I only read the first two since I didn't know the characters in the other ones. The first one was sweet. A nice little reunion between Cloud and Aerith with a romantic kiss in the rain. You shouldn't dislike the second one just because it's been done before. I fanfic-ized Cloud's reaction to Aerith's death as well, and I was pretty proud of how it came out. Every writer brings a different flavor to what they're writing, so the same premise (i.e. Cloud's reaction to the death of Aerith) can come out completely unique among a dozen authors. I liked what you did with it. Short but poignant. And there's nothing wrong with that. I hope to read more by you in the future. :) |
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| BlackWind | Jul 24 2006, 11:09 PM Post #5 |
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:) Thankies! If anything I feel more confident about how I write now. -laughs- I need to write more Clorith..I never write it anymore...
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i loved them! there totally wicked B)

12:37 AM Jul 11